Immortality Begins with the Sword of Ignorance

To be honest, I came here for Golden Finger, but I don't like it. A simple evaluation: I didn't feel good at the beginning, but the retreat training was okay. I couldn't stand the sparring work anymore, and I kept pretending.

It feels like many of them are water numbers. The pacing was okay, but with too many narrations, it didn't seem that enjoyable.

It's too watery. I feel like I don't see much in these photos.

It's so well written, I hope the author keeps it up

If you don't update, can you please post a single chapter to ask for leave? There is no news at all times.

To be honest, I have read so many Xianxia novels, and you are the first to explain that the way of practicing Qi Shi is to open your mouth wide to swallow the air, and then close your mouth to digest it, just like drinking from the northwest wind. It is... Quite contrary to the style of painting. ps: I'm sorry, the Taoist version of the Qi-eating method I read is as follows: first close your mouth, slowly introduce air through your nose, and when the breath is full, swallow the clear air in your mouth into your abdomen like a swallow. I don't know which version you are reading, but this is a novel about cultivating immortals. After all, there is no aura on earth and you cannot cultivate immortals. If you want to copy Baidu's Taoist physical exercise method to write a novel without making any modifications, it would be really unethical and unfair.

,,, Shui, especially the chapter where trouble is made, skipping it will not affect you at all, and then,,, others don't believe that the protagonist is strong? The protagonist doesn't care either? No one checked, so they subconsciously thought that the protagonist was bad? What a pretentious plot from ancient times.

Collapse, collapse, collapse, a period of foundation building, trying to understand the rules, I have endured it in the past, I thought your hang-up was big enough, but the more you write, the more excited you are, and you still use ink, one sentence is divided into ten sentences, and you especially like to show off your writing style, just like a breakthrough, you have a breakthrough, and you still have to write two chapters, is it an old woman's foot binding?

Let me give you a small suggestion. Since you know that you have no martial arts or spells, and you don't even know the most basic basic swordsmanship, it makes no sense to practice the sword heart. The sword manual is equivalent to power, and the basic swordsmanship is equivalent to teaching you how to use this power. You don't even know how to use strength, but you still have to compete in a competition. What do you think? It's okay if you practice or understand the sword's heart with basic swordsmanship, but you want to run or fly if you can't walk.

This is really good at water. Let me tell those who haven't seen it how to use water. Before it was released, the male protagonist was still at the fifth level of Qi training. The real situation was that he was at the fourth level of Qi training. When he reached the fifth level, he temporarily took pills. If you think you are not hydrated enough, just practice Qi for five times! Ten chapters at level 1 is almost enough, and you think it's still acceptable. The real situation is that the male protagonist starts with the third level of Qi training, and when he is good at it, he will advance to the next level. Okay~ You said that it is not easy to cultivate immortality and difficult to improve. But when the whole story is released, there are almost only two story scenes. One is the training ground and the other is his home. Two points and one line, no change. Okay~ Maybe you will say that the plot is the core. But the whole plot is like this: "The male protagonist has a chapter of practicing water, a chapter of post-cultivation water, a chapter of practicing martial arts, a chapter of martial arts breakthroughs, a chapter of martial arts effects, and a chapter of successful cultivation and coming to the training ground to PK and fight with others. Then back to The family continues to practice, and the effects of practice and exercises have been discussed for several chapters. After being successful in practice, I go to the practice ground to fight PK with others..." The plot framework is like this, practice > go to the practice ground to fight > go home to practice > go to the practice ground to fight > go home to practice... Repeatedly cycle to the shelf.

It is similar to a book I have read before, and the techniques are also very similar. Are you the eunuch author of Yi Qi Jue?

This setting of the sword's heart is outrageous. It was the first time Xiu Xian made a dog leash to wrap around his neck.

Does the author have a background in writing romance novels? How can a good combat and development novel be written as a romance novel? The back and forth is about the relationship between the male protagonist and various women. Is there nothing left to write about? After reading Chapter 60, is the protagonist allergic to men? Or does the man restrict his performance? Most of them are women, the financial sponsor is a woman, the good helper is a woman, and the one who makes trouble is also a woman. Personally, I feel that the plot is too cliche, and there is a sense of urgency and incongruity. The anxious thing is that the protagonist has to compete for the qualifications of the inner sect. The frustrating thing is that he has written dozens of chapters about practicing for a few months before the game, and he has not yet reached a few levels. It stands to reason that with a plug-in with the attribute of proficiency, temporary gains and losses should not be a consideration at all for the protagonist. As long as he lives steadily, he will be invincible in the future. Why worry~ This book is suitable for reading without thinking at a glance. Whether you want to spend money or not depends entirely on your personal ability.

During the qi training period, sword intent, sword heart, and domains have all come out. The third level of qi training has also completed the entire third level. What to write next? Your qi training has caught up with the Nascent Soul Transformation in other people's novels.

It's really Shui's heart-rending madness. Basically, there is a sword in one chapter, and the rest is self-analysis and interpretation, for fear that the plot will be difficult to write.

I feel that after the protagonist merges with Gray Mist, he always says that there is no influence, and he can pursue his true heart and become a fun person to accelerate his growth. The problem is that when you grow, you don't dare to let Tenshin surpass Kenshin. As a result, you have more ways to pollute others. But for this, the whole character has changed. He is talkative, takes a concubine at will, and always wants to make big news. It is completely different from the previous period. Are you sure it is not because you don't know how to unfold the plot, so you find a reason for the protagonist to cause trouble everywhere? Moreover, if this kind of situation where the soul is polluted is really fought in the later stage, under the background of Tiandao's tendency, won't it be sacrificed or suppressed?

To be honest, if you can't think of a plot, stop rambling and let the protagonist break through to the next stage. Don't fixate on the settings. It's outrageous enough to have things like Sword Heart, Tianxin, Sword Intention, and Domain in one Qi training period. Also, titles like Tianjiao and Holy Son are not that outrageous. Come on, fantasy is not that outrageous.

It was originally very good, but with so many female supporting characters, you are a bit hungry, and you always feel that you are in two places, wandering between stupid and not stupid.

Just one sentence makes me feel like a child holding gold in a busy city You said that your sword heart can bless others. Do you know how scary it is? Forget it for your cousin, why don't you give it to the lady from the aristocratic family? The world of cultivating immortals! Your function is completely a top resource for cultivating high talents and high understanding. How dare you use it for a lady from a family of cultivators? I just lock you up and squeeze you. Do you have a temper? Special abilities must only be used by yourself in the early stage. If you wait until you have entered the mountain gate and reached the foundation building stage, then you can use them on the people you trust most, and you will become more and more angry. I really can't understand it! It was a good book at first, but the system is messed up. If there is a book on swordsmanship, I have to choose a book on Qinqinjian. If the roundness is not restored, we can practice together, but we can't choose the exercises? What are you going to say that the follow-up skills are stuck, so you really don't want to enter the inner door? Just enter the inner door and change it. If others are slow to repair it, how can you be slower to repair it? The most annoying thing is here. People can only block the skills, but you can get the full version of this swordsmanship. What's the reason? Swordsmanship can't stop you, right? There is also this B sword technique, which involves sound skills but not sound skills, sword skills but not sword skills. I even play with the sword to practice. I just want to look cool. Don't talk about superposition and non-superposition. It is better to say that I have learned a music method.

Kenshin's blessing to others is indeed a bit of a failure, and his strength is seriously reduced😓

If you can't please others, your sword's heart will be covered in dust. What people give you will really taste good. If you throw something on the ground and then pick it up and eat it, you won't feel guilty. If you just pick it up on the ground for a long time, you can't finish it. It can also convey that you are really not afraid of death. You can't be self-sufficient if you just stay up and practice. If you want to show off, go faster. If you want to press the progress, open other modules. This plot is really amazing.

Goodbye, that's bullshit. Once the pig's feet are upgraded, the foundation will be unstable. Inexplicable

The article about cultivating immortals has a light and refreshing taste, which is different from others.

Where did you buy the first three chapters? There's a bunch of garbage in the back

Those who know you are practicing Qi, but those who don't know think you are going to achieve Daluo Jinxian. Cultivation is the most important thing. You are thinking of chasing the high-speed train before you learn to walk. When your realm is high, let's see how you write. You will collapse.

It's your uncle's fault, pay me back! ! ! ! ! ! Pay me back the money! ! ! !

The writing was broken. The author doesn't even know how to write it now. The protagonist has various dimensionality reduction attacks, the body's magic power and soul are hundreds of times stronger than the same level, and the understanding of all kinds of difficult exercises are all included. During the foundation building stage, the four gods were possessed, and the Emperor of Heaven could no longer be insulted, so he directly beat the golden elixir during the foundation building stage. The proficiency of various extremely difficult techniques has reached the master level, and it is difficult for Yuanying to become a god. Now that the golden elixir has passed, it may not be easy to get a Nascent Soul. Nascent Soul is already the top fighting force of the sect, and other righteous paths owe all kinds of favors. I have never introduced a high-dimensional world where Yuanying is everywhere, and the transformed gods are not as good as dogs. There is no new map to write. The alien gods have fully invaded the lower planes. I am afraid that dozens of alien gods' abilities have not been thought through yet, and they have been shelved. In short, in order to embody the hero's awesomeness, I have dug deeper and deeper into the pits and now I can't even climb out 😅

Is this the rhythm of eunuchs? There has been no update in the past two days? 😰😒

This eunuch has opened a new pit. Click his name to check it out.

To be honest, I don't want to pursue it. The author keeps bragging about the protagonist's awesomeness. He boasts that the protagonist is already the Emperor of Heaven at the peak of foundation building. There are all kinds of invincible dimensionality reduction attacks, and the latest chapter has a great prophecy. The book will end quickly after writing this way. Old authors can't write the late fantasy period, so new authors should not challenge it. Now the protagonist is floating in the sky, with no routine at all, and he has been promoted to a golden elixir for three chapters.