
Fellow Taoist, Please Try Harder!
道侣,请再努力一点!
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- Cultivation Civilization
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I feel that this type of wife-marriage system treats women as tools, as if they have no feelings. The more they marry, the more they marry. They say they are crazy about doting on their wives. I laugh to death. Without this system, would you still marry so many women?
A female cultivator with 4 spiritual roots and 1st level of Qi training actually sells it for 5,000 spiritual stones. Are you crazy? The prices are so ridiculous!
Yes, it's quite interesting. However, I feel that the bond between the protagonist and his Taoist companions is still too shallow, and his control is too weak. I just feel that if the protagonist wants to climb to the top, he must have many Taoist companions. Can he still rely on emotions to maintain it later? Is it difficult?
The protagonist is so disgusting. He just treats women as tools... And he dotes on his wife. Are you not ashamed to say this? Would you marry so many women without a system? Would you marry so many women without any benefit? These women that the protagonist marries are more like props than the protagonist's wives. Anyway, they are fine.
Author, please try harder!
Coming, coming Respect (٭°̧̧̧ω°̧̧̧٭)
What's the point of getting Ye Wushuang? It's frustrating to watch. It's also the foundation building period. How can there be such a big gap? It's really so powerful. You can build a foundation to build a golden elixir. Why should you be afraid of a golden elixir monk? It's equivalent to the protagonist putting his life on Ye Wushuang's character. Betting that Ye Wushuang won't kill him is like betting on his life. This is inconsistent with the cautious character of the protagonist mentioned above. , And the protagonist himself has a golden finger, all he lacks is time, why bother to get involved with Yu Linglong or something, just run away, nothing happened, I didn't see any big benefits brought by Yu Linglong, but I did see the big disadvantages, and her life was threatened by Ye Wushuang. What is the purpose of writing this kind of plot? Is it to mess with the reader's mentality? Has the author really thought it through? The author's state suppresses everything, so what's the use of writing so much about the condensation of mana, epiphany, and dual consciousness? It is better to be more refined than to advance to a higher realm, but if you write about killing and building a foundation during the Qi training period, then what realm is the highest? There are a few golden elixirs in a small place like Nanyu. Shouldn't the so-called big place in the central region be full of golden elixirs? Does Ye Wushuang need to be afraid of offending the golden elixir monks? It's outrageous. Ye Wushuang is so arrogant. He is born the same as he is. He has never suffered any catastrophes and is going smoothly. Is it so outrageous in a foundation building period? Foundation building is very basic, right? What's so arrogant about it? Is there anything like this in the world of immortality? Is it really about pure cultivation of immortality? There are many more realms in the future, but the foundation building is just like this. It's nothing but Long Ao Tianwen. It's very different. The protagonist himself is not bad. With this blessing and that blessing, how can he not even be able to fight back? The magic weapon still traps people. Still in the forbidden cave, Ye Wushuang passed through the forbidden area with a flash of spiritual light, broke the magic weapon, and released the person. Even the official forbidden area was so easy to penetrate. I really don't know how to put it. How is it possible? It's outrageous. The author really didn't write this aspect. Good In the usual division of realms between golden elixir and foundation building, one is a solid sea of spiritual energy and the other is a liquid sea of spiritual energy. Generally, golden elixirs cannot cultivate any great magical powers. The really powerful ultimate moves are all in the Nascent Soul stage and beyond. It's all fun to say that foundation building can do anything, just like foundation building changes the color of the world, and the ultimate move is still possible, can the mana be sustained, is it enough to activate the ultimate move, and the scorching sun is burning the sky. How can a foundation building period burn the sky? Even if 1,000 foundations are built together, they still can't burn the sky. It's too outrageous. Have you survived the thunder tribulation? You haven't even survived the thunder tribulation, so you dare to burn the sky? There is a heavenly tribulation behind the thunder tribulation, so why are you so crazy when it doesn't count? Cultivation of immortality is about heaven and earth, and everything you say will be remembered. If a foundation builder is so crazy, aren't you afraid of being struck to death by a thunderstorm? How is this talent? Is it certain that I can become an immortal? Is I certain that I can pass the eight realms? The author really needs to think carefully about where such great power comes from and where such a big difference comes from. If the magic weapon is more powerful and the spiritual talisman is more powerful, it is still possible. If you bring more things and bring better things, it is possible. But just relying on your own mana reserves, etc., How can there be such a big gap? The author really needs to think carefully.
After reading the first chapter, the protagonist collects money from others to serve as a servant. When the enemy comes, he immediately runs away without even thinking of taking the donor with him. Poor character
At present, I feel that the main poisonous point of this novel is concentrated on the heroine Lu Qingting. The progress of their relationship depends entirely on the crazy wits of the male protagonist and the female protagonist. For example, when the male protagonist took away the things at the beginning and she was still unconscious, why didn't he kill her? I thought you were not quite used to Amomum villosum, so I left her alive. Why didn't you kill her after you captured her? Were you worried about the tracking spell? But didn't someone use an animal to kill her? Just like a cat and a tiger, you also find a few animals to come over, but she is restrained and has no ability to resist. In the end, we took some video and let the person go. After letting the person go, the male protagonist didn't run away immediately. I thought you were afraid that leaving immediately would arouse suspicion. But later, looking at the male protagonist's intentions, if there hadn't been a fight, he wanted to stay for a long time. Brother, what you offended was a daughter in the Jindan stage. You have never even seen the battle between the late Qi refining stages before. Why don't you know if the Jindan stage has the means to find you directly? Then the heroine's point of wisdom came. She knew that the slave talisman on her body would work if she was close to a certain distance, but after sensing the male protagonist's position, she immediately rushed over and wanted to kill him. Obviously you can bring a group of people there, but if you are afraid that the male protagonist will recognize him and expose the so-called video, you can also hide it yourself and let the group of people fuck the male protagonist, but in the end you have to go alone. Then I am currently reading Chapter 60, and here comes the biggest wisdom point. Even though both sides are obviously enemies, the male protagonist and Lu Qingting choose to make a deal. And without any insurance, he activated the position first and let the other party sense it and come over. Why does the male protagonist think that the other party will not bring anyone over? Just because you put some pornographic films in the other person's consciousness? And how dare you trade with the other side? What if someone puts a tracking rune on the trading item? Why do you believe so much in a person who keeps shouting that he wants to kill you and actually wants to kill you? Why doesn't the heroine bring anyone there? What reason did she have for not taking anyone there? Stockholm syndrome, right?
The three views are incorrect, the protagonist's character is selfish and twisted.
It's so poisonous that in the first chapter it can make people abandon the book, become someone else's offering, accept benefits from others, and then confidently say something when someone is in trouble and then run away. What's the difference between this and those villains? Why don't you write it as a tribute? Isn't this just scum?
I'm convinced, obviously there is no shortage of resources, but the protagonist always runs out to wander around
The monetary system has collapsed so badly that the price will depend on how much money the protagonist has. Not to mention the front, the protagonist is in the outer city renting a cave for 8 or 9 thousand spirit stones for a year (the protagonist's net worth in the city is probably close to 100,000). After coming out of the secret realm, I have a net worth of one million, 100,000 spiritual stones, and I can rent a cave in the inner city for one year (the minimum rent is 3 years, and I will give you a shop for use). Not to mention that you bought the Foundation Establishment Pill for 100,000 spirit stones, although there are conditions, but your price is really outrageous. Later, it is estimated that even if the protagonist has a trillion spirit stones, the cave will cost 100 billion a year, which is one-tenth.
I discovered a perpetual motion machine. The method practiced by the Taoist monks can help the protagonist gain five times the enlightenment. The Taoist couple advances 1, the protagonist advances 5, and the protagonist in turn gives guidance to the Taoist companion. Under the guidance of the protagonist, the Taoist companion advances 1, and the protagonist advances 5. If the cycle continues, the ancestor of all ways will not be a problem.
Before going online to engage in serious poisoning, he had to hook up with a female cultivator who was being targeted, but the material was gone and the spirit stone was gone. The character of the protagonist is completely destroyed. Why would you drag someone to sell when you can obviously go to the market later?
Among the novels about marrying a wife and cultivating immortals, I think the best one is about my Taoist companion who is amazingly talented and beautiful.
There is a saying that if a wife-style novel like this is to be long, there should not be more than five Taoist companions. Two or three Taoist companions are the most suitable, and the system buffs are also effective for the Taoist couple. It is best for both parties to grow together. In the early stage, I write about daily life and then start writing adventures when the character strength is laid. There is a saying that when a couple forms a team to explore opportunities, you don't have to think of new characters. You only need to add some passerby cannon fodder. You can also write some ambiguous plots and words during the exploration of opportunities. When I get tired of writing adventures, I find a place to squat and pretend to be a reclusive boss and continue writing daily plots. Nowadays, the marriage novels are stuck in a weird circle. They only write daily plots and only know: sex + ability. I run to sell things and then get paranoid. I am afraid of this one and that one. I go home and continue having sex➕The ability is the same as working on the front line. At the end of the writing, I don't know how to write it, so I start crazily stuffing women into it, and it is completely ruined.
I would like to recommend the new book "The Supreme Cultivation Family" by an old author. Thank you!
😂 Friends, please do some research. Is there anyone who reads this new author who writes more tricky subjects, for example 🙈? As a demon cultivator, I practice dual cultivation with a female guile Witch: As a demon cultivator, I have no taboos Wizard: As a demon cultivator, I like to explore and research Corusu: As a demon cultivator, I grab buildings and furnaces everywhere Weird world: As a demon cultivator, I become a guest Do you have any favorites? Deduct a 6 if you like it.
I have only read the beginning, and I would like to ask: Can this Taoist couple just admit it verbally? Then the protagonist can find more people to admit that they are his Taoist companions and pay some spiritual stones. Anyway, the other party will not suffer any loss. Doesn't the protagonist take off immediately?
The front is okay
It was no fun to change people later. Ever since he left Tiannan City, instead of joining the Hundred Flowers Sect, he hid his cultivation and joined the small sect Guanyue Sect.
After reading Chapter 6, I couldn't stand going to a brothel without having sex. It's probably another eunuch novel, not interesting.
It's very well written. Why did it get G?
Also promoting new books?
This book is so well-written that all eunuchs are... Can readers still trust it?
Observe and recommend books
The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁
The progress is too slow. Except for breaking through the fourth level of Qi Refining in the beginning of Life Crisis, there are no breakthroughs in the next dozens of chapters. There is a lot of rambling. I have read more than 100 titles later, and I have not yet broken through to foundation building. No matter how you ramble, water, everything is based on breaking through your own cultivation. No, you are still in danger now.