The Number One Heartthrob

The idea is good, but the writing style is too restrained! It makes it seem mediocre and lackluster.

This book is quite interesting. The beginning was easy to write, so the focus is on the later parts, especially the depiction of how wealth leads to a more realistic and less internet-savvy lifestyle. At least for now, it seems quite cheerful and relaxing, and the characters' intelligence is all acceptable. Keep up the good work, author!

It's so badly written, a complete victim of injustice.

Yes, the main plot is clear: it's all about money. Everything else is secondary.

It's very well written, funny and silly. I'm giving the author 100 coins as a reward.

It's alright, the protagonist has a clear goal and isn't a Mary Sue.

I'm getting out of the loop. I've been watching live streams for over ten years, and most of them are short texts.

The protagonist's sudden wealth in real life is utterly baffling. First of all, all his income is legal and legitimate, so why fabricate another lie to cover it up? The lottery ticket is real, the game account is real, the stocks are real. Even the authorities can't suspect you; what is there to doubt? After all, he has financial experience.

It's been all just live stream tipping all the time, it's getting a bit boring.

It's well-written, no major flaws found, the author's intelligence is on point, the plot flows smoothly, keep it up, just need more frequent updates in the early stages.