My Experience in Jiu Shu World Liver

Turn on the listening mode and feel like listening to your words.

Stop writing stories and plots. Your countless seniors have already written those plots countless times. Write more liver skills, liver skills, and some adventures, or skills or exercises given by seniors of the same sect to younger disciples. These skills and exercises can have different effects. Maoshan is a big sect. In addition to mainstream exercises and skills, there are also some unknown and powerful skills that no one has successfully practiced in modern times.

Let me talk about my views on this book (I am a book listener). The subject matter is interesting. One of the reasons for my poor performance is that I heard it. It always appeared in the previous chapters - 'After all, they are my junior brothers, I have the responsibility to take care of...' 'The nature of the two of them is such that it is not good for me to interfere...'. That's probably what these two sentences mean. Doesn't the author find it contradictory? This is actually the first time I have seen the character of the protagonist be portrayed in such a "tangled" way. When two junior brothers are going to get into trouble, you can write about it in an uninformed way, but you always emphasize that you know they are unreliable, but you still dare to do this? After the incident, he said, "After all, he is my junior brother...". This is a taboo! And you are the senior brother! I don't understand this definition. You are a junior brother and have no right to control it, but your status as a senior brother... So you should just cut it off completely! The character creation is so messed up!

Uncle Nine

After so many years, have you not read a single book on Feng Shui, Physiology, or Taoism? Can't it be turned into a skill? Most of these books only tell about liver experience, and only know how to use skills, such as talismans. If you know what they are composed of, you can develop them yourself. Just know the reckless skills. If the system disappears one day, the protagonist will be a complete waste. He has such a huge advantage and does not actively increase his own heritage. Just wait for someone to teach you. It's a fucking modern time traveler, if you don't know the plot of Chapter 3 😤. If you don't do it if you can increase your understanding in disguised form, you will become a reckless man. It's just a waste, I hope the author can work harder! Don't lose your IQ.

You authors, please be human and spare Uncle Jiu.

Uncle Nine

Although I have only read 14 chapters, the character portrayal is not very good. Firstly, the character of the protagonist, and secondly, the interaction between Qiu Sheng and Wencai. As the saying goes, there is no comparison and no harm. There is no change at all in what you wrote. There is no protagonist at all. It is basically the same as the Uncle Nine movie. It is just a few names of the protagonists added to this book.

I don't want to read anything when I see the so-called human teacher and earth teacher.

After seeing the main character Gan Liuding Liujia, I was finally sure that this kind of liver was not suitable for me to read. I couldn't see what was so exciting about this book. 80% Of the text was about the protagonist practicing, what he practiced, how much experience he gained, and then he sighed that it felt so good to feel stronger all the time, and then continued practicing. Then what? So after writing 10,000 chapters, it's still a non-stop skill, and nothing more? Long Aotian mainly creates a slap-in-the-face plot, and by the way, he opens a harem to auction the ruins. At least he is doing something else. I think this kind of novel can only be accepted by people who like liver games. It doesn't matter what the game is, and it doesn't matter what the main theme of the game is. Others have ten materials, and the liver emperor has to fight ten thousand. All in all, as long as the liver is enough, it doesn't matter what the game experience is.

It is recommended to be careful when checking the information. Although the three mountains are from the same family, the basic scriptures are still different.

The water is so slippery, you will definitely be among the top three in the water world!

Your fighting skills are very high, and you describe too much in your heart.

This book is all about psychological activities. I am also convinced.

. . . . . Be more precise.

What is the value of the protagonist? It's the same with or without you.

It's very bland, with too little interaction. For a person in the 21st century who can only practice cultivation, there is no heroine, and there is too much going on in the mind!

Whether the author can do this or not, he has always been practicing trading and refining tools. I don't want to subscribe when I see the chapter name 😰

What do you plan to write next? Are you done wandering around the country? Ascension is over? ! Or wandering abroad? Go to Xiaoli first? Are your days over? Going to Western Europe? Playing witch hunt? ! Then go to the United States to hunt demons? ! Then you are writing about Zhutian? Or is it that after ascending to the previous term, it will continue? ! And then the world will end? !

In the Republic of China, was there Master Wuxin? I don't need to tell you who should be included, and Si Teng is included, it's perfect.

She must have entered the palace. She has been waiting for two months.

It feels like becoming a disciple of Four Eyes or Uncle Nine.

Take a look at the recently updated chapter titles. Are you writing about deadlocks? !

Can you make a converter with a low-end Qiankun Cauldron, and convert corpse energy into spiritual energy for world upgrades to facilitate changing maps?

I posted a discussion thread and it was deleted, haha!

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

Completely completed means it's over? A eunuch? Entering the palace?