My Condition Is Very Strong

I just finished reading the latest book. What should I say about this book? The writing style is relatively average and there is no big problem in reading it, but when the plot is about to climax, I can't ignite it. Then there is the characterization. After reading these chapters, I felt a bit like an NPC. The description is relatively one-sided. I have never been involved in the protagonist, including the protagonist. It feels like the author is playing an RPG game and then writes about the protagonist's experience.

If you see the invincible flow, don't read it. The classics overwhelm the protagonist and have 0 luck. In one chapter, the author directly said that it is impossible for the protagonist to draw money. I don't know why the author hates the protagonist so much 😥

The introduction is actually okay. At least it can arouse my curiosity about what the golden finger of this book is. But when I look at the table of contents, the golden finger does not appear until Chapter 67, I immediately have no desire to read it. These days, readers read fast food articles. The best way for novices to write an introduction is to write out the attractive points of your book in a concise and clear way. At the beginning, throw out the golden finger or the protagonist's unique points. Then it's up to you to control your own writing style and plot. Old authors have a reader base and can slowly lay the groundwork. They can also write introductions. But new authors don't have a base of popularity. The first step is to attract people by the title of the book. The second step is the introduction. The third step is the table of contents. The fourth step is the first chapter. Don't think about hiding it to pave the way. You have to hit a point first to attract readers and then slowly lay the groundwork.

It seems that no one has read this novel except me, so why don't you give it a try?

Your attributes for the rest of your life are not in line with the golden state.

But my current condition is really very good. I think it will be another bloody storm when I play my cards.

Author, you can't write about invincibility. You'd better not write about it. While writing about invincibility, you're also suppressing the protagonist.

It's actually okay, but it's just that the new author is not popular. Take your time, as long as you don't collapse, it's actually still okay.

The author's writing is so good. If you stick to it, sooner or later you will become a master.

The key to choosing a sword as a weapon monster in the first dungeon affects the senses. There is also a whole chapter about how to practice this thing. Facing the known ones and there is a high probability of being placed on the opposite side - Orcs with agility to crush humans / elves with accurate long-range sniping The protagonist does not think about keeping a distance from melee and long-handled weapons and does not choose long-range weapons. Instead, he is ready to go up to fight with swords. To fight with swords, at least use swords and shields The overall feeling is hard to describe and I won't complain.

Damn it, what's wrong with you?

Starting from tomorrow, I will speed up the pace of the novel and try to do three chapters a day.

I just finished reading the latest chapter, I feel pretty good

The content is not too bad, but the introduction is really bad

I should be the last to see it, right? I am now 79th

Can we still see Alina in Robomania? Looking forward to it. If the timeline where the protagonist enters the mechanical craze is hundreds of years after the end of the ice age, I hope it can give Alina a good ending 🌹

Three or four updates a day, are you feeling well?

Emmm data is written. It's so messy.

The author can create a temporary state where the mask is removed, remove the negative effects of luck returning to zero for a period of time, and then draw a gold card. Is this okay?

This is the first time I see such a low investment. I don't know whether to comfort you or advise you. Emmmm, forget it. Just ignore me. I'm just a soy sauce passing by.