Xiu Xian: I Can Load the Panel

The author is becoming more and more ignorant. The author just let himself go. 90 Points for the beginning, 80 points for the writing, 70 points for the description, and 60 points for the plot. Alas, a good book has become a third-rate book.

Author, won't your conscience hurt? If the last one was not good, you should start a new one.

The front is okay, and the back is okay for accepting the little dragon girl. I have never seen anyone who doesn't accept the little dragon girl compared to wearing the divine eagle. I can tolerate having a relationship with the young woman of the Cheng family. As a widow, isn't it a bit too much for you to go to Guo Jing's house as a guest and sleep with Huang Rong? Why did Huang Rong not follow Guo Jing when he was appointed general and went to take office? Why do you think he didn't raise a baby on Taohua Island and accompany Guo Jing to guard Xiangyang? Hetui

Old thief! If you didn't write the last one well, start a new one!

It doesn't matter if you accept Xiao Longnu, Cheng Ying and others, Cheng Yaojia is a bit too much, but at least I found a reason, and the original work didn't explain much. But what the hell is Huang Rong behind? It is illegal to keep writing that lolita cannot be accepted, but what you do is worse than sleeping with lolita! What's wrong with never seeing a woman? I don't understand the author's thinking. He justly talks about opening a path to immortality for the Han people, spreading the Dharma everywhere, and doing things without any bottom line. Aren't you embarrassed?

You should go to the harem, if you just want to watch the immortal cultivator and show off, you don't need to watch it.

The love between Guo Jing and Huang Rong is not so fragile that just a cat or a dog can knock the corner. Moreover, Huang Rong is not a flirtatious person. The author writes this way and is not afraid of being beaten to death by the fans of the Condor God.

When I have a few hundred pages in this book, I will revise it and add more information, hehe.

At first I thought you were practicing martial arts while you were cultivating immortality, but it turned out that you were teaching others how to practice martial arts all over the world, and you started to practice when you met a girl. Huang Rong's daughter is already a teenager, and she was written like a character in Little Emperor's Uncle. It's a joke.

As soon as I saw the girl, I knew it was garbage! The iron-clad little dragon girl and the flowing pig's feet

It's so disgusting. It's a bit creative at the beginning, but when it comes to the female characters, they turn into sluts and dolls. They have a stupid collecting habit and are like hamster gangs.

Looking at the table of contents, you can see that the main character has become an immortal but still clings to the world of low martial arts. After writing about the divine eagle, there is also a Tianlong. Don't you think it's not enough? I don't know that there is basically one copy of Cultivation of Immortality and Martial Arts, and the next one is directly Cultivation of Immortality or High Martial Arts, such as the Great Tang Dynasty, and the remaining dungeons are full of low Martial Arts and all are thrown into the street. This is also the case for those who have good results. I have zero expectations, my force value is too low, I just keep walking in the same place, I am speechless, my word count is quite good, I can do full attendance, but if I want to make money to support my family, forget it.

You laugh at him for writing without brains, and the author laughs at you for giving him popularity... This kind of book is basically written part-time, and the principle is how to write it without brains. About 500,000 words will inevitably lead to a new book. What they want is that the effect is fast-paced and more enjoyable. They can achieve their goal by earning about 1,500 yuan a month. As for plots, writing and other things that require time to polish, they will not do it 😁😁😁

Starting from a bunch of women, it gradually became more and more white, becoming more and more boring, boring

Alas, I have to deal with Huang Rong again, the book goddess

The idea is really good, but I want to ask, is the author short of women for a long time? ? If she is a woman, then she will be accepted into the harem? Playing cultivators in the world of martial arts is interesting, but having all the meat and vegetables in the harem is a bit of a challenge. Sorry, I really can't follow it anymore.

It's a good idea, and as a result, you have three thousand women. Failure, how many people like harem stories now, they are tired of it. If you would have exploded ten years ago

It's not like writing porn is useless to attract so many women. It feels very nondescript to me, a person who has experienced the era when porn can be written.

I'm so annoyed that I've never seen a woman like this before.

How much is the shortage of women in reality?

Well, I really can't expect anything from free-for-free novels, 🤢🤢🤢🤢

When I saw the random collection of women, I gave up decisively. It was a pity that I lost a book with good intentions.

The last sentence of the introduction should be changed. It should be changed to "There are 3,000 big bags in my mind, and there are serious illnesses in each one."

The beginning was good, but entering Journey to the West all at once was the biggest failure!

The beginning was okay, but then I started to let myself go. Should I change the author?

Wow, it's so well written. It's still a martial arts world in 200 pages. It immediately becomes too low-level fairy, and then it goes straight to high-level fairyland.

This book by the author can be regarded as a small branch of Zhutianliu! Very nice! The pace is just a little faster!

How can I put it this way, The Divine Condor Scroll is pretty good, it's not all about recruiting girls, it still has a bit of a beginning, the plot with Huang Rong is still a bit forced, and they are still almost married ~ hahaha. Then Tianlongjuan is completely about recruiting girls, and the plot with Murong Fu is a bit low. Liaozhai, Zhuxian, and Journey to the West are just like that.

Old thief, you are done so quickly.

The author is awesome! 😌😏