You Call This Proper Cardmaking?

#New Book Trial Reading# Rating: Liangcao- Recommendation: As a card player, I prefer to read various card battle-type books, but this type of book is relatively niche and not many people write it, so I was very excited to see the author's book. Speaking of it, the author's rhythm is great, which attracted me to keep reading. It can also be seen that the author has done a good job. He has borrowed from the two authors Ling Luo and Name Occupied, but he has written his own new ideas. From the current point of view, the cool points exist in three aspects. The first is the character's brainstorming and self-strategy about the protagonist's mystery and power; the second is the admiration of other characters for the protagonist's card-making ability; the third is the display of the effects of various strange and inhuman cards created by the protagonist. But I think there are two parts that are not particularly well written. The first one is that the system has no sense of existence, and there is no sense of excitement about upgrading. The main plot is mainly about characters and jokes, but the character design is relatively average, and it is not as interesting as Lingluo. The second is that the cards are all original cards. More words are needed to describe the effects of the cards. The players lack a sense of immersion. I feel that more Hearthstone and Yu-Gi-Oh's Underworld cards can be added in the later stage.

I think the author doesn't even know what he is writing. The context is contradictory. Monsters are fighting at the door of the house, but there are so many people eating melons leisurely? One star card can kill five, six, seven or eight star monsters? What was written about that was so poisonous? !

If you don't write emotional scenes, it's easy to talk about anything. . . .

Just look at the introduction and you will know that there is a suspicion of bragging. Isn't it serious about making cards? Is it just a guess? You can just make up your own mind.

It looks like it has a lot of ideas, but it actually has no creativity, or in other words, this creativity is worthless.

It's better not to have a female protagonist, let's make that Chen Yue'e and Long Jianming a couple

I feel like I've seen something similar somewhere. . .

I was shocked. I thought Xing Sheng was playing a trumpet.

What's going on?

When you look at the introduction, you don't want to look at the type of catalog.