Start: I Got the Saitama Template

Saitama is an invincible anime, don't write abuse stories using Saitama's name, otherwise it will be disgusting. It depends on what your opening is.

It's disgusting You've been visited by others and you haven't even told your relatives yet. You're hiding all kinds of things Do you think the other side won't trouble your relatives

In an episode of the anime OVA, Saitama mentioned when he obtained the armor when he still had hair. Exercise is only one aspect. The more important thing is that Saitama fought monsters on the verge of death every day for two and a half years. That's why he doesn't know how to become stronger.

It's so classic. It's another peddler who uses the title of an invincible article, but there are various restrictions on its development. It even directly restricted the title of the article because of lack of writing skills. What do you think readers want to see when they see the word Saitama? They want to see Saitama destroying everything with one punch. This is easy to figure out. I really don't know what the author is thinking. The female exchange student from the Western Eight Kingdoms disgusted the protagonist at every turn, and even wanted to kill the protagonist. The protagonist found the opportunity but did not dare to kill her. She only lost her legs, but the girl was unharmed after treatment. Appropriate suppression can make the burst of excitement even more exciting, but if you suppress it for a long time, the excitement will be just a little bit, which is very speechless in itself. What is even more speechless is that the template prompts that Saitama is a hero of justice and should not retaliate and fight back, so that the protagonist cannot become stronger within five days. What the hell is this? There are too many people who are trying to gain popularity and write stories with depth and content, but the writing style is not enough.

It's so disgusting to see people being punished for having thoughts of harming humans. . . . . Saitama was invincible before he started to be indifferent to all kinds of ugly faces of human beings. . . . Ordinary humans are as harmful to Saitama as the breeze, which is of no importance at all. Monsters may still have some motivation, although most of them are just like ants and can be killed in seconds. . . . . . . Saitama was so bored in the later period. . . Let's talk about Saitama's character. He can persist in such boring training for three years and is still very excited when meeting strong people. In fact, he is a very motivated person and is eager to fight. . . . . . . . There is really no one who has such a template set up to be the same as a human slave. You know, Saitama was originally set up as a person with no relatives or friends. That is, after becoming stronger, a few people have been kneeling and licking each other, so-called friends. . . Does Saitama make any friends on his own initiative? Maybe it means people with similar interests and hobbies, and being able to play together is considered taking the initiative?

Qiyu's path is invincible, so why bother with tricks to harm people's hearts?

When I saw the name Saitama, I came here for Invincible, but what the hell happened?

Having Saitama's template, but not Saitama's character, if you want to be low-key and pretend to be sexy, you must retaliate, and force the routine, this really doesn't work If you want me to give you a suggestion, since you want to use Saitama and the hero as the core of the novel, you must analyze Saitama's character in depth. If "One Punch Man" was just about being invincible, it wouldn't be so popular. The concept of helping others, not forgetting ordinary daily life, and the indifference that everything doesn't matter (except mosquitoes) are the keys to attracting the public. Your plot arrangement and characterization are really lacking. I hope you can continue to work hard.

Invincible template, waste flow start, flexible invincible flow Holy Mother Selling things like sheep's head, using the gimmick of invincibility to deceive readers It is understandable that the protagonist unlocks the template through scientific fitness exercises, However, in the first few chapters, he said that it is useless to go to school and needs to play jungle development, and a few chapters later he frankly announced that he will go to Hero High School? As soon as I confessed, I was caught by the Evolution House at night and killed if I couldn't catch it. 6 You can imagine the subsequent plot with your hands Regarding the template unlocking degree, it is one millionth at a time. I calculate that you complete one training in one minute, which is 525,600 minutes in a year. It will take nearly two years to complete it without eating, drinking, sleeping or pooping. Not to mention that the training part is poisoned. During training, it will return to the original state (without template bonus). Use your head to increase the unlock level? The article also said that the physique can be strengthened from the academy to the physical fitness of the American team. Let's not talk about whether it is possible, but it can create the skill of the American team. Does it matter whether it is a waste template? If ordinary people can be promoted to Captain America, then why do we need to trash the template? Okay, let me assume that there is a way to successfully improve the protagonist's physical fitness to the level of the American team. According to online data, it only takes 15 minutes to complete a training. If you complete 35,040 times in a year without eating, drinking, pooping or sleeping, it will take 29 years. What is the plan? At this pace, how many chapters will be written in 29 years? A replica of the evil king chasing his wife, right? Poison

There are nine eunuchs out of ten with invincible character templates, and one is unfinished. People keep writing about it. I don't know if it's a studio 😅

Poisonous, pure white text, flash speed. . . .

It's hard to watch, but after the ban for hurting people is raised, there's no need to watch anymore! It's not that Saitama can't hurt others, it's just that he doesn't want to hurt. Moreover, Saitama is invincible, but so far, I haven't seen any of it.

I chose to quit when I saw that hurting people was prohibited from promotion.

Author, don't use so many bells and whistles when writing this novel. Don't engage in the same old set of tricks. You can update a few more pictures and I'll take a look. If it works, I'll take a look.

I gave up after seeing this, but I would like to give the author some suggestions. I hope that the book will become better and better in the future. Firstly, the most taboo thing about all cool articles is that it is good for a hero to protect others, but he will be punished if he attacks someone who has murderous intentions towards him. It is easy to lose fans if he writes like this. Secondly, it is understandable to create conflicts and advance the plot, but letting the stick go to the country to show off his power and make nonsense. Such a plot will be offensive to people when written, and it is also easy to lose fans. You may Readers will say that I have substituted into modern society, but your various messages are to let others substitute into the earth. Don't be too arrogant and stand-up. It's almost the same if you replace the stick with Country M; thirdly, there are so many talent templates, but the villains in the plot basically revolve around one punch, including monsters, Evolution House, etc. This makes other templates useless, and the viewing pleasure is also greatly reduced.

I haven't watched much, but after reading it, I can only describe it as "disgusting". You have to be punished for killing someone intentionally, and you have to be punished if you fight back. The top leadership is still a bunch of scumbags. There is no one in China who has a strong family. I'm being pushed to the ground and hammered. I really don't know why I can still have fun.

When I was a child, I liked heroes, but when I grew up, I liked villains, because when I grew up, I realized that only by doing better than the bastards in society can you win and win the respect of others.

It doesn't quite fit with Saitama's character design. Generally speaking, it can be seen that it is to suppress growth and prevent the invincibility from being so fast, and the problem is not handled well enough. The description of the front and rear combat power is a mess, with 60 tons of punching power and subsonic sprint. In the eyes of the melon-eaters, it is considered a D-level weapon. According to this standard, Uchiha Itachi is said to be C-level according to the template. Not to mention who is superior and who is inferior, they are at least on the same level, right?

I haven't read it yet, but the comments seem to be abusive? Friends who have read it can tell me whether the main text is abusive...

Author, can you write? If you don't know how to write, you should go to the factory early to make screws. Look at what rubbish you wrote.