Waiting for the Wind Where There Is Wind

I personally think that writing about emotions is actually the same as making a movie. There must be enough twists and turns, and the rhythm of the plot must be paid attention to. The author has been digging into the pit where the two people do not communicate with each other, and has been tending to deliberately alienate them. This is a plot point at a low ebb. Before the big climax arrives, there should actually be some small climaxes that ease the relationship, so that the rhythm of the relationship will be better.

I specially bought a chapter and came back to comment. In reality, the protagonist and Xie Zhiyao are incomparable. They are as naughty as women. They ignore the greetings of their elders. This is either rude or lack of quality. No one owes you. If it weren't for the novel, it would be impossible to be together in reality. The protagonist has no charm at all. Apart from being richer than Xie Zhiyao, they can't be compared to anything.

This book was recommended to me by Qidian last Friday. I have been reading it intermittently and now I have updated it. The overall pace is slow and the reading is smooth. Except for some typos and individual word usage, there are some problems with sentence fragmentation. Of course, there is no criticism here. After all, there is no dedicated proofreader. Moreover, Chinese language is the greatest language of Blue Star (no refutation is accepted). In this language environment, our brains have long learned to automatically sort and correct errors, so it will not cause obstacles to reading. Next, I will talk about my feelings, which are just my personal feelings (a thousand readers will give me a thousand Hamlets). First, let's talk about the male protagonist who, in his ignorant years, has a dream and goes overseas to study and work alone, especially in a busy and hierarchical place like the kitchen. Newcomers will be cautious and nervous. It is inevitable to make mistakes while busy, and they will inevitably be scolded and punished. People in this kind of time As time passes, you will become more and more homesick, and you will feel more lonely mentally. It's okay in China. Although you come from all over the world, you have yellow skin and black hair, and speak the same language. You are not the only new person, and you are not the only one who gets scolded. In your free time, you can vent some of your negative emotions by making fun of each other. But it's different abroad. Depending on when the male protagonist goes abroad, Chinese people are discriminated against, and newcomers and foreigners will most likely not "communicate" with you. In order to avoid worrying my family, I would not call to report my grievances, and I would never report good news but not bad news. Over time, people will wrap themselves up and only show their emotions to people who are close to them and trust them. In their hearts, they attach great importance to and long for family and friendship. In reality, such people are good as colleagues, but it is difficult to make friends. Unless you can find the key to his heart, then such a person is definitely a rare confidant. The male protagonist was promoted by his teacher, firstly, because he was excellent, and secondly, because the old man had been to China and had a relationship. In fact, foreigners who think independently and have stayed in China for a period of time have a positive view and good impression of us. The book doesn't say whether the male protagonist has any emotional experience. I guess not, he's just a virgin in his early 30s! Those "weird" behaviors when getting along with the heroine make sense. Let's talk about the heroine. It's been less than half a year since it first aired, and I've watched the drama "The Wind" three times. Firstly, it's really good to watch, and secondly, it's all supported by trashy peers in the industry. Criminal investigation and anti-crime drama is also known as "Hurry". I was sad after watching the period drama "Long Time", and I will wait until I have forgotten it before reading it again. Hehe... I'm going too far. Back to the topic, Hongdou is the epitome of our ordinary working people on screen. She had a relationship, parents and sister who loved her, and good friend Nan Xing, so there was no shortage of family and friendship in her growth and daily life. Nan Xing passed away unexpectedly, which made her sad, but it made her even more confused. She didn't know what the meaning of working hard all these years was! Traveling with regret, guilt, longing for friends, and fulfilling the wishes of the two of them, the deeper level is Hongdou's subconscious process of finding himself. It is happiness, companionship, and realizing self-worth (learning and using it). The male protagonist's parents passed away due to a traffic accident, but he survived. This became a thorn in his heart. For him who valued family ties, this became a nightmare that he could not get out of. This is his burden and the key to his heart. Who can complete such an emotional replacement? I can't think of it? Let's leave it up to the author! Hongdou was different. No matter how good her relationship with Nan Xing was, they were just friends. She quickly came out of this relationship. She only missed Nan Xing in the dead of night when she felt lonely. From Hongdou's perspective, I would not fall in love with such a person - it's too tiring 🙂! You might even get injured! As the lobby manager of a five-star hotel, Hongdou has seen all kinds of people and should be sensible. She is a kind and warm-hearted girl. She can sympathize with the male protagonist and have some empathy, but she should not have love. This is where I read Ningba. After Damai Bar's birthday, the relationship between the two advanced too fast! Isn't it the process of being curious about each other, understanding each other, and then attracting each other? There is curiosity in the book, but understanding is not enough! Of course, the author said in the opening chapter that the script was originally set to be sad and sad, but the readers drew their swords, and of course I silently put my hand on the hilt of the sword at my waist. Fortunately, the author listened to his advice and just screw it! Spread a handful of dog food and it will soon be forgotten. A classic dialogue between Bodhi and Supreme Treasure in "Westward Journey": "Do you need a reason to love someone?" "Isn't it necessary?" "Is it necessary?" Additional sentence: I believe in collectivism, and I will accept and read tragic and sadistic scripts that sacrifice personal feelings and lives for the sake of great love and righteousness. But what about the love script between urban men and women? There can be twists and turns. If you dare to abuse the ending, just wait to be criticized 🤫

The portrayal of the male protagonist is really hard to imagine that he and Hongdou can be together. Is it because of the same grief? 🤫Bringing negative emotions to other people doesn't seem to be a sign of maturity. It doesn't match the persona. It seems that I have emotional ups and downs when I meet Hongdou, but in the first thirty chapters, I get along very little. I always insist that I can't fall in love with her, but I am self-motivated, self-motivated, and still with the literary youth, I can only forcefully create opportunities to solve various misunderstandings, just like a bloody TV series, and the conflict with Xie Zhiyao is a bit inexplicable to be honest, there is no specific expression, could it be that he has a crush on Hongdou? So you're not friendly to him? But you have only met and chatted a few times, and you don't know as much as Xie Zhiyao. You can't even ignore his greetings. You can't even maintain the dignity of an adult. Still in front of your elders and Hongdou, you can't figure it out.

There is a reason for poor grades. The author's protagonist is a cringy and hypocritical person. The actual experience of writing in 30 years of school. I dug a big hole and couldn't fill it in. It disgusted the readers. To be honest, after reading this book, I may not look for this type of book for a while. It is more hypocritical and adding dogs is not acceptable to everyone.

If the author went to a female channel to write it! The results are definitely much better than this! The writing is good, but I'm a bit crazy at heart (that's the kind of girl I am). I really should go to a female channel!

Xu Hongdou

The writing is good, but it's too convoluted and unfriendly to readers. The protagonist and the heroine are both virgins. The man and the woman have been working for free, and at the same time they say that their characters are rational and don't care about irrelevant things. Is it so difficult to watch a sweet love? ? ?

I'm going to complain for a moment. I used to really like a TV series called Love Apartment. When I was bored and depressed for six years in middle school, this TV series became one of the few happy memories I had in those six years. The love apartment and the residents in the play were my spiritual sustenance at that time and the life I could never hope for. When you are drowning in a sea of ​​boring questions, you will give up your struggle and imagine yourself being one of them. It took me a long time to find out about the plagiarism issues in this drama. I hated this kind of behavior and started to hate this drama. However, no matter how much I hated it, I could not deny the happiness that this drama brought me in my youth. For a long time, I was just like Zhang Wentao. When I watched Youfeng, I immediately fell in love with the show. If Love Apartment is my spiritual sustenance in adolescence, then Yunmiao Village can also be regarded as my spiritual sustenance as a working man. It's too beautiful to exist in this world. Whether it's the scenery, the architecture or the people inside, it's all very memorable. Indulge in the beauty here and indulge in the life here. After reading this, I was looking for related fanfics and found this place. At first, I thought the protagonist had stepped in, snatched Xu Hongdou away, and stayed here with her. But it is a bit different from what I thought. It seems that the protagonist came here with only one purpose, to take Xu Hongdou away. After reading it for a long time, I felt that the author may not have deep emotions for this non-existent Yunmiao Village like me. He has always been very clear-headed and tried to plan the rhythm of the book according to real life, and tried to break this illusion. The protagonist held Xu Hongdou's hand and really couldn't stay. In The Wind's Story, although Xie Zhiyao didn't have much room to perform due to the setting of his character, he looked like a sunny and cheerful boy who could giggle throughout the whole process. But he is like a spider, and the entire Yunmiao Village is his web. Xu Hongdou enters Yunmiao Village and cannot leave Xie Zhiyao no matter where she goes. In fact, she is destined to be noticed by Xie Zhiyao sooner or later, and she will gradually be unable to escape. Many people also complained about the protagonist's character and how he could win a beauty, because compared to Xie Zhiyao, his personality and away disadvantages are too great. If he continues to stay, the protagonist and Hongdou will definitely not be able to go far. So Hongdou and the protagonist left Yunmiao Village, got their certificates early, tied them up, and went to Shanghai together. However, there are too many and too many characters that are incorporated later, and these new supporting characters do not contribute much to the plot. The author can just write a few names by himself. On the contrary, it resulted in digging holes all the time. In addition, many previous holes were not filled. When the author wanted to end it, there was no way to end it. The ending was inexplicable, almost like an unfinished building. Career, emotions, and story development are all just beginning, and they suddenly end without developing at all.

In fact, the protagonist in your novel really has no advantage over Xie Zhiyao. In terms of dealing with people, the protagonist can't compare with Xie Zhiyao. In fact, Xu Hongdou doesn't care about the financial advantage. The only advantage is that the protagonist can support Xu Hongdou to do what he wants to do without any bottom line and the two people have similar experiences of losing friends. Otherwise, the protagonist would not be able to compete with Xie Zhiyao, let alone win.