I Pushed the Kid!

The first trip was so well written that I will never forget it.

Update, 😭 update!

If I dare to have a harem, I will kill the author first, then sneak to Japan and kill Akasaka, and then kill myself.

I have never read the original work, but when I learned that Ai gave birth to two children at the age of 16, I felt increasingly uncomfortable. I don't want to read this book anymore. At first I thought it was my ridiculous possessiveness that caused the problem, but when I read Ogigen Sayu's fanfic, it didn't seem like this! I only found out why this happened a few hours ago. It turned out to be the author's description of love and the protagonist being at odds, disconnected, and hesitant. It keeps pulling and pulling there! The problem arises! What is it? I'll do it, you gave birth to someone else's child when you were 16. When it comes to the protagonist, just give me a push. Isn't this a fucking story about green tea and dog licking? I just said that the more I looked at it, the more uncomfortable I felt.

Hoshino Ai and the protagonist are so sweet, but switching to Ogura is so painful. I can only say that I can't stand it anymore. I don't know what the author wants to do with Ogura's character. I'll wait and see for now, throw it away as a favorite, and come back later to see what book friends think about it.

Shenmuguang, right (.`ω´)

I definitely can't wait until the heat of this episode wears off. Just write it and I'll keep reading.

Hoshino Ai

The hero's dead ball was reincarnated into the belly of Star Eye. It's okay if Star Eye's mother is dead. He and his sister inherited a star eye, and the younger sister was also killed. They didn't dare to watch this.

I recommend Kunzi

It's hard to review this book I've only read the first 20 chapters so far. The author's writing style is very advanced, but the character design is a bit disappointing. I read this book from the introduction. The first 20 chapters are quite good in terms of detail processing, vocabulary use and emotional lines. However, the protagonist is clearly hanging on to two people, and he has a very high IQ. I don't believe that the protagonist can't tell that Yuki Ogura likes him. In my opinion, there seems to be some contradiction between this "wooden" character and the "high IQ" character. Finally, I hope there won't be a harem. Most book friends follow your book because of its title and introduction. I don't need to tell you what Hoshino Ai is about. As for the harem, it's a bit ex, and it doesn't make up for some regrets (after all, you still have a harem if you love someone so beautiful?!). I'll leave the post here for now. I'll check it out later when I have time, and then come back to take back my dog's barking. In addition, attached pictures: I wish all book friends a happy reading! ! !

Is the author present? Come and let me teach you how to write. At 16, Ai joined the troupe and saw a man named Shenmu Guang. Don't worry about it, just mess with him! As for how to join? Just rely on that facial control!

Protagonist's ability: Although the protagonist's ability to see through lies is probably to fit in with the theme of "Idol's Lies", seeing the familiar ability again after a long absence, a wave of nostalgia still came over me. Crow-style narrative: In the category of "Japanese campus light comedy" from Qidian, the style of "crow-style narrative" has always been talked about. It is also very popular to hear that the author of this book is suspected of being a crow. This kind of suspicion, even with a compliment, has been seen in many books in the past two years. Off-topic: I remember when "Love Travel" was still being serialized, I commented in a book review: "This book has the flavor of Murakami Haruki's "Move"." When I saw the "crow-style narrative" that has been jokingly called the "crow-style narrative" in Qidian, I felt sad in my heart, haha.

The author's writing is excellent, and the interaction with love in the first 30 chapters is very well written. The image of love is very three-dimensional, which is very different from the comic image, and the whole story has the style of a light novel (which can be understood as the picture of a comic). This is a great point, and it is also the reason why I can continue to read. Isn't reading fan fiction just to make up for the sadness in my heart? However, as I continued to read, something became more and more wrong, and the content behind it became more and more biased. It could be said to be daily, but it was neither sweet nor interesting, and the plot was unsatisfying and unfeeling. I felt that the author did not know how to write, or it was due to his grades and unstable mentality. However, Hoshino Ai's character was not broken, so I held on, but when it came to the following content, I couldn't stand it any longer and decisively gave up. Let's talk about the shortcomings. ① The second female lead, the relationship between the protagonist and the second female lead is not handled well, the protagonist is indecisive, and the second female lead is shameless, there is no lower limit. ②The protagonist has no personality charm and contradictory personality, making him more and more annoying. ③The author wants to write more than 1.5 Million, but there is no need. I can feel that the author is very delicate in writing emotions. But the career line is really bad. It's better to focus on writing about daily emotions, have a single female protagonist, sprinkle more sugar, and finish it with more than 500,000 words. ④This is the biggest drawback. You are writing an original female character in a fanfic, but you still want to compete with the heroine in the anime for favor and start a harem? Is this really necessary? How many people have read this book rewriting Hoshino Ai's death? Or should you say that the audience for your book mainly comes from readers of "The Children I Pushed"? Your avatar is also Ai Hoshino. The original intention of writing this book should be partly to make up for the shortcomings in your heart, right? Hoshino Ai is already very miserable. When I read the novel, I just wanted to be gentler and gentler to this miserable girl who used lies to protect herself. But later... Ugh... Especially Hoshino Ai's "I like you" is a lie (poisonous point)... The protagonist is gibbering there. Let me ask you a question I like you, and I love you, there is no conflict at all. There is no need to write such a vulgar and boring misunderstanding in order to develop the plot, and finally abuse Hoshino Ai. Having said so much, it is also a deep love. I hope the author will become a talented person, because in my opinion, the first 30 chapters are really well written, and the emotional line between Star Love and the protagonist is really wonderful. After paying, just sprinkle the sugar as hard as you can, but you have to do the pulling, and then you don't understand it. I want to write Shura Field, but I can't write. It's a mess, and the character of Ai Hoshino begins to collapse. The delicate daily love is obviously heading towards a brainless harem. The protagonist is getting more and more disgusting. The behavior of the second female lead is getting more and more vulgar. It's for nothing. Even the writing in the end is not as good as before.

The purity is not very high

When the male protagonist reads Ai, he discovers that Ai is vaguely aware of his mind-reading ability. This makes the male protagonist, who is determined to use this ability to dominate the world, feel uneasy, so he uses the ability to manipulate Ai's fans to kill Ai (being able to read minds can discover all the psychological flaws of a person, and with the help of words, he can defeat the person's mind and allow him to be manipulated by words). Time has passed, and Ai's son Aqua has been tracing the truth behind his mother's death, and he actually discovered clues. But this cannot be hidden from the male protagonist who has the ability to read minds. So Aqua, who inherited his mother's talent, and the male protagonist with the ability to read minds started a wonderful battle of wits. In the end, the male protagonist, who had the ability to read minds and was hidden behind the scenes, got better and manipulated Akane to kill Aqua. But before the male protagonist could settle down, Ruby, who inherited her brother's legacy, used the same face as her twin brother to replace Aqua and continue the investigation. But this cannot be hidden from the male protagonist. So the male protagonist repeated his old trick and wanted to use Kana to kill Ruby, so that all the people who knew about it would die and he could become the Kami of the new world. Unexpectedly, Kana stretched her hips at the critical moment, revealing a flaw, allowing Ruby to successfully counterattack.

Hoshino Ai

What I wrote is so bland and I haven't updated it very often. Isn't it normal that I haven't read it? I convinced you straight away. Isn't it too arrogant? Fortunately, I am still helping to promote it in the group.

Kira!

I feel like the male protagonist is not good. He doesn't have the maturity of an adult. He has nothing but good looks.

What do you think? You write like a scumbag who keeps hanging on to others.

It has the illusion of watching anime at the starting point. It is really well written, and many scenes can even be imagined, as if you are following the anime. But it's a pity. Because of my personal experience, I don't like Hoshino Ai's character. Especially after the protagonist returns to Tokyo and meets Hoshino Ai again, Hoshino Ai's words and actions have brought back extremely bad memories for me. It's a pity that I can only miss a good book. Alas, what a sin 😭

Love is so difficult in the first half of life, and I am very happy to see that the protagonist can save her. I feel that the setting of the protagonist is somewhat similar to Aqua, which can be used as a reference, but the essence is still different. It can be said that the characters created by the author are very three-dimensional. I like all three characters very much. From the perspective of the original author, Ogura looks a bit like Arima, but the image setting is similar to the protagonist's image setting like Aqua, but the personality is completely different. At first I felt a little confused at the beginning, but the writing got better and better as I went on to write it. It was really sweet, and I was healed of the torture I suffered in the original novel. It can be seen that the author also likes this character very much. The novel is very well written. I hope the author can continue to update the plot later. It would be better if it can be longer!

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The writing is so good that I couldn't bear to abandon the book. Unfortunately, it's not like a fan. It's more like a parallel world written using only the background of the world I recommended. It's basically an original plot. There is no original plot, so there's no talk of saving love from being knifed. It's just another world line where you meet love from the initial time and then develop naturally. It's a pity for Ogura, but I still think that Ogura is obsessed with the protagonist 😃. I quite support it. If I continue to write, I hope Ogura will do it again. The protagonist still needs to continue working hard, improve himself, and become famous. The age setting of the article should be self-set to meet the requirements of the platform. It does not hinder reading. It will definitely not be 16 years old because Ai has not joined the theater group yet.