I'm Really Not a Criminal Genius

The era background setting is wrong, and the modern police have become super losers The intelligence and behavior of the protagonist and villain are completely inconsistent, the intelligence of passers-by and supporting characters is too low, and the sense of separation is too serious

I feel like I am forcibly subduing the detective

I knew you couldn't stand this test

I don't know if you can stand the test

If you don't like this book, you can just criticize it, there is no need to write it off!

I've only read more than ten chapters, and I'm not qualified to comment on the online IQ label. But when confronting a criminal, the protagonist directly bought a mind-reading skill from the system and pretended to be reasoning 🤔 I thought it was a battle of wits. It's okay if you go directly to technology 😅 Could you please remove the detective reasoning label? This is fraud 🙂

How can I put it... Many places are just for the sake of plot promotion, and logic is simply ignored. For example: taking away evidence cards, concealing information about the existence of the Sin Blood Organization, concealing the girl's confession, the police are also Conan-level.

The first paragraph made me feel that the author has no common sense. Viruses should be from junior high school. Viruses are DNA fragments without complete cell structure. Their survival method is destined to be parasitic. Then for this "black worm", first of all, how do you judge the color of the virus? Viruses are very small and can only be observed under an electron microscope. The image of an electron microscope is only black and white, but this is not the color produced by the reflected light of the virus. It is just an image, so you can make it black or white, so it is impossible to identify it as black. Then this "nematode", let's think it is a filovirus. All currently known filoviruses are related to Africa, and they are all extremely contagious and pose a great threat to humans. It is irresponsible of the hospital and inaction of the government to release the protagonist before the transmission route is determined. This doctor can be found guilty of intentionally spreading infectious diseases (crime of endangering public safety in a dangerous way) and sentenced to fixed-term imprisonment of not less than three years but not more than ten years. Whoever causes serious injury or death or causes heavy losses to public or private property shall be sentenced to fixed-term imprisonment of more than ten years, life imprisonment or death. Anyone who negligently commits the crime in the preceding paragraph shall be sentenced to fixed-term imprisonment of not less than three years but not more than seven years; if the circumstances are relatively minor, he shall be sentenced to fixed-term imprisonment of not more than three years or criminal detention.

In fact, the subject matter and creativity of this book are quite good, but I felt that it was a bit too serious to trick the police and the villain. And on the premise that the protagonist has no ability to protect himself, why are you jumping like this, and it was broadcast live. People can commit crimes and kill people, but they can't kill you?       And I haven't written a few live broadcasts, but it has become a reality in the past few days. If you really can't grasp this level, I suggest you change the name, otherwise you will get sidetracked sooner or later. And don't you think the live broadcast is a bit too restrictive? The bloody aspect can limit you to death.

There is a problem with the fundamental logic of this novel. What kind of criminal organization is this? It's bullshit in front of the country. It just has criminal genes but not superpowers. They have mutated into gods. This group of people really existed and had been wiped out long ago. They are typical social restless elements and are harmful to the rule of a country. They are typical mortal enemies. You think you can continue to be promoted because of your superior IQ, and then this country will be ruled by you. What the hell.

I'm not going to complain. The stronger the protagonist's plot is in the beginning, the more frustrating it will be to be forced to join the sinful blood later. The official description of the power is also too weak. It's really frustrating to watch. My personal opinion is that the protagonist can no longer write the plot since he joins the Sin Blood. You are a criminal yourself and then live broadcast to fight criminals. In the eyes of other criminals, you are fighting them to satisfy your own desires. If the protagonist does not commit a crime once, why don't you turn over the table and wait for the protagonist to arrest them one by one and finally arrest the twelve stars?

After reading more than a dozen chapters, your way of writing can easily cause trouble. First of all, background issues. Even though it seems that the ban has been lifted and you are asked to write about the police, this is the way you describe it. . . . . . Pray yourself not to get angry, otherwise you probably won't be able to escape.

The downfall of this book is the protagonist's plug-in. If you don't have a plug-in, you can play with the protagonist casually. So what does this plug-in do? So this book is just like that. It can be read but not many people will put it on the shelves.

I didn't read the article, I just read the introduction. I want to know, won't criminals retaliate for such a live broadcast? In addition, if it becomes popular, criminals are not Internet novices, they will also watch the live broadcast, and your schedule will be exposed, won't people be on guard against you?

There are quite a lot of restrictions on this type of writing, right? Won't something happen if you continue to write like this?

Guys, this is the importance of the new book issue, please! ! !

Recommended words: Travel through parallel worlds and interpret extraordinary life! Although this work is still in its infancy, the profound meaning of the world view and the influence of the system on the protagonist can be seen. The author's writing style is also worthy of reading by book lovers. As a systematic detective mystery, it is not as mindless and refreshing as similar works. This aspect is the icing on the cake for the entire work! The young protagonist Chen Zhou was diagnosed with a terminal illness and his time was running out. The Heavenly System gave him a chance to extend his life, but the reality was not as simple as he imagined! Doesn't anyone really think that the system only gives you a simple live broadcast task? If you encounter a crime during the live broadcast, punish the other party and get rewards! Facing the increasingly difficult live broadcast tasks, Chen Zhou did not stop his efforts. The rewards and abilities given by the system allowed him to move closer to the goal of being a top detective. It also enabled Chen Zhou to not lose the upper hand when facing increasingly powerful opponents and fight against each other! An opponent asked Chen Zhou, what is good and what is evil? "Good and evil are not opposed to each other, but are entangled with each other." "Good and evil depend not only on the motivation, but also on the result!" Chen Zhou's answer represents his inner recognition of human nature. In his view, every opponent who goes astray has the possibility of returning to the light. It is the definition of good and evil, and it is also full of hope for human nature!