Game of Thrones Heroes Invincibility System

Explosive soldiers in a low-demon world? In the TV series version, in the end, it was just close to being possessed by a demon. The h series is a standard high magic world. This means that in the later stage, or even in the mid-term, the book will almost certainly collapse - the power system gap is too big, and all contradictions and strategies will be of little use (I used to play, the dragons in the late stage had dozens of units, but there were only a few dragons in the entire Game of Thrones? How effective is it? I have 50 dragons, still need to fight? Really flying dragons ride in the face). Without these, the ending would be to memorize data and the characters would be homogeneous. The difficulty of writing has been reduced, but the level has also dropped off a cliff, to the point where one pack of cigarettes a month may not be enough. If I have this time to code, I can get more from express delivery. Don't explode the troops, from the militiamen to the angels, don't explode, so that you can continue writing. Soldiers can be summoned or transformed, but there are huge restrictions and they must be cut to the bottom from the beginning. The empty-handed protagonist cannot use them for anything. In the later stage, if the protagonist controls single-digit angels and other ultimate soldiers, he can stand up to the sky. He can be invincible in a small area, but in a big battle, he must be defeated by two fists and four hands. H series of spells also need to be reduced. Any large-scale strategic spells must be at the right time and place, and they must be prepared for a few days to meet various harsh conditions before they can be released. Normally, the violent mage's dry tofu is enough. In this way, the characters in the original plot can fully interact with the protagonist, and their and the protagonist's machinations and IQ can be reflected, and the characteristics of the game can be revealed.

This book can only be said to be very coherent, but there is nothing outstanding about it. I will briefly discuss the minor problems found for the author to learn from. 1. The plot is a bit slow, and resources seem to be impossible to collect directly. There are some obvious traces of suppressing the protagonist here. It is recommended to make a patch to directly convert the materials in Game of Thrones into the system. For example, make an achievement so that the golden dragon can be directly exchanged for gold, and the energy of the White Walkers is directly converted into crystals, turning them into mobile resources. This can better demonstrate the superior advantage of the protagonist as a time traveler. 2. The problem with the army is that the unit strength is too weak, the system soldiers are too few and they are not upgraded. After such a long time of development, there are still so few soldiers, most of whom are aborigines, and their quality is still low. The protagonist's army is like a joke. It has to rush to recruit 10,000 or 20,000 troops, and then it is time to upgrade. There must be a legion and a fleet, otherwise it will not even have top-level troops. 3. System problems. A time traveler should look like a time traveler and should always be at the top. However, you suppress the protagonist too much. The power of the system is no better than that of an artificial god, but it can still be interfered with. It is just like a freeloader. The system asks you to assimilate to the lower world, not the one who is assimilated. Before it is too late, hurry up and patch it to absorb energy and strengthen it. 4. Developmental problems. The protagonist seems to have a serious illness and is focused on magic. Doesn't he have the resources to do it? Wouldn't it be nice to first grow your power and then assimilate him? I have been working all day long on two small towns that are about to be suppressed into two dimensions. The first condition for reviving magic is to unify the world. Without soldiers and territory, there will be nothing. If you need anything, grab it. Once you finish grabbing, occupy and assimilate, won't it be over? No matter how powerful the magic is, it's hard to fight a White Walker. Others have the power and magic to be stronger than others. It's completely different for you to make people who despise magic suffer. 5. Dialogue questions. The dialogue lies in the control and description of the details and the character's demeanor. Try to eliminate the lower tone of voice such as "I'm sorry!" And replace it with a tougher or more normal command tone such as "Go as you please" and "Do as you want". When responding, subordinates can appropriately shorten the sentences to "yes" or "obey", etc. There are no other problems, the logic is very rigorous, and it can be regarded as a rare good Game of Thrones book that has persisted to this day. All problems can be corrected in future plots, don't give up! Come on 😊!

You can refer to the Game of Thrones fandom who entered the palace in more than ten chapters. Game of Thrones: Order of War is very useful for reference. The development of the protagonist (not jumping, a bit tricky but okay), the war scenes (not bad), the world situation (the struggle for power like Game of Thrones is written) are all very interesting, and it is about entering the palace.

In fact, in a sense, if you don't have money and manpower, you can build more Japanese castles, which are not castle towers. The castle towers only appeared at the end of the Warring States Period. You can build some Japanese mountain castles or flat mountain castles during the Warring States Period. Japan's fortifications (casting fortifications) are military buildings that even the Ming army found troublesome during the Wanli Period.

Speechless, it's simply poisonous. It's okay to give the empire you conquered to others, or to give the empire you conquered to your children. What's the point of giving the empire to others?

I can't understand the system text of the violent soldiers. Why is the protagonist always wandering around? Develop well in the early stage and push it later. Otherwise, why do we need a system of violent soldiers?

After reading more than 30 chapters, I also looked at the back table of contents. They are all so systematic and there are all kinds of conspiracy theories, and they are violently promoted. The system is constantly being cut if the world's laws don't comply with it. What is this kind of system designed to do?

This book has a high opening and a low ending, and the plot is fascinating. The influence of various world laws is forcibly weakened. It's okay for your own castle to be penetrated two or three times. The plot of torturing and killing the little girl was written in such detail, which aroused the readers' emotions, but was let go in the end because of profit? If you are a new author, you must remember that either you should not write so miserable, or the final result will make readers happy! We don't want to feel unhappy when we read.

Once enfeoffment is implemented, it will be difficult to centralize power! Once people realize their right to autonomy, they will not be willing to be restricted by others.

I thought I was crushing him all the way, but I didn't expect to pretend to be a grandson. As a lord, you have to take action yourself if something happens...

After reading about thirty chapters, it feels very awkward... The protagonist is attacked by the enemy, spies are sent to kill the citizens, the castle is burned, and assassinations are carried out. There is no counterattack at all, and he endures it. And winning the battle against the opposing invaders is not as satisfying as writing... You can just send griffins over and throw wildfire at the enemy's castle from the sky, and you will be considered as taking revenge on the enemy. A protagonist has no temper at all... To be honest, Ah Q's True Story is more enjoyable than you...

The heroines of Game of Thrones are all original, Heroes has been weakened like a dog

I read a hundred chapters, and I felt it was worse than a pure white novel about fighting monsters and upgrading, because this novel has nothing, no excitement, no vivid characters, and no heroic plot. There are two main problems, very fatal problems. First, when you build a hero invincibility system, you need to write about the differences between the arms in your system and the arms in the franchise, and what impact it will have on the world if you beat others to your advantage. I didn't see much of it in the entire article, or it wasn't cool enough. Second, when writing about Game of Thrones, you must always write about the characteristics of Game of Thrones. I felt like the protagonist was interacting with a bunch of dead people. The plot is still the old-fashioned assembly line of fighting the White Walkers first and then fighting the South. I feel like I have no expectations for what you want to write next. In the first hundred chapters, the protagonist gathered a bunch of subordinates and attacked a lot of soldiers. Then the plot started, and then it disappeared, with no core. The first hundred chapters, I don't know what to read

Just by looking at your task list, I can tell you that it's not possible. You're just another person trying to sell someone else's meat.

Now that you have unlocked it, it's more fun to write. Isn't the h series a horizontal push? It's really frustrating to write. There are so many chapters without the ultimate soldier. There are not many low-level soldiers. It's really boring to write about the routines of all magic series.

What kind of children's fairy tale is it? It's hard to win, but you don't want so much free labor, and let it all go? I'm drunk (ᇂ_ᇂ|||)

It's too lame, it's not as good as the horse-and-blade system next door. There is also a violent force system that reduces the strength of the world of Ashan. After all, the gryphons are invincible if they have an air force.

The plot and characters are very fragmented, and the readers have no sense of involvement. The storytelling is like running water, without a trace of charm. If you are not a fan of Heroes of Invincible or Game of Thrones, for other audiences, it is just pesticide. Summoning a gryphon in the front has no effect at all. Spending gold coins to evolve a unicorn later has no use but gold. I don't know how I can still write it.

To be honest, if you, the author, are careless about your works, don't expect readers to follow them and subscribe. . . Practice it well and get serious about it. Your attitude is so stupid that it will take you 20 chapters to get started.

Basically, those who write about Game of Thrones are all eunuchs. Oh no, almost all of them are eunuchs. I feel like this one is no exception.

Although I am a prostitute for free, don't show off your IQ. It's no problem to directly push the strength of the army, but in the end, it has to show off its IQ

Why write a Game of Thrones fanfic when writing about the entire game and creating so many characters and making so many bells and whistles? Wouldn't it be nice to make an original background? Together with the author of the novel, he doesn't understand anything.

The dimensionality reduction has completely hit, and it is still jumping around in the Arryn Valley in the north. Behind it are Harrenhal, Riverrun, and the area around Casterly Rock on Lannister Island in the west, Dragonstone, the Blackwater River, King's Landing, Highgarden in the Reach, and the Arbor in the Iron Islands. And the Dornish March Mountains and Dorne. Not to mention the continent of Essos, according to your pace, there will be many abandoned adventures interspersed with the continent of Westeros, which will require thousands of chapters, as well as the White Walkers in the Far North. I'm convinced

Why accept a child of the forest as the heroine? . . . . To be honest, a black elf is quite disgusting.

Name: Mu Jin'er Race: Medium Age: 18 Pedage: Succubus Inheritance: Successor of Succubus Queen Jezebeth Talent: Talent Succubus Queen can easily recruit succubus troops and increase the attack power of succubus troops Skills: Master all destruction and dark magic Treasure: Skill Pendant Destroy the magic book Dark Magic Book Weapon: Three-headed Fire Snake Whip, this weapon can be transformed into a three-headed fire snake to attack the enemy Introduction: The male protagonist was a girl next door in the village when he was a boy. After the death of the earth consciousness, he obtained the inheritance and body of the Succubus Queen Jezebeth. He wanted to live and become the male protagonist's subordinate Alignment: Chaos and Lawful Character: Abdominal Black Image: Red hair with dragon horns on it, a royal sister wearing women's armor with dragon wings on her real back and holding a fire snake whip {"NickName":"Book Friends 20211115202254521","UserId":375300851}

The magic in Invincible Heroes is a large-scale magic, not a single target output. For example: Magic Arrow, using it will kill more than one enemy.

The protagonist of this book is a Madonna type, and is a bit timid and afraid of things. She doesn't like it and has withdrawn.

After reading the comments, wouldn't it be cool to have a system? Why do I feel so depressed when I look at it?

The impression is very bad, but the idea is good

I like the third hero the most. The only thing I don't like is that the hero cannot dismount and kill people. My favorite talent is the earth element. You all know that when I return to the city, only handcuffs can satisfy me as a holy object.