I'm a Korean Peninsula Tycoon

This is toxic. The male protagonist tries to manipulate the daughter of a wealthy family by virtue of his status as a husband, and even manages to rape her within a marriage where there is no real affection. I don't see what's so good about it. If he actually does this, he'll be left with nothing.

This is utterly brainless. You wrote the characters in a way that was already ridiculous, but then suddenly a gangster appears and threatens the protagonist. Even though the protagonist is just a son-in-law, he is still a hunter. You, a gangster, are forcibly coercing him. Do you really think you're the boss of the world? They even made the protagonist disappear.

If this were reality, the protagonist would have been reincarnated eight times over by now.

Does the author have some misunderstanding about organized crime? Aside from South America, which gangs dare to mess with wealthy and powerful families? Not to mention Japan and South Korea, where gangs are just dogs belonging to chaebols.

That gang leader was truly disgusting; there were so many illogical points. He even went so far as to secretly film people in a VIP room and threaten them—that's incredibly audacious! How can someone so easily exposed, someone who would destroy everything if their story were released, actually threaten others? And the protagonist is portrayed as so brainless!

This is so naive; they clearly know absolutely nothing about the Korean Peninsula and haven't done any research.

Damn it, what kind of woman is this new one? She's beating up the protagonist and threatening him. Doesn't she want revenge, or is she supposed to cooperate? If she cooperates, this book is ruined. The point of this book is to let the protagonist do whatever he wants; it's disgusting if he gets taken advantage of and then acts like a lapdog.

This is utter nonsense. Who does the protagonist think he is, trying to outmaneuver Samsung?

Write more about idols and actors! Less original content, preferably Korean entertainment, and no homophones allowed. I'll follow and subscribe to your posts. Hope it gets better and better!

There's no need for Korean entertainment to use homophones.