Super God: Kill Sumari at the Beginning

I don't want to see it anymore, another one is eaten to death by an angel. . Can you have some backbone?

If He Xi wants to kill Sumary, will it be the protagonist's turn to take action? If you want to kneel down and lick He Xi, it's okay to be jealous of Su Mary, but please don't be hypocritical.

Travel to 30,000 years ago to lick an angel 😰😰😰

How can I put it this way? The protagonist has no IQ at all. He is just a stupid idiot. The most uncomfortable thing is that he agreed to be a coward. After meeting He Xi, he was clearly set up to run away. Why did he still lick others? He was slapped with a sword but still smiled playfully.

That eye-catching thing is so fucking disgusting

What is the reason? I can't even read Qidian's book. Is it really paraquat in the industry?

That man doesn't want to be like Hua Ye and Su Mary. You, a normal man, have to kneel down and lick the female angel or the dog.

Being stabbed in the back by He Xi twice, possessing the most powerful celestial computer in the known universe, and possessing the knowledge of Sumary, what can they do to you by forcefully invading Deno-3? What can you do if you forcefully invade the Tiandao Tower? What if you forcefully invade the three major god-making projects? When the time comes to possess the power to fight against the void and kill gods, what can they do to you if the light of the sun rises again? 'As long as you can endure the loneliness of the known universe, you can't hack into that celestial-level computer? What knowledge do you need that you cannot have? What weapon do you want that you can't steal? Just want to be a bitch?

I've also finished reading it, and it's not a good article if I don't talk much about the issues. Other great masters have also said it. As for Angel Yan's problem, it can be said to be a huge failure in it. Angel Yan feels to me like a dead-faced one who sticks to me, and he is still a m-type, and he also asks the protagonist to help create opportunities. This is too much. If you don't want to write about Yan, you can just block him for hundreds of years and not come out. After Yan is imprisoned, he will feel much better. As a master said in the comment area, I forgot a few episodes of the anime. Anyway, she said it herself in the episode where Yan first swore an oath. At that time, she did not know that she could be resurrected. The reason why she chose Ge Xiaolun was because she had no choice, so she chose one at random. She is a pure warrior. She will do whatever Keisha says and there is no choice. Since Pipixi asked the protagonist to be one of the angels in the future, Yan's approach was too much at the beginning. Anyway, I personally delete the book every time I think of this and it makes me sick. Besides, Ge Xiaolun's performance at the beginning would make it impossible for a blind angel to fall in love with him. He is lustful, cowardly, unresponsive, and a deserter. It can be said that the description of Ge Xiaolun at the beginning is completely negative. However, the way you wrote it seems that he must not marry him and you have to fight because the protagonist did not take good care of him. It is a bit too slutty. Please pay attention to this. There's nothing wrong with this book except Yan Tai's drama. Well, that's it.

Don't give girls away. Since the angel is yours, don't give her away again.

After reading the introduction, I knew that the protagonist traveled from modern times to 30,000 years ago and came back again. This routine is too old and has nothing new.

Seeing the king level as soon as you arrive is like rushing to the street. Think about it carefully, the way of expression in words is not as good as images. Without foreshadowing, there would be no vivid image.

Let's go read Super God's I Am the King of Heaven first and then write about it.

Can't you make some progress in writing novels? It feels worse than the previous one

Anyone? If the plot or anything is not well written, please give me some suggestions.

A mess of dog-licking stories with no plot and no writing style. Writing a diary is better than this

I have finished watching it. After all, I have no say if I haven't finished watching it. First, the character design is very inadequate. The first is Angel Yan. At this time, Yan didn't like the power of the galaxy that much, and she didn't know that she would be a match. It was Kesha's words in the original anime that made her start to test and observe. Moreover, Yan actually looked down on Ge Xiaolun's loser side at the beginning, but due to Kesha's order, she would observe carefully. And you wrote it like this, as if they had known each other for a long time and had been inspecting it for a long time. Have we never seen anime? There is nothing wrong with joining the angel tribe. There are a lot of rich women who give almost nothing to anyone they value. Turn into a love brain. But looking at what you wrote, it's really, really out of character. Second, Hexi, you really want to write about Pipixi's skinny side, but it always falls short. Third, Kesha, even if there is a slight sense of familiarity with her whose memory is sealed, it is not so easy to tease her. Even if she is wearing Hexi's vest, she will not accept it for a while. I should have known that angels are very proud. The character collapsed. Finally. Your writing was barely adequate at the beginning, but later on you obviously lost your composure and your writing was a bit unsatisfactory. Many times it is written in a self-exciting way. Don't be unhappy to hear it, if one or two people scold you, maybe it's because of them, but it's your book review section. Tsk tsk. All insults. You really have to find the reason yourself!

I haven't read it either. Anyway, I think you are a good friend if you write Super God.