Takeji

It's still possible, but I don't recommend it. Don't just dream about it all the time. Also, this baby can see the future. In fact, this kind of setting is meaningless in this kind of high martial arts world. The protagonist's ancestors must have also seen some scenes in the future, and they are not destroyed in the same way. Maybe I don't like to watch this kind of knowing the future and then changing it, and there must be many kinds of scenes in the future, not just yours!

It takes a lot of time to build a powerful country from scratch. The author's plot and the protagonist's strength change on a daily basis, which is not suitable for establishing power.

It's too slow to still be in the same realm after more than 110 chapters. I always feel that the hundreds of thousands of years of inheritance from the merchant aristocracy is not as profound as the protagonist's twenty years of practice. The protagonists all know how powerful the Perfection Realm is, but don't those practitioners from the great merchants and aristocrats know that? The feeling you describe is that no cultivator in the world knows as much as the protagonist, and everyone else is a fool, right?

Come, the author, read with me my solemn oath: starting from today, I will never stop updating. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherish time like gold, perseverance, struggle hard work, advocating first-class, striving to create brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Ma Yu is my bounden duty, I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently. I am the key in the darkness, the guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding day and night.

Overall, it's good, but the author's timeline is too detailed. It's still a mythical genre anyway. You can't calculate your time in days, at least in years. It doesn't mean that your development is slow. Your opponents all started out tens of thousands of years ago. Your own development is calculated in days. It's too uncomfortable to watch!

There is no need for the author to arrange the time so tightly. This is the world view of gods and demons. The timeline can be longer, not a few days later or a few days later.

To be honest, this world is particularly suitable for practicing bloodline martial arts in the martial arts tomb. The weakest monkey who practices bloodline martial arts can transform into a chaotic demon ape.

It's too watery. Two-thirds of it is about introducing exercises and magic weapons, and the rest is about introducing power relations. The real plot is only a little over 10%. You can skip 10 chapters without any trouble.

After watching 200, I felt that the protagonist had no taste in the water the whole time after leaving the dormitory. The whole process was just practicing and creating methods to get benefits. The key realm was not mentioned, and he just kept creating methods and innovations. This theme was foreshadowed in the early stage.

Author, you have written about The Ancient Times and Journey to the West. You are planning to write about Fengshen. You can also start a book about the period of chaos. I like your Ancient Times novels very much. It is one of the few masterpieces about The Ancient Times. I hope you can continue writing. Come on.

It's getting more and more boring. It's just about how strong you are in one realm and then you achieve it. You just say how it is, and every one of them is, and there are all kinds of the strongest techniques in the world, and then you say it's not that strong. There is basically no plot in the whole story, it's all about cultivation and bragging.

Emperor Xindu has been in power for a thousand years. In the world of gods and demons, time is measured in days? A lot of unnecessary things are introduced, and the introductions are repeated. The supporting characters A, B, and C are all good enough for more than two chapters. It's still beyond the realm of the protagonist, and the accumulation of tens of thousands of years by the nobles is not as good as the harvest of the protagonist in a few months. The subject matter is great, but I just can't write it.

I have read several books, but the author's books are really too watery, a lot of them are sloppy, and I really don't feel comfortable reading them.

What exactly is the protagonist cultivating? I can't figure out what cultivators I see 😥

There must be something wrong with the writing. There is no one in the world of gods and demons.

The time schedule is too tight. With this setting, the time can be relaxed appropriately, otherwise it will be too tight.

It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away.

Grinding and chirping, this one is invincible and that one is the strongest. Crazy leveling. Beating people without killing them. Food is tasteless. It is a pity to abandon them.

Continue to press the realm 👍

This book is quite good and relatively novel, but it's a pity that it's unfinished

It's all water, and it takes half a year to get something out of the plot each time.

Water and garbage. As mentioned earlier, Heaven has blocked Ziwei when others mentioned it, and now they have to fight to block it. Boring garbage

The first monthly ticket in life, I give it to you, please improve

The author can open a leaflet to sort out various realms and their relationships. If you don't recognize this type of practice for a while, and another type of practice for a while, your head will hurt and become confused. I hope Zuo can adopt these small suggestions.

Let's talk about the protagonist's realm again: The realm suddenly jumps and I can't understand it:

Can the author add a supporting actor called Chen Manxing?

Ask what the numbers in this chapter are about

I would like to call this kind of book a flow of myths.

Just writing that the earth is an expansion of the earth made up of countless time and space stacks is a prehistoric one.

Come on, come on, I wrote something new and fascinating✊✊✊✊✊✊