Immortality Begins with the Unenlightened Heart Sword

To be honest, I have read so many Xianxia novels, and you are the first to explain that the way of practicing Qi Shi is to open your mouth wide to swallow the air, and then close your mouth to digest it, just like drinking from the northwest wind. It is... Quite contrary to the style of painting. ps: I'm sorry, the Taoist version of the Qi-eating method I read is as follows: first close your mouth, slowly introduce air through your nose, and when the breath is full, swallow the clear air in your mouth into your abdomen like a swallow. I don't know which version you are reading, but this is a novel about cultivating immortals. After all, there is no aura on earth and you cannot cultivate immortals. If you want to copy Baidu's Taoist physical exercise method to write a novel without making any modifications, it would be really unethical and unfair.

,,, Shui, especially the chapter where trouble is made, skipping it will not affect you at all, and then,,, others don't believe that the protagonist is strong? The protagonist doesn't care either? No one checked, so they subconsciously thought that the protagonist was bad? What a pretentious plot from ancient times.

Collapse, collapse, collapse, a period of foundation building, trying to understand the rules, I have endured it in the past, I thought your hang-up was big enough, but the more you write, the more excited you are, and you still use ink, one sentence is divided into ten sentences, and you especially like to show off your writing style, just like a breakthrough, you have a breakthrough, and you still have to write two chapters, is it an old woman's foot binding?

Let me give you a small suggestion. Since you know that you have no martial arts or spells, and you don't even know the most basic basic swordsmanship, it makes no sense to practice the sword heart. The sword manual is equivalent to power, and the basic swordsmanship is equivalent to teaching you how to use this power. You don't even know how to use strength, but you still have to compete in a competition. What do you think? It's okay if you practice or understand the sword's heart with basic swordsmanship, but you want to run or fly if you can't walk.

This is really good at water. Let me tell those who haven't seen it how to use water. Before it was released, the male protagonist was still at the fifth level of Qi training. The real situation was that he was at the fourth level of Qi training. When he reached the fifth level, he temporarily took pills. If you think you are not hydrated enough, just practice Qi for five times! Ten chapters at level 1 is almost enough, and you think it's still acceptable. The real situation is that the male protagonist starts with the third level of Qi training, and when he is good at it, he will advance to the next level. Okay~ You said that it is not easy to cultivate immortality and difficult to improve. But when the whole story is released, there are almost only two story scenes. One is the training ground and the other is his home. Two points and one line, no change. Okay~ Maybe you will say that the plot is the core. But the whole plot is like this: "The male protagonist has a chapter of practicing water, a chapter of post-cultivation water, a chapter of practicing martial arts, a chapter of martial arts breakthroughs, a chapter of martial arts effects, and a chapter of successful cultivation and coming to the training ground to PK and fight with others. Then back to The family continues to practice, and the effects of practice and exercises have been discussed for several chapters. After being successful in practice, I go to the practice ground to fight PK with others..." The plot framework is like this, practice > go to the practice ground to fight > go home to practice > go to the practice ground to fight > go home to practice... Repeatedly cycle to the shelf.

It is similar to a book I have read before, and the techniques are also very similar. Are you the eunuch author of Yi Qi Jue?

This setting of the sword's heart is outrageous. It was the first time Xiu Xian made a dog leash to wrap around his neck.

Does the author have a background in writing romance novels? How can a good combat and development novel be written as a romance novel? The back and forth is about the relationship between the male protagonist and various women. Is there nothing left to write about? After reading Chapter 60, is the protagonist allergic to men? Or does the man restrict his performance? Most of them are women, the financial sponsor is a woman, the good helper is a woman, and the one who makes trouble is also a woman. Personally, I feel that the plot is too cliche, and there is a sense of urgency and incongruity. The anxious thing is that the protagonist has to compete for the qualifications of the inner sect. The frustrating thing is that he has written dozens of chapters about practicing for a few months before the game, and he has not yet reached a few levels. It stands to reason that with a plug-in with the attribute of proficiency, temporary gains and losses should not be a consideration at all for the protagonist. As long as he lives steadily, he will be invincible in the future. Why worry~ This book is suitable for reading without thinking at a glance. Whether you want to spend money or not depends entirely on your personal ability.

During the qi training period, sword intent, sword heart, and domains have all come out. The third level of qi training has also completed the entire third level. What to write next? Your qi training has caught up with the Nascent Soul Transformation in other people's novels.

It's really Shui's heart-rending madness. Basically, there is a sword in one chapter, and the rest is self-analysis and interpretation, for fear that the plot will be difficult to write.