Miss Witch Doesn't Want to Be a Singer

She is the dark singer in the chaotic world, she is the cold witch who cannot tell false hopes, and she is the blood-stained angel who sings the final movement. She has ice blue eyes, long jet black hair, skin as pale as snow, a delicate and charming figure that makes people fall in love with her, and a cold voice that penetrates time and distance and reaches directly to the deepest part of the soul. Hesia Tilan is her name. Book title: "Miss Witch Does Not Want to Be a Singer" Author: Qingkong Music Type: Science Fiction·Interstellar Civilization Tag: Future World, Cyberspace, Fourth Day Disaster, Warm Daily Life Hot-Blooded Epic Number of words: 23,000 words Status of work: serialized Recommendation index: ★★★★☆ (4/5) "Introduction to the work" The novel tells the story of Hesia Tilan's warm but occasionally passionate work routine in the context of the galaxy universe where people are impetuous and materialistic. "Reason for Recommendation" The world view of the novel is grand, the setting structure is rigorous and innovative at the same time. The author's narrative style is warm and delicate, and the writing skills are very expressive. He also pays great attention to the characterization of the heroine. The heroine's character is vivid and three-dimensional. When reading, you can clearly feel that the author created this character with love, just like the author said he was "raising a daughter". The world view of the novel is closely related to the author's previous work "Not a Witch". This novel is a brand-new story that takes place in the distant future. If you are interested in this type of novel with a male protagonist and a female protagonist, you can read the author's completed previous work "I'm Not a Witch", which is also a beautiful light novel that combines warm daily life with a passionate epic. "Recommended Group" ❶Readers who like novels with male protagonists and female protagonists; ❷Readers who like warm daily novels; ❸Readers who like to read novels with a grand world view. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}

Seeing now, the author has three big problems First, the author keeps exporting his own thoughts and opinions, and mixes a lot of private information in the book. However, the author's own views completely conflict with the setting of the novel, making it seem very naive First of all, the author's views are those of people in the 21st century, but when the author imposes his own views on the characters in the novel, it seems extremely childish and ridiculous, because the background of the novel is already thousands of years later in the interstellar era, and both the economic base and the superstructure are completely what the future society will look like. How is it possible to adapt to the author's current thoughts? For example, the author believes that stars, actors, entertainers, dancers, etc. Are all "for sale" and those who are low-level cannot be on the stage. This kind of thinking is considered backward in the 21st century, let alone thousands of years later. What's more, there is a special "singing girl" in the novel who governs the country with her cooking skills. How can the people have such backward ideas that are purely produced under the natural economy of China's feudal society And the author's opinions are preaching... Preaching to readers is really a bit xx Secondly, the logic of the novel is unreasonable. For example, the person in sequence five in the book is already a superman, but he can still be injured by a broken bottle Another example, the protagonist is just a tourist, but after a certain dancing senior was injured, he directly recognized the protagonist as his replacement... Illogical or illogical stories will make the novel like xx Three, the plot is flowing. Although he is an old author, some chapters are written like a running account Whether it is a daily plot or an extraordinary one, in many cases it is told as straightforwardly as a running account. I am so new to the point that I am even a little confused, the plot is as good as the number of words Note that a relaxed daily life does not mean a running account. What's more, this is not an easy daily life

"A few minutes later, the sound of dripping water stopped. Heshia dried her hair and body with a towel and was about to put on clean clothes. When she lowered her head, a few more water drops rolled down from the ends of her hair and slid into her shoulders and neck, which was slightly refreshing." - Excerpted from "Chapter 16" {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName ":"New book trial reading"} Book title: "Miss Witch Doesn't Want to Be a Singer" Author: Blue Sky Music Status: Serialized (signed) Elements: healing, supernatural powers, cyberspace, coffee maid Introduction: The story of the protagonist Hesia Tiran who opened the only orchid in the muddy life after applying to become a maid waiter. The author draws the warm daily life of Miss Witch under the cyberspace with fresh and beautiful writing and ink. The fragrant and endless aftertaste shows a mysterious and astonishingly vast future world. Tweet: This is a rare sci-fi themed novel with an extraordinary heroine. 1. A grand world view and a strong sense of technology From the cyberpunk buildings to the finely graded food catalogue, streets and house numbers, currency and prices, and even the school subject content, there is a strong sense of technology, which is amazing. 2. The name of the ability is concise and the extraordinary system is clear. The setting of the extraordinary sequence is clear and complete, and the names of various abilities and attack skills are easy to understand while taking into account the elegance of the text. The supernatural battle scenes are also brilliantly described and worth reading carefully. 3. The plot has a certain degree of excitement, first restraining and then rising, and then restraining The label "healing" must be in quotation marks. The protagonist is introverted and seems to reflect myself as he continues to grow. By the way, the girl's bathroom scene will definitely make you blush. ❤It has officially reached its climax, which is a good time to catch up on reading. I read the latest 23 chapters of my novel today. It is a super chapter of 12,000 words that was updated by a hard-working author at 3 o'clock in the middle of the night. It is full of sincerity and I had tears in my eyes after reading it early in the morning. Recommend Aozora's previous work "I'm Not a Witch". It's 3.8 Million words, so you can have something to do while waiting for the update, just like me.

{"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New Book Trial Reading"} Book title: "Miss Witch Doesn't Want to Be a Diva" Author: Qingzora Mozhang Status: Signed (currently being serialized) Introduction: Miss Witch's heartwarming daily work article in the background of cyberspace, and occasionally passionate epics. Elements: science fiction, supernatural powers, warm daily life, beautiful girls Power system: Nine sequences appear at this stage: spirit son, light feather, wither, tide, original, dragon, nature, blood pupil, cutting blade. (The protagonists are the dual sequences of Wither and Nature) The rankings are sorted by sequence, from Sequence 1 to Sequence 10 (Sequence 10 is God) from smallest to largest. Even the same sequence has different promotion paths. Each promotion path has its own evaluation (from low to high: gray iron, red copper, dark silver, golden gold, condensed beads, colored crystal, apostle, life key, epic. If further broken down, it can be divided into incomplete, ordinary, excellent, outstanding, rare, perfect, legend, myth) To be honest, I read it with the Lord of Mystery at the time, and often confused the two 😅 Recommendation: Personally, I feel that the article written by Qing stewardess has a magical power that can make people calm down. When reading the book, you can't help but follow the protagonist to understand some insignificant details in this huge world view. The character creation of the protagonist is also very vivid. Through some of the protagonist's small movements, small expressions, and some psychological descriptions, it seems that people can feel that she really existed. This may be the effect of the author once saying that he raised the protagonist as his daughter The article also shows some of the young stewardess's views on life through the perspective of the protagonist from time to time. The delicate writing style, the gentle protagonist and some warm little details are so quiet that after reading it, it seems that my soul has been purified and slowly calmed down. In addition, Qing Stewardess also has a completed million-word novel "She's Not a Witch", which tells another story in the same worldview. It can be used to relieve boredom when you are short of books😍

I am an ordinary member of the Southern Sector. Our singer ran away for unknown reasons before the war started, taking away a small group of people and leaving us under the rule of the Federation. From then on, the south has no chance of development and has been squeezed. What I hate most is not the Flame Diva, but the escaped Diva. What if she had never appeared? When she comes back in the future, I will be old or dead, so what does it have to do with me?

There is a lot of content in the early stages of the book, but I feel like I only touched on everything. After expanding a little bit, I went on to write something else. Many things were poorly prepared or even completely unavailable. The protagonist suddenly gained a lot of powerful abilities, suddenly had a fight, and suddenly gained something. Also, the infiltration operation unexpectedly turned into a bloody melee. Inexplicably, I infiltrated and met someone on the road, and then showed something that I didn't have before. Then that person became my side, and then there was a bunch of people around me, and then I started fighting with others. The people watching were confused. It gave people the feeling of writing whatever they thought of, and all logic was lost. Furthermore, the whole world is overly numerical. Everything has a grade. Even bottled water has a grade like T7 in front of it. If you want to show the ordinaryness of this bottle of water, you don't have to add a grade. It can be summed up in one sentence. Besides food, there are a lot of different grading standards, giving people the feeling of playing a game. The whole book has completely lost its sense of reality, and it feels like a castle in the air that is completely divorced from reality. What attracted me to this book was the feeling at the beginning that was based on reality but transcended reality, a feeling that was a bit cybernetic but a bit fantasy but also pyrotechnics. The more I read, the more I didn't know what to say. It was a slap in the face and the plot was too abrupt. The feeling at the beginning was completely lost. Anyway, let's add more fuel.

，，，，，       The main problem is the song diva route, which is a good idea in itself. If you only sing occasionally as a hobby like the previous book Luo Lan, it would be fine. But this book obviously intends to make the diva the main line. Then the problem is that the author writes how beautiful and inspiring Tilan sings. , We can only understand from the sidelines between the lines. In fact, we can't hear what the song is like, and there are often a lot of lyrics. I usually skip all the lyrics directly, because I know that if I can write good lyrics, I won't use it to write novels. Wouldn't it be nice to just become a star singer? In the previous book, there were occasional lyrics or singing that you could read or skip. This one is really unbearable. There are a lot of lyrics, and then you compete with each other to see who sings better. The result is just the author writing the final part, everyone's expressions and emotions reflect who sings better. We cannot evaluate this kind of singing competition through our own feelings, it feels very abstract. I have never seen any novels I have read in the past that focus on describing singing scenes. I do not understand and find it difficult to accept it. To put it bluntly, there are many musical lyrics in novels that are unreasonable. How can readers enjoy music in novels?           ，，，， But in the second part, I don't feel like a witch anymore, it's mainly a diva. That's all. I feel that the author's writing is pretty good, but the plot is often unsatisfactory.

This book has many shortcomings, but not important. Because those shortcomings were forgotten after a week or two, it means that it is not a big problem, it is mainly about details. The big problem I personally feel is not nothing. 1. The first one is the sense of fate. It is always emphasized in the book, but I don't feel it when I read it. The scene is often about people's evaluation of it or their views before the incident. It's like the past and the future are there, but the present is not important. But that is actually very important. Whether it is a reckless hero or a talented person, the choice at that time is the arc of the character. A lot of the time it's just like that to me and that's it. (There is no destiny, not given to the character) 2. Lack of ideas... Do not accept new writing methods. Or maybe the author is afraid of change. Obviously the scene keeps changing and time keeps moving forward. But the author's writing is unremarkable. The important historical process does happen to a few characters (in fact, it can also happen to a few people, but it doesn't create the feeling of a space opera). How about taking a look at the history textbook to find some ideas. 3. The third thing is actually what I want to say to Qingkong. It is not that Witch is good-looking, but its success is accidental and difficult to replicate. How about changing your writing method and reading more other works? Whether it's a movie, a novel, a game... No matter the theme is thriller, romance, history, fantasy, they can all be your ideas. This book is very watery, too watery. I don't know if my expectations for you are too high or if your standards are too low. There are so many things that are wrong. Are you satisfied with this book? What are your expectations for it? Blue Sky Movement, I quite like your book, but when I read it, your words always gave me the feeling that the things I particularly like are not that important to you. But this book seems to be just a bottle of wine. There are many things I like, such as the setting, such as Tilan... I don't know what I am talking about, and it feels different from the purpose of writing this post. Anyway, keep going. No matter what the result is, I will see it until the end. Come on. Oh yes, I want everyone to find the shortcomings. For example, you can like good improvement ideas so that everyone can see them. Just think of this as a book review.

Recommendation: It shows the growth and change of a character, the changes of historical trends, and the magnificent world of collision and conflict of various ideas. Although this goal seems ambitious, the author will never pour it out all at once. He will intersperse the plot and story with short paragraphs or even a few sentences. This will not affect the overall reading experience, but also bring more freshness to book lovers. There is no need to remember these things deliberately, but their existence will make the world more real and beautiful. Book title: "Miss Witch Does Not Want to Be a Diva" Author: Aozora Chapter Status: Serialized Rating: Excellent Introduction: Humans have ruled the universe and discovered extraordinary power Setting aspect: Using a sequence setting similar to that of the Lord of Mysteries, but unlike the sequences of Mysterious Darkness and Crusu, the sequence of this novel is more towards the light, technology, and fantasy types. Good👍 Bonus points At the same time, the author also set up a very novel and interesting historical background - the establishment of the Federation was actually because of a singer😱. It was this singer who used her singing voice to unite various large groups and finally establish the Federation. This historical setting is really interesting💪 and incredible 😆! In terms of plot: an epic battle between two sisters, the winner is blessed with a brilliant light and exclusive legendary talent, while the loser falls into an abyss and cannot say anything! Spells are everywhere, and the fighting details are full! Why don't you read such an epic plot? What are you waiting for 🤔? Recommended for: readers who like technology and fantasy genres {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}

The glory of the dusk era, we will surely recast it

I added it to my bookshelf, read a few chapters and deleted it, then added it and deleted it again. This is the third time. Do you have any clues?

Next article Governing the country and bringing peace to the world is actually about something called original intention. What era are you in? How do you feel about times like this? What color do you want this era to look like in your hands? Start with yourself, build your own family, change your hometown, and control the destiny of the entire civilization. In this great journey, what runs through the whole thing is not the power of the witch, nor the ability of the color-level singer, nor the excellent appearance and personality charm, but the original intention at the beginning. Xiang Yu returned to his hometown in search of clothes and riches, but he was in danger of sinking the cauldron and sinking the boat. Liu Bang begged a man to act like this. In the end, destiny is with me. What's the use of being a humble magpie? A person's intention determines his height, and a book's intention determines its pattern. What is a pity is that the intention of this book is not too high, but precisely too low. Civilization has never been an illusory concept. Civilization is composed of concrete lives, organizations and political powers one after another. In this book, I rarely saw specific people and organizations. Qiao Long was annihilated by the ruthless cleanup. Alanna disappeared in the torrent of time. Aurese was ruthlessly washed away from herself, whether by the Federation or Tilan. Blanche went from believing in the world to only believing in herself, and eventually became a feudal emperor who was forced to pass on the throne to her young master. Yes, the story of the Golden Diva and the Blue Diva is fascinating. Yes, the ten thousand-year struggle between the Black Sun and the Council of Sigmar is very epic. However, each specific talent is the theme of civilization. They should not be forgotten and should not be obscured by the songs of the singer. Does the author really remember Cai Mo's original intention? Do you really remember that the stars' united efforts overcame the frost's steel torrent? Do you really remember that a single spark can start a prairie fire? This is what I don't understand, and it's also what I'm still looking forward to. Above

Mainly the last volume. This is also a common problem with long online novels. There are more and more settings, plots, and characters, and it is becoming more and more difficult to integrate them together. However, I think the core reason is that the author wants to write a set of reasons why the protagonist thinks about how social processes develop and change, so it is a bit too ambitious and short-handed. In the end, I feel that I can't write it anymore. It was finished in a hurry. The protagonist was said to be a color level at the beginning, but in the end, it was not shown as it should be. Influence, and then 20 years of overseas visits are the same plot development as playing. It is not impossible to write about ZZ, but don't be such a child's play. The Star Children Alliance also develops inexplicably, and then none of Ge Yin's easy-to-use lines are used. There are some problems in the expression of the core content of the book. What everyone wants to see is the plot of Tilan growing up and becoming No. 1, Not the academic research on social engineering at the end

The biggest problem I felt after reading the whole book was that the plot rhythm was very confusing. From the third chapter, there has been a long build-up and it feels like something big is coming, but it ends abruptly at the end. I was still thinking about whether the ending could be explained clearly, but in fact the ending is a bigger problem. Many things were just passed through without being explained clearly.

What does this book say? At first glance, it seems like a dark night, which makes people uninterested. However, the more you read it, the more interesting it becomes. Even the name of the protagonist is like this. I don't know if it's just me or everyone else. It feels like watching the stars at night in the previous book. It's very gentle and harmonious and makes people fall in love with it at a glance. It needs to be savored carefully to taste it. But after reading it, I still like the author's light writing style.

Recommendation: I first came across this book because of the introduction. As the saying goes, if the introduction is not good, why do you believe she can write a good book? With its unique introduction, I believe this book can attract a large number of people to read it. When I really started reading, I was attracted by the warm daily life in it. Although I am just a daily working woman, it is not lacking in passionate epics. It is a work worth reading. Book title: "Miss Witch Does Not Want to Be a Singer" Author: Blue Sky Music Tags: future world, healing, fourth natural disaster Status: 40,000 words [serial] Recommendation index: ★★★★☆ Recommended reader type: Readers who like to see the future world and daily warm novels are worth reading. Brief review: The author of this article is a lv4 complete version of the exquisite 2nd glory work "She's Not a Witch", and the quality of the work deserves to be guaranteed. The author describes the character of the heroine Hesia Tilan in the future world very delicately. The contrast between the two passionate epics that happened in the warm daily work highlights the character of the heroine very well. This writing style creates a beautiful picture, with the same world view as the previous book, and makes us look forward to the appearance of the first-hand witches. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}

In my spare time, I clicked on the book "Not a Witch" and I was attracted by the magnificent war and the birth of the heroine in it. After reading it for three years, it ended in a blink of an eye. I couldn't bear to leave the world described by the author in the book, but life continued. During this period, I read it again several times, and I was even more attracted by the author's writing style and characterization of the characters. It wasn't until today that I discovered that the author has written another book. Even though time has passed, the world in the book is still the same. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

Family members who resigned

From the Book Friends Circle of the previous book Sir Ye is the witch who has had the greatest influence on the world structure and the most controversy in the hundreds of years since the death of the time witch Dorothy. Her life experience of being raised by humans, her stance against Dorothy, the Witch of Time and Space, and her assistance to the Sage Society in attacking the Kingdom of Oz, have made her controversial both within the Witches and the Sage Society. The reality that her students have established powerful political regimes in half of the continent forces the evaluation and description of her to take into account the attitudes and influences of the West Wind Kingdom and the Verdant Empire. So until today, when the Kingdom of West Wind and the Green Empire have disappeared, and she herself has chosen to retire, we can barely make a simple evaluation and record of this witch of books who has profoundly affected the history of the Western Continent for hundreds of years and represents knowledge, with the care of Lord Lorraine Hill and the rehabilitation of Dorothy, the Witch of Time and Space. ——The Historical Branch of the Ministry of Education of Crancia, full of desire for survival. According to all the information that can be collected so far, it seems that there are no natural witches. All witches are mortal before taking over their powers. In this sense, witches almost never violate the concept of "being raised by humans". This is also the part of the common sense about witches in general courses that is widely misunderstood. The meaning of "being raised by humans" in Lord Siye's life specifically refers to "after inheriting power and becoming a witch, he is still guided and shaped by human extraordinary people and shapes the future direction due to his special personal experiences." Lord Siye is therefore inextricably linked to the Sage Society. His appointment at Emenas, his teaching partnership with Dorothy, and even the establishment of Oz, all have the nature of cooperation between the Sage Society and the witch group. For various reasons that we may not know, Lord Siye accepted this identity, and the witch seems to be observing this "wanderer" from a new perspective and attitude. (Note: It is difficult to use one word to describe the witch's weird attitude towards Lord Si Ye. Lord Lorraine Hill's words are undoubtedly the most accurate.) The establishment of the Sage Society is closely related to the disintegration of the Mercury Dynasty and the surge in the number of human extraordinary beings. Witches have suffered heavy losses in thousands of years of battles, and the improvement and development of the extraordinary system has led to an increase in the number of human extraordinary people. Supported by a huge population base, even though they faced the same cruel growth and living environment, the number of extraordinary sequence nine humans still reached nearly three times that of witches on the eve of the establishment of Oz. Faced with the growth of human power, the witches after the disintegration of the Mercury Dynasty also have their own ideas. The magic sequence group headed by Dorothy is the group that strongly advocates cooperation with humans. Lord Si Ye is not a puppet controlled by the Sage Association. Starting from her joining the Sage Association, she broke the restriction that only the human (adapted) race participated in the early days of the Sage Association. Elves, orcs, and other marine races have joined in, expanding the influence of the Sage Association. (It can be said that this makes the "sage" truly become a "sage" - Lorraine Hill·Falling Star) As Dorothy explores the starry sky, she is confused by Selene and goes astray. The conflicts between the witch, the Sage Association, and even the various forces in the entire continent have sharply intensified due to the accumulation of fundamental conflicts such as geographical and racial conflicts, etc., Due to different attitudes towards the phantom of chaos. In the end, the witches were at war with each other, and the battle between Si Ye and Dorothy became a landmark event in the split of the witch faction. Lord Si Ye himself, after the battle against Dorothy, proclaimed himself a star observatory for hundreds of years. And with the war that followed, the Sage Association's popularity was divided during the rise of the Green Empire, and its reputation was greatly damaged. It became a mascot on the table when the strong ones check and balance each other, and lost its coercive power to control the high-sequence strong ones. This dispute objectively established the distribution situation of high-sequence extraordinary beings in the next few hundred years. It was also a disastrous failure for the various governments on the earth to try to unite. This was a war in which no one side won. All the forces suffered a tragic defeat after a short victory. The Western Continent fell into a situation of division and separatism. Due to Dorothy's death, almost all official exchanges between the Eastern and Western Continents were cut off. Until hundreds of years later, when the stars shine from the west wind, the entire world of Ivar fell into deathly silence. After the incident of Witch Agatha, Lord Lorraine Hill stepped into the forefront of the witches and worked as a thread among the leaders of the witch factions such as Lord Si Ye and Lord Tidise. In the end, Lord Lorrain Hill led the people of the South to launch a great struggle against the nobles of the empire. The empire was torn apart and disintegrated. Lord Si Ye was defeated and chose to retire. Si Ye seemed conservative when she opposed Dorothy, but everything she did in her life was extremely radical. The first witch who does not belong to the witch camp on the surface, the first witch who directly caused the death of another witch, trying to expand the scope of the Sage Association to accept more representative high-sequence strong men with extraordinary powers, including witches. Throughout her life, she has been trying to break the identity barrier intentionally or unintentionally, but the trend of the times has been turbulent, ultimately destroying everyone's hopes and dreams. Naturally, that includes her. After the Mercury Dynasty, all the efforts of the new forces under the old ideals were eventually cruelly torn off by the interests of reality. Only blood and fire, only knives and swords, only weapons of criticism and new weapons of criticism can save all this. So, let us thank Lord Lorraine Hill.                                       "

Perhaps, only a stubborn and twisted soul can struggle to shine a little light in the endless darkness. ——Inscription What kind of person is Hesia Tilan? Up to now, the author has written many texts related to her. Discussed her unwillingness to be the second son. Discussed the impact and shape of family changes on her psychological world. Put yourself in her shoes and think about her transformation and growth. At the same time, I am deeply immersed in her interesting soul. So, what is Hesia Tilan's spiritual background? In my opinion, it is two simple words: Resistance and restraint. Hesia Tilan's life shines because of her unwillingness to resist the established destiny. I am not willing to be my sister's shadow and give up the sequence I am good at. I am not willing to die in the cold sewer and fight to the death. I didn't want to be trapped in the dark underground all my life, so I tried my best to apply for Edes College. I don't agree with my sister's idea of ​​becoming one, and resolutely wields my sword against the idol I respect and fear. Her subconscious, from beginning to end, carries the determination of resistance, the firm will to survive in death, and the ambition to look down on the world. Otherwise, it is not enough to break through the many obstacles and rise like the sun. Otherwise, it is not enough to reshape Xinghai's values ​​as our own responsibility. Not like this, it is not enough to be admired by thousands of people and crowned as king. This is the positive side of Hesia Tilan's soul. Hesia Tilan's soul is special due to many constraints. She bears the curse of the second son of a special family of origin. She inherits the legacy of the heavy industry immigrants in the Four Leaf Crystal Star Region. She represents the underground poor who should never be forgotten. She carries the hopes and attachments of thousands of federal people. Great men are great because of what they carry. But it is precisely because of these constraints that she is always holding back. She can't break away from the upbringing of her family, so she can't criticize her mother's favoritism, her sister's contempt, and her father's leaving without saying goodbye. Those who can bring status and resources to her future development must be the children of the elite group of the Four-leaf Crystal Star Region, so she will definitely not be able to let the underground poor stand up and make the decision. She must maintain the general development pattern of the Four-leaf Crystal Star Territory, so it is impossible for her to let the heavy industry of the Four-leaf Crystal Star Territory take a dominant position again and glow with its previous glory. She cannot be like the Golden Flame Singer, who started from a humble beginning and reached the highest level, sweeping thousands of armies and finally overcoming all difficulties. She can't be like the Blue Flame Singer, who is ruthless, suppresses disobedience, and knows that she has sinned against me, but only in Spring and Autumn. She is destined to only make small repairs, because she inherits the legacy of her ancestors and will naturally bear the solidified interest pattern left by her ancestors. She is destined to only stick to the transformation of values, unable to break the inherent pattern, unable to clean the house before treating guests, she can only bear the burden, can only bear, and can only move forward with the load. She is destined to be remembered as only a reformer and a paper poster in the history books, and she is destined to be unable to escape the blows of the "leader of the old forces". This is the destined dark side of her soul, character, and destiny. The world is not what you want, and you always live in Qi or Ba. This is the path she is destined to take. A road that is full of obstacles and thankless, and hard work is destined to be despised by those who come after you.

Distance brings beauty. After a long time, I looked back and found that it looks better than when I caught up with it. It also looks and feels more tolerant.

The author is a very gentle person and has his own ideas, just like Xiao Tilan. I wish the author can always maintain his original intention. In addition, the writing is indeed a little messy in some places. But in my opinion, this is how the world is. Some plans and some thoughts may lead to many changes. I have some very naive ideas about the future world (which requires extremely high social productivity) Well... Society is no longer a system maintained for the purpose of production. There is a state that controls all fundamental means of production. The people embrace everything in the cradle of the country and use the country's productivity to realize their ideals, because the money allocated by the country is relatively rich but limited, and additionally they need to communicate, produce and make on their own (when you want to carry out big projects, mobilize others). A small amount of evil is allowed except that the country must be clear, even internal wars and large organizations that are not excessive. Citizens always retain the right to leave society (perhaps subject to restrictions) The foundation of education is always state-owned, and the purpose is to let the new people know everything as much as possible before entering society. Is the national organization more like heaven and earth? The college entrance examination is to select those people who are qualified to contribute to the country. There are top talents who maintain the boundaries between ideals and darkness. It needs to involve all changes in the entire Rose Federation What is more important to society is the responsibility to contribute to society, and the greatness of the name will be sung forever. (After material satisfaction, people have to realize their self-worth, whether it is transcending or joining the world) As for supervision, I don't know ⊙⊙ : Xiao Tilan's sword of the end, when the majority of civilized people join forces with the end, it will cleanse the entire country. . Ahem. . .

The more I read, the more I go to jail. The detailed description of the novel's environment cannot conceal my incompetence in story telling and low understanding of reality. The above is just my personal opinion. If you think it's wrong, just dismiss it as a fart.

The story of Aozora has always been beautiful, and it always gives me a sense of fairy tale. From not being a witch to a singer, no matter whether it is flawed or perfect, it will trigger thoughts about many things. Although as an author, you should be obsessed with the ending, but I still hope you don't have to force it. After all, the interstellar era is too far away, and being able to build Aozora at such a level is really, really amazing. Although I don't have much experience in writing, the construction of each story, the behavior of each character, and the consideration of every detail must take into account the influence of many worlds. The current writing will only be born in the present, just like Aozora, you also said that you want to go back to two years ago. Thank you Qingkong for your story. It wasn't the Witch who helped me through an important stage of my life. Qingkong left a heavy trace in my story. Although it can be seen from these two stories that Qingkong's past is also very heavy. In short, thank you Teacher Qingkong To borrow the words of Teacher Tilan, to the greatest prophecy in the world, see you tomorrow! Take the west wind and reunite in a beautiful tomorrow. Looking forward to Qingkong's next book, thank you Teacher Qingkong

I mourn the brief moment of my life, and envy the boundlessness of the Yangtze River. Carrying the flying immortals to travel, holding the bright moon to the end. I don't know how unexpected it is, but I left it in the sad wind.

Alas, I have finished reading it, and I want to post something. First of all, let me make it clear that I absolutely do not mean to belittle our lovely author in any way. So please, comrades, it's okay to scold me, but don't slap me in the face (honest. Jpg) Let's talk about the problems with this book first. I can only say that the speed of the last few chapters was too fast. I discovered that Qing Kong is really good at writing the inner turning points of characters! ! ! But yes, this aspect is indeed a difficult process to write. It is difficult for normal people to have such a big psychological turning point, but as a carrier of dramatic conflict, the characters must have such a turning point. Looking at the whole book, there are actually quite a few characters who have very abrupt inner transitions. I won't list the specific ones. I believe that everyone who has read along the way will have some impressions. The main reason is that it is not a big deal if these things appear in irrelevant supporting characters, but for the main supporting characters or even the protagonist to have such problems in the portrayal, it is indeed very inappropriate. As for the most controversial last volume, including whether this book is a bad ending, I will express some of my thoughts here. In order to prevent spoilers, I will put it on the second floor.

First of all, the advantages are that the writing style is very comfortable and the daily writing is very good. This is why I persisted in reading it. Then let's talk about the shortcomings: First, it was a bit abusive in the early stage. Being almost beaten to death by two gangsters twice made the impression really bad. Second, too much text is spent on some inexplicable NPCs. A typical example is Shan. As a member of the Connector organization, he is a supporting role among the supporting roles and has no role at all later. However, the author gave him two or three single chapters, which greatly affected the sense of substitution. Delores, one of the protagonist's best friends, does not receive this treatment. I hope that the characters the author opens in single chapters in the future will at least be related to the protagonist. Third, the later period is basically all about historical background and debate. Not only is the author not good at it, but readers also don't like to read it. The protagonist obviously has the ability but does nothing, just wanders here and there to take a look. Especially the desertion behavior of giving up the southern new area is extremely poisonous in male videos (the same as the plot logic of the author's new book). This kind of behavior of giving in despite being obviously capable is the most cowardly and the most unpopular. To sum up, Until the Ice Crystals in the Sky is above the passing mark. If you don't want to feel uncomfortable, you can skip reading the following volumes of The Lost Psalms and just watch the ending.

Judging from the author's other books, this one can be said to be a dud. The beginning and middle are colorful, but the ending ruins the beauty of the entire book. The protagonist and Pulin have a big problem. The protagonist obviously has the ability to prevent all tragedies, but loses this opportunity step by step. If it is the protagonist in the early stage, I can understand it, but the protagonist experiences an awakening after experiencing a tragedy every time, but he talks about his ideas over and over again without changing, just talking in general terms. Only in the later stage does he think of uniting the south and integrating forces, but the whole After the merger, there was a meaningless victory and an anticlimactic reform. Since we have made up our minds, we have to change, but the protagonist is just waiting. I don't understand what we are waiting for. There are many similar situations in history, waiting for the person in power to self-destruct before taking power to carry out reforms, but that is all because the person in power is too strong. Now that the protagonist is a strong person and has defeated Pulin, why not move to the central government. Many bloody sacrifices in the later period are unnecessary. The same reforms in the hands of the protagonist may be more tolerant, such as cutting off the power of the elves. As the inheritor of the ice elves, the protagonist has innate space for dialogue. Similarly, for the plutocrats, a ruler known for being tolerant also has the conditions for negotiation. In this case, it is because Pulin is in power and people understand that there is no way out, so they fight to the death and shed blood and sacrifice. The protagonist looks like a person in the early and middle stages, but in the later stage, he looks like a sad tool that has lost himself and can only advance the plot in vain. I can't see the author's love for his daughter Similarly, the author wants to write about Pu Lin. Lin's courage to move forward, her boldness and straightforwardness, maybe it can be said in the first half of the book, but in the second half of the book, I only saw a dictatorial tyrant. Humanity has retreated from the interstellar era to a feudal dynasty. Every offense Pulin made to the protagonist was forgiven. The poor man who cut off the friend fee, but the tyrant did not end in the end. On the contrary, he wanted to continue to usher in brutal suppression of the former, so that the tyrant could have a happy ending. This is contrary to the protagonist's idea of reforming the federation. The protagonist is contradicting himself I hope the author can correct these problems in the third book, learn from experience and lessons, and get better and better.

After reading the first volume, my overall impression is on the higher side! I felt that the reading was a bit rushed, and many places are worth reading slowly The author later said that the plot was written in a hurry. After thinking about it, I felt that it was like this. The fight between the two was the most difficult to resolve. The foreshadowing was so confusing that they naturally started fighting (of course it was partly because I read too hastily). In short, this plot is not very convincing to me, the considerations and mental journey of my sister committing suicide and combining with choosing my sister. This is because the sisters who are in sync with each other have to dissolve one of them due to the misalignment of their growth time. This is a standard tragedy. Is the writing too hasty? In the end, all I felt was a pity There was nothing good to say Girls, witches, daily life, fairy tales, communication My favorite The heroine is full of gray hair! This book is a continuation of the world of the previous work. The accumulation of more than three million words of the world view is quite interesting, but I have not read the previous work and can only rely on intermittent posts to understand hh...

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