Game of Thrones: Magic Lord

A really rubbish Game of Thrones novel

The setting in the first chapter is disgusting to the readers. A coward who became self-defeating because of telecommunications fraud traveled to a new world and worked hard to survive in a harsher environment. Who would still travel if he had 10% of the courage before traveling? What does the protagonist draw? Just like the people in the past who pooped without paper...

In 2055, after working for three years, a liberal arts graduate from Poujie received a notice from the company: Your department has no value due to the major update of gpt AI and the explosive enhancement of text capabilities. Therefore, it was approved by the board of directors and the entire department was optimized. From this point on, you were fired. For compensation n+1, please log in to the open big data AI interface to confirm. Arts majors: If I had known I would major in science, how would I get along next? Why? Brother what are you doing? The roof is dangerous... Science student: Don't stop me... All the codes in our department have been written for AI. Except for the top design, we have all been laid off... I am older and have a lot of loans. This is going to kill me~ Okay, I will die for you to see! ! ! Arts student: This can't be like this, I'm going to find the general manager~ There is justice in this world! In the office, a liberal arts student discovered the body of the general manager. Suicide note: The general meeting of shareholders decided to use virtual intelligent managers to operate the company to optimize human errors and labor conflicts~ I can't save the shares in my hand, and I will be fired tomorrow... I can't even afford the car with just a little dividend every year, and the problems in the past few years will also be exposed~ Instead of being sent to justice tomorrow, it is better to die now...

The description of the mist... After reading the comment area, I found that the author is quite confident. Others pointed out the problems, and the author replied that he was sorry, but he would not change it. If you say it is your own work and others are not qualified to comment, then why did you post it? Are you really enjoying yourself?

The protagonists all like to pursue mystery and are obsessed with magic, and the author focuses on depicting the power system and magic system of the world view. You are abandoning the original and chasing the last. You are like Jianghu who writes martial arts novels but does not write about grudges and grudges. You are obsessed with letting the protagonist practice martial arts and write down detailed training methods and settings of martial arts secrets all day long. No matter how well you write the settings of martial arts secrets, how can someone else write well in the category of fantasy fairy tales? Is it comparable? It's incomparable. When you write about magic in Game of Thrones, can someone write about Hogwarts and DND-like magic? Wizards and wizards are interesting magic. Isn't the upper limit of others writing about researching magic much higher than yours? In Game of Thrones novels, you should write about wars, strategies, and armies. Once again, you should write about beauties, love, and adventures. If you don't write about these, who will? Even game system writers know the basics of killing monsters, upgrading and changing maps, and writing game plots is also the right way to go. But have you ever seen any game writers become popular by writing about how the protagonist studies the personal panel, game skill data and career hidden settings? No, it will only make readers dislike your word count. Leave the original work of Game of Thrones there, everyone has seen it, and everyone knows the setting of the original work. Everyone is not here to see your second creation of the setting, but everyone is here to see you promote the development of the plot. No matter how many settings you write, can you still force the original work to become an official setting?

Others are fighting for hegemony, and you are trying to make soy sauce! Forget about being soy sauce, you can become invisible at every turn. What we want to watch is the pig's feet, not the plot! Otherwise, it's better to binge-watch the show!

The poison has been tested. This is an explanatory text, not a novel, and the explanatory text also explains something unclear!

Author, do you know where your biggest weakness is in your writing? To be honest, your writing is already above the standard, at least it won't be held back by your writing, but your plot arrangement is too poor. The article is written for the readers. You will not feel bored when writing these metaphors, because you can understand every metaphor from a God's perspective, but readers cannot. What readers dislike most is the Riddler. You can bury a few foreshadowings in small paragraphs without any harm, but the whole paragraph or even the whole chapter is full of inexplicable things. Even these metaphors will have to wait a long, long time to be revealed. Who do you think has such patience? Your biggest problem is that like many novice authors, the things you write are for yourself and to please yourself, rather than for readers. Only when you overcome this can you have hope of becoming a god.

The strangest thing about this book is that there was no investigation at the beginning when the whole family was killed. The Citadel killed them. But who was the Citadel's tentacle in the castle and who carried it out? The maester is the super suspect. You still use it? You also told him about magic and asked him to record it and then plagiarize it in the academy? Poisonous

Your novel ideas are good, but they are really not suitable for writing novels. If it's just for fun, just pretend I didn't say anything. Structure, polish, weight, my dear, you can't tell the difference at all. Machiavellian tactics, wars, and chaos in the depths of rule. You can read more other novels and read some war analysis to strengthen it. This situation is such a waste of good ideas. Otherwise, if you dare not say lv4 or lv5 in your four books, you should at least reach lv3.

I don't know what the author is writing, I can't understand it, and I don't want to read it! There is no plot, I just kept reading about science and dreaming. I don't know what significance these have to the book. After reading more than ten chapters, it seems that nothing has been written. It's inexplicable to watch! Can't watch.

In fact, it would be enough to revise the background introduction of the protagonist in the first chapter. Death due to telecommunications fraud is really difficult for readers to feel immersed in. It would be better to replace it with accidents such as electric leakage, dump truck, and falling into the water. Being an orphan or a social animal is not a big deal and everyone can generally understand it.

I hope the author can make more updates, instead of becoming shorter and shorter like the first two Game of Thrones fics.

Unpopular plus unpopular. Can you write something interesting and attractive to readers? It will be useless if the readers are unhappy 😰 The great thing about things like Cthulhu is never the subject matter, but the strength of the author himself. If someone who is not famous writes like this, he will only become the founder of this genre.😐

After reading more than a dozen chapters, it's a bit difficult to read. I feel that the writing is very messy. The parts related to magic are a bit foggy. I always want to rely on Crusoe's style. Or maybe it's different from the magic I expected. I look forward to the author's next book.

You are the first one to commit suicide after being scammed. Let me tell you what kind of people the scammers deceive. The scammers will publish information that looks extremely false. Normal people will leave at this time, but people with insufficient IQ will believe it! After the screening is completed, the scammers can deceive you as they please! But you were deceived and committed suicide instead of calling the police. You are really a talent.

For those who don't know, you think Game of Thrones is a world of high magic.

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The writing is really messy. Did the author just write whatever came to his mind? Don't you even have an outline?

I am a good person

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When I first started the book, I said not to open too big bugs, but I didn't expect that I would still write it like this. The good writing in Game of Thrones is basically about hegemony, emphasizing military and strategy. Writing too much about magic and secondary backgrounds is an unpleasant behavior. Since I am a new author and have been writing fan fiction, I feel it is more appropriate to adapt it while respecting the original work.

Okay, it's quite interesting

Chao Yao, an office worker, became the leader in the world. A group of big men surrounded him and shouted: Brother, Baozheng, good brother! Three women surrounded him and shouted: Uncle, Oppa, Oni-chan. Such a complicated title Where have I been reborn? Why not call the boss, red stick, the leader? Am I, Chao Yu, not powerful enough? Chao Yan raised his eyes and looked around, he saw some people watching the excitement around him, but he looked sternly, holding a big knife, staring straight ahead at the execution ground shouted loudly: Let my brother Hei Songjiang go, otherwise he will kill all the men and sell the women into the kiln... Wait a minute, is this a line that I, a positive person, should say? I saw A group of snake charmers on the east side of the execution ground pulled out sharp knives A group of medicine sellers on the west side of the execution ground pulled out guns and sticks A group of porters on the south side of the execution ground took turns raising poles A group on the north side of the execution ground The merchant pushing the cart took out a small gong from his arms Everyone started to move together On the upper floor of the tea house at the intersection, a big black man in the shape of a tiger, naked, holding two axes in his hands, roared and jumped from the air. He chopped down the two executioners, carried Song Jiang on his back, and left. Killing officers and soldiers along the way, killing soldiers at sight, and beheading the common people when they see them... "If you don't do the common people's business, just hurt people!" The big black man didn't listen to the call, one by one with an ax, and beheaded the leader of the platoon "Ah!" Chao Yu, who was blocking the road, was also chopped to the ground. --------------------------------- Chao Yao yelled and sat up from the bed, his head covered with cold sweat, "No, am I not the protagonist?" ... Dear readers, come to "Water Margin of Destiny" to read and give some advice! ... I am occupying valuable space to promote it, and wish the author more than 10,000 updates every day, thank you.

Found a cheating book, Black Blood and Kingship, not bad🤫

I have read almost all of the good Game of Thrones novels recently, including The Great Wall and The Magic Mountain.