The Witcher: Start with the Top Empty Number

Until I read it today The progress is very fast, the pace is very slow, simple and easy to understand, Needs: Emotion needs to be added, big contradictions should be highlighted if they are not small, I see that you want to use the female apprentice to die, and give the reader a signal that the protagonist has changed, But it is a bit short and urgent There are 2 Mistakes One is that there is a problem with the name of the protagonist The other is that the dean becomes a pedant There is no previous reminder that the protagonist has other names and that the dean is a pedant. The pedant of ordinary people in wizarding novels is not the same name as the pedant of wizards in wizarding novels. The new setting is a bit abrupt, and even makes me feel like you are editing an article from another book Of course, there are only two minor unreasonable things, and the others are quite normal. If you stabilize two chapters a day, supplement and strengthen, and pay attention to the progress of the outline I would like to suggest that the editor should be able to recommend it to you

Is this an article about how to be a good teacher with wizard elements? If so, I suggest you read it carefully if you want to read wizard novels. After reading the first few pictures, it seems that the protagonist prefers to make progress in the career of a teacher instead of advancing on the path of a wizard.

There is no description at the beginning, which makes it very confusing. What does the author want to express?

I was originally expecting the heroine to be the heroine, but she ended up dead 😅

Wizarding literature can finally be seen differently