Zonghengzhitian Starts from the Founding of Xiaomi

By the way, shouldn't a person who has traveled through time be helpless? It should be a parallel world if he has family. Moreover, you are writing about the heavens. If the protagonist has to travel to other worlds, you can't write about family members in other worlds as well. If you have a family in this world around this time, will you also have a family in your other world around this time on Earth? It's a bit strange to have a family all of a sudden.

It is recommended that the author first write a self-congratulatory article. One day when traveling in Jerusalem, he picked up a luminous stone. When he returned home, he discovered that it was the god of Jesus. Then, while others were hiding from the epidemic at home, you inherited the god's throne and your whole family entered your kingdom of god to enjoy the life of eternal life and assistant god. Then you yourself pretended to be an almighty god in the city.

The rhythm is good. Once you get the investment, you can start working directly and then start the industry. The part about returning home is rather wordy and the momentum has not picked up. The novel is afraid of such a rhythm. It is okay at the beginning, but if it goes down, it will be very troublesome. It is originally about Tang Zichen. I should follow this line first, and then hand over the mobile phone part, and then expand the impact of financial investment. The pace is too fast, and many things are not written in place.

Isn't it good to write about an orphan? You have to let people see the ruins of your family. Will you become a fairy and rise to great heights in the future? How will it help the plot? Does the protagonist appear to be affectionate and righteous?

The stand-alone game is terrible. Is anyone here to test the poison? (／_＼)Big grudge

What is nine turns without regrets!

I really never thought about marketing before, but today I suddenly recommended several Xiaomi novels, such as "The Light of Science and Technology", several in a row. I searched for Xiaomi and then Huawei. Huawei's products are all about vocational training, and 99% of people who read novels don't know how to read them Looking at this kind of novel, Xiaomi's densely packed rebirth science and technology novels, I am very curious. I remember that there were not so many novels about Xiaomi in the past. I clicked on them one by one to look at the release date. Many of them were published in 24 years, and there are so many this year. Can I get extra fees for writing novels about Xiaomi now? Everyone says Huawei is awesome, but why do I think Xiaomi is awesome? Most middle school and high school students like to read novels at that time. When a person is a teenager, he instills the concept of Xiaomi in you for a long time, which can subtly affect a person's future cognition. I am really convinced by this Xiaomi person. Who came up with this method? Really scared

The Romance of Dragon and Snake is very exciting but not popular. First write a more popular copy to attract some people and then survive.