Controlling Beasts and Immortality Starts from the Heaven and Earth Silkworms

I have read a few chapters and the author writes well. Keep up the good work.

The writing is okay, but there are a few slight problems. First, you can see the direction of evolution, which is too buggy, because as long as the protagonist's pet evolves, everyone else will know it. The general direction is that it is difficult to evolve, and the protagonist should also have difficulty evolving. It might as well be that everyone can evolve, but everyone has different evolution directions and different combat abilities, so this will be better. Second, the choice of the protagonist is too unique, and no normal person would choose it. If the protagonist is chosen, and then becomes powerful, it will easily lead to problems, because you are a commoner, but you are so powerful. Is it normal? It is not normal. There is no logic at all. It is better to choose a normal one, but when it comes to training, it has great production capacity and good quality, which is more in line with the theme. Although you can be as imaginative as you want when writing a novel, I feel it still needs to be reasonable. Finally, I hope the author will get better and better as he writes more.

I think if you can produce high-grade silk, you can produce inferior silk.

When I saw the second chapter, I took a bunch of inexplicable money-giving links as a human thing, and then I went to the second floor where I wanted to collect money. I chose a spirit beast that clearly told you that it was useless. Isn't it just to tell others that you have a problem? Then I chose an elder who could collect money in proportion to your income. In the end, I didn't tell you which spirit beast was useful. I feel like I just want to write something and the result is this.

Every time I see this kind of robbery plot, it's hard to break down. If you go out to rob, wouldn't you be prepared? Normal people know to buy some disposable props as backup, but don't you know about the high-risk occupation of robbery? Then you can do it casually on the first level of Qi training, and prepare for the second level of Qi training. If you can't write it, don't write it. Why does it have to have a robbery plot?

The setting is very good and the plot is the same as Shi

Always practice Qi level one, kill Qi level 2, 3, 4, and 5. It's so illogical. Except for the protagonist's luck.

The plot and setting are both good, but there is a problem with wording and sentence making!

It's totally mindless and full of flaws.

I want to ask, can the silk spun by this cicada bind a female nun?

What's wrong with the author? What's wrong with the discontinuation of updates...

The writing is exactly the same as the novel I read a few pages at once, but that novel was about Gu worms, and it collapsed after less than 100 pages.

After reading the first chapter, it feels very familiar. A comparison is the same as Changsheng starting from refining Gu.