I Founded Tantric Buddhism in London

I came here for fellow Tantric sects. I suspect it would be more engaging to play the game and record it in writing. In terms of character creation, the protagonist's personality is never established. It has always been written that he is murderous and has a sharp edge, but it is not reflected much in the relevant plot. He has always been said to be unsociable and like Dong, but sometimes he behaves very diplomatically. In terms of plot, the main line of establishing a religion has been delayed again and again. The plot of Esoteric Cult Simulator itself is bland enough, and the author also made many of the existing conflicts seem trivial. Logically speaking, it is okay to have a lower limit for the esoteric worldview, but what is needed to describe the worldview is writing. In terms of writing... It's a pity that ak's copywriting is so good that readers' expectations are too high. A little humble opinion. The leader in the game is a person with extremely strong desires, and it is his desire that makes him move forward firmly - "My ultimate goal. I must pay the price for it." All his anti-social and anti-human behaviors point to the road to ascension, that is, his desire to surpass ordinary people, a desire that is stronger, firmer, and grander than ordinary people. The road to ascension is inherently a path to perversion, so we might as well create a pervert who is extremely paranoid as the protagonist. Giving up worldly ethics and morals can sometimes give characters a unique personality. Come on, author. Looking forward to seeing you next time!

I couldn't stand the 50 chapters or so of the second volume, mainly because the depiction of the protagonist was a bit strange - a beastly lion, without a cage but behaved well. (If that rule, which is as funny as the Cult of Cups suppressing their appetite and then saying "no calories if you don't say it", can be considered a prison, then treat it as if I didn't say it) The protagonist's method of satisfying desires is also that hungry people either eat to fullness, or are stimulated by delicious food to eat more food, or are so disgusted that they can't eat. The protagonist gets hungry quickly and gets full quickly. He doesn't look like a lion, but like a puppy that is easily satisfied. The conflict between the protagonist and various forces is not too intense, and even the conflicts of interest are pitiful in my eyes. Conflict with the Anti-Suppression Bureau? But you are a subordinate of Holmes who is already half a member of the Anti-Suppression Bureau; a conflict with the first cult? If I bring out the Level 3 Blade Secret to tempt you, how should you respond? And the second Order of the Heart? Without this sect, the protagonist will return to Holmes' sight. Moreover, if you kill the sect, you will kill, and if the sect asks you to kill the enemies of the sect, you will also kill. As far as the protagonist is born, ah no, the Blade Cult, even the leader knows what the protagonist should do; other forces have not yet conflicted with the protagonist. I thought about a lot of words one night to explain why I obviously like Tantra but can't stand it anymore, but I typed out very few words. Let's see what happens next. If it doesn't suit my taste, I have to give up.

My evaluation is: Tasteless Although this book takes the Esoteric Cult Simulator as its core and foundation, and uses the Sherlock Holmes Detective Collection to build a rough framework, the added bonus of the Esoteric Cult Simulator lies in the color its text brings to the game. Although the straightforward novel text cannot bring the "flavor" of the Esoteric Cult, at least the dialogues of the characters should be closer to the European and American style? Even the translation accent is acceptable, but I didn't see this, which is a pity. Secondly, there are some problems caused by the foundation of the Tantric simulator itself: readers who have played the game may be happy to see familiar names, familiar books, and familiar characters appearing in the book, but for readers who have not been exposed to the game, this is really a bit confusing. Then there is the issue of esoteric religions. The sexual orientation and the great achievements of ascension are almost without exception tainted with a little bit of "evil nature". Many readers may retreat because of some discomfort. Generally speaking, I agree with the accuracy of the material selection, because in my opinion, adding Sherlock Holmes is a good decision, which is enough to arouse the familiarity of some readers and introduce the "esoteric religion". But it is a pity that I did not see the proper integration of the two materials, and the author's depiction of the character dialogue and scenes did not bring the ideal results, which I have to say is a pity.

The flame of a candle cannot illuminate the shadow it casts. Can a perceptive detective see into the hearts of those around him? "The detective's duty is to explore the truth of the incident, and the occult's duty is to explore the truth of the world." "We are really similar, aren't we? Miss Holmes." Watson, or rather, John H. Watson said so. "I Created the Esoteric Cult in London" [Sherlock Holmes] [The Esoteric Cult Simulator] Status of the work: Serialized, 170,000 words. The author is a lv1 writer of Yuewen Group - a teacher. {"TopicId":"886256127972278272","TopicName":"Weekend Book Recommendation"} "Miss Holmes...?" After struggling to say this sentence, Watson immediately understood his situation. He traveled to the fictional Victorian era, and his identity was a detective assistant, a military doctor, and Watson who could always find blind spots. Of course, in addition to daily detective work, as the leader of the Tantric Cult, he also has a more important responsibility, which is to make money to feed the Tantric Cult members who are waiting for food... Oh, no, I mean to successfully ascend. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}

I haven't watched it yet, so I'd like to ask if there is a detective savior segment.

Recommended by a friend, I had high expectations at first. However, after reading more than 30 chapters, I felt more and more regretful. When it comes to Sherlock Holmes, it relies on the details of the original Sherlock Holmes to maintain a certain level. When it comes to the Secret Cult Simulator, it relies on the Secret Cult Simulator game text to maintain a certain level. What about places where neither is involved? Typos, repeated exclamation points, redundant mental activities, and inappropriately detailed descriptions all revealed the timidity. Sherlock Holmes met the injured protagonist at the fire scene and asked him what happened. I have seen the story short and omitted, and then completed it through memories, but I have never seen the protagonist speak an 800-word narrative on the spot. Later, he used a minion to create a ton of rhetorical settings. Does a low-level person who has been teaching for half a year have this level of education? How could he know so much? Sherlock Holmes + Secret Cult Simulator, what a great idea! There is an entire literary work and an entire game to copy, what a great foundation! How come it is executed like this when it comes to the execution step? It's just like an idea that works hard enough to be published but ends up being published in rubbish. What a pity! What a pity!

I have never been exposed to the Tantric Cult Simulator, but I have read Chapter 39. To be honest, this book gave me a very strange feeling. The author wanted to write that the protagonist is a crazy and thrill-seeking fun person, but the portrayal does not look like it. Now the protagonist is always pursuing power and keeps fighting. At present, there is basically no description of the other people. They are all tool people, either stepping stones or providing information. Overall, the tone of the book is a bit like that of an online novel from 7 years ago. From beginning to end, the map is changed, and the characters are not created. The mystery of the Esoteric Cult is not well reflected. As of now, I feel that the author is eager to popularize the setting of the Esoteric Cult among readers, instead of telling a good story. But the setting only serves the story itself, don't let the story serve the setting.

What a secret religion? As a worker, I only have eyes for the company! Chairman!

The main character is a soldier (Blade). He became a private detective (Light) due to illness (Winter), and he has a friend who is a military doctor (Blade Heart). All he needed was to form the template of the Colonel and the Lionsmith.

In fact, to be honest, it doesn't matter if the protagonist wants to have a harem or something. After all, he has a good relationship with Mary Morstan, and now has a good relationship with Clovette/Emma (her sister). In the later stage, he may also meet my personal favorite psychic Carter. Carlo, not to mention the female version of Sherlock Holmes who has always had a good sense of the protagonist. Furthermore, the most unpleasant thing about online articles is also the lowest point is hypocrisy. The reason why most people like cool articles is because reality is very boring. I'm very unhappy already. If I write about it on the Internet and commit a little bit of literary youth, it will really make people lose their temper~ Another point is how to put it, the theme is to establish a secret sect and then become a saint, not to help the official destroy the secret sect organization. What's more, the company incident I don't think the handling of that part is particularly perfect. Theoretically speaking, our starts are careerist starts, that is, there are no owners. I admit that he used some dishonorable means to obtain the high position of GG Company. This can be clearly shown in his performance. He committed perjury, secretly showed him more profound secrets, and accepted them as believers and followers. As for the Anti-Suppression Bureau, through the spell of the Cup Cult, you can let high-ranking people (especially the older/sick ones) give you an official free ride. That is the connections/favors of the authorities. They will also join the sect for their own benefit. Although they will not be very pious, the benefits will make them make the right choice. Cure their diseases or extend their lives, and they will bring you unexpected gains. . As for the plot of the movie version of Sherlock Holmes, for example, we can find the villain in the first film, Lord Blackwood, who wants to rule the country with fear. This is also in line with the teachings of the blade (fighting/war/physical conflict/spiritual conflict), not to mention that there is another possibility of choosing Professor Moriarty, the moth god~ These two heavyweights are taken care of, and apart from other things, aren't the spells of these two secret cults rising steadily? Generally speaking, the protagonist and the title of the book say that he wants to establish a sect and become a saint, but what he does is a means of promotion. He feels a bit lacking in personality, lost his way, has no big goal, and always thinks about doing good things. What he does is indeed a good thing in the eyes of the people, but it is not beneficial to himself, or it is a good thing that does not maximize the benefits. In this world view, the saint is the first to die, so there is no need. I want to be able to become a saint, and in this hospital incident, the Heart Sect did do good things and treated many people. At least the public thinks so. As for the unfortunate patients who mysteriously disappeared, it can only be said to be the lesser of two evils. In the face of greater interests, there will always be some sacrifices. PS: The book is good, but the protagonist's behavior and dealings are always a bit literary. The world is not black and white, and has the protagonist ever thought about it? He himself is a practitioner of esoteric Buddhism, so he naturally stands on the other side of the world, or on the opposite side of the anti-suppression bureau. Sooner or later, there will be a duel, so why not be prepared in advance? Assimilate the people around you, transform their thinking, and let them know that the esoteric religion may not be a sinful thing. It is just a necessary sacrifice on the road of scientific research and practice, but it is not recognized by some people~

Esoteric Cult Simulator, start!

This was my past, but now I have transformed. These are my clothes and I lay them aside. This is my skin, but it is just a borrowed thing. It's my name and it's just an eyesore. This is the woodland, where we strangle the light. I was here, but no longer.

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The writing is quite good, but Sherlock's gender change is really bad. Wouldn't it be nice to write a macho man? It's really inconsistent. It is outrageous for a rich girl to be allowed to wander around as a private detective without her family telling her the truth. Moreover, those writers on detective techniques cannot imitate the real Sherlock. It would be great if Sherlock was not written as a macho man who fought side by side with the protagonist.

This book is hot in Thai pants 😭. Author, I order you to update quickly😭.

On the incense stick... I didn't expect that the book I was going to fatten would actually die. The reading experience of this book is average and suitable for reading in one sitting. There is no distinction between priority and priority. The most criticized branch of the Cowell Hotel has dozens of chapters. It does not contain too many settings, does not have intricate character relationships, and does not leave any major foreshadowing. The reading experience is like going to a restaurant and just finishing the appetizer, but the second plate is so large that I am already seventy full after finishing the meal, which affects the follow-up. The madness of the moth is well written, but it feels more like a calm and calculated light, or the kind of ancient novel that kills people and seizes treasures, taking advantage of others and not even having to drink the soup. Ps: I am a cloud player, and all my understanding of the Esoteric Cult comes from this novel. My rebuttal is that you are right. If the author is a new author, this result is considered acceptable. I will come back if a new book is published.

I read a lot of esoteric sect fans who gave the author some advice. He should design less personified descriptions of Si Chen, and make Si Chen's description more mysterious and obscure, and more regular. Otherwise, the character will be severely degraded in the later period, and people will get goosebumps when they wave their hands to crush Si Chen.

In fact, when I play Esoteric Cult, I will spend the rest of my life with Carter Carlo every time, and I feel that I still can't let go of the beauty of the mortal world~ After all, I feel that Carter Carlo's text particularly pokes my XP. Every time I walk under the moonlight, I say: I often dream of you taking me home, and this time I think it should be me taking you home~ PS: Carter Carlo, I will always find a way to make her a Seer, so radiant!

I am reminded of "Crown of the Crown". That book is also the setting of a esoteric cult simulator (with my own second setting). Unfortunately, the more I write, the more I deviate from the theme and I end up being a eunuch. That book ✍ wrote about red, color, communism, and equality. The author must not imitate him and write about red for his own pleasure.

Zhu Fei succeeded

Esoteric Cult Simulator

The author should use less silly sentences in Hong Kong comics, as it really affects the reading experience. Every time I see such a description, my experience drops by 50%.

I just started playing and I really don't understand it. Can anyone give me some advice on what to do next 🙂

Subsequent chapters may involve the appearance of many people from the esoteric sect. There are still too few believers based on the original work alone. We are specifically soliciting your opinions on the characters to appear. If you are interested, please leave the character information in this post. The author will try to arrange for them to appear. (Copy it for me quickly!) Character template: Name: 1 point of sex, non-distorted esoteric cultists have at least 2 points of any sex) Esoteric attributes: (Progress of esoteric practice, normally 2 points per level, with special items can increase by 1 point) General introduction: Character characteristics, experiences and pursuits For specific examples, please see the next floor:

It's just nonsense for a family, please don't take it personally. The world view of the Esoteric Cult is grand, mysterious and fascinating. In fact, the fan author already has a huge fortune at the beginning, and the next step is to realize it. Although it is a bit inappropriate, let's take Mystery as an example. The description of the information about God's Path and the Potion System in the early stage was very restrained. The fragments of information hidden in various events and conversations slowly revealed the complete truth of the 22 paths, which continued to expand until the later stages. This book is a waste of money in revealing the world view. Many secrets are only revealed through a straightforward system that can be called teaching by the anti-suppression bureau and the mystics. This kind of writing greatly destroys the reader's immersion in exploring the world. It can be said that half a wiki was slapped in the face. This leads to another problem, the plot conflict is not intense. Although events follow one after another, there is a lack of proper foreshadowing and climax rendering. It is picked up and dropped lightly. The world view is revealed too quickly and does not serve the character conflicts well. The reader only sees a blade-wielding mothman with a light, looking for opportunities to kill, kill, ask a few wiki articles, and then cycle. Finally, the polishing of the writing style also needs to be improved. The abuse of many idioms and excessive description of environmental psychology have a great impact on the rhythm of the article. Perhaps the author should focus on polishing the character's dialogue, laying out the foreshadowing of detailed descriptions and in-depth development of the world view, using full character creation to stick to the readers and build up strength for the climax at the end of the volume. For example, in the creation of Sherlock, using a lot of narration to describe her beauty and wisdom will only make the character hollow and flat, failing to show her ability to advance the plot in the twists and turns of the story, and not having a special enough perspective to show her personality in details. There is a lot of room for improvement, and I hope the author will continue to work hard.

It's rare to find a book on esoteric Buddhism. Is it actually cut?

Is this novel without a female protagonist?

I feel like the writing in this book is pretty good, but the later part is too stream-of-consciousness and I can't understand it.