Card Owner

When I saw Chapter 11, I wanted to vomit out all the frustrations I had about reading fantasy novels in the past. Is there really a family that would make such a person a young patriarch? Is this because the family dies slowly? I think even if it is the eldest son inheritance system, they have to see if the eldest son is mentally retarded! Even if the patriarch likes him, then what exactly does he like about him? Is it possible that liking him can lead to the death of the family? And is the patriarch really the only one who dominates the whole family? Where are the elders? Where is the clan elder? Help me, please help me! The patriarch couldn't even see that his son had the talent to subjugate the clan. How did he become the patriarch? Oh~ I inherited it, then it's okay... That's a big deal! ! ! How did such a family survive to this day? Personal opinion (not specific to this book, I just want to spit out the rice that those family dudes in the fantasy novels I read before stuffed into my mouth) (＞人＜；)

I can only say that it is tasteless and a pity to abandon. I read 500 chapters and abandoned the book several times. If other Yu-Gi-Oh novels weren't updated too slowly, I wouldn't even have read them. The protagonist said 5-6 times that he was the finals champion in his previous life, but Zhacao appeared 4-5 times. You, the "finals champion", are very rich! Is it a one-person competition? The plot is not exciting at all. Maybe the game the author had in mind is exciting; however, the author is not capable of writing that "exciting" and "burning" feeling. The author writes one of the "very few" books that I can't read carefully in the Yu-Gi-Oh genre. Most of them I just glance at and turn the pages. Generally, when I read Duel books, I read them line by line. I couldn't find a duel game as "exciting" as other authors wrote. More than 500 chapters have passed. The protagonist faced almost invincible opponents several times and felt that he was "going to die here today"; there were also several times when he was about to die and exploded. He felt that writing like this could reflect his feeling of "seizing fate"; the author replied in other comments that the protagonist did not have the ability to "make cards" in the Southern Region, but didn't the protagonist make a lot of cards? Even cards like Lightning Strike and Lightning Storm have come out, why not make other general-purpose cards at the same time? The author said that the protagonist has been "playing low-level to high-level", but don't forget that the knowledge of the protagonist's previous life can offset this gap. The real gap is in "mental skills". The skills of the protagonist and most of the opponents are not at the same level at all. Suppressing the main character's combat power is a bit obvious. I only started making the "Pure Love Card Set" after more than 500 chapters. The Southern Territory is almost over. According to the author's writing, are you planning to write more than 3,000 chapters? However, I read the author's comment that most of the universal cards will be equipped "in a while", so why don't you slowly make universal cards from the beginning, one card at a time. I believe many people will like this kind of stamp collecting plot. If you collect all the content in the later stage in an instant, there will be nothing interesting to watch. It is no different from the kind of book that starts brilliantly, is watery in the middle and late stages, and ends poorly. What most readers like now is that the protagonist has a card from the super-era deck at the beginning, and then makes a component every once in a while, and slowly in the later stage, the deck is complete, and he starts to fight against all the invincible players in the world. The protagonist is either causing trouble, or on the way to it. Changes will happen wherever you go, and you will encounter enemies you can't afford to offend; but the protagonist can escape!!! Why does the protagonist jump like this when he doesn't have a "top" background? I'm really tired of watching this old-fashioned plot. Since the protagonist will not die no matter how much trouble he causes, then why not just go to the point and offend all the 12-star strong men? And then hang out under their noses every day. The protagonist trusts others easily, is sometimes very naive, and sometimes has a poor IQ. Regarding the protagonist's origin and experience, I think maybe the author needs to learn more from Gou Daoliu's novels. Some of the author's plots are very inconsistent and illogical. The author may not feel it himself, but you have an outline, so you know the follow-up plot and results; however, the readers do not know the follow-up. Your writing in this way is very inconsistent with the thinking of a "normal person who has experienced severe beatings from society" in the readers' eyes.

The writing is okay, but a lot of things feel strange. The theory of star strength is quite weird. Only high-star monsters can control high-star monsters, but monsters are stronger if they are not high-star. After all, there are many one-star monsters, and various summoning methods do not rely solely on star ratings. The way of training determines the control of the deck. Yes, it is possible, but it seems that switching to another training has no side effects. Will the protagonist hold the ground warrior for the rest of his life? It's not impossible to turn to dark cultivation and punch the bones. And it seems that the author did not consider that No card affects people's minds. I don't know if it is an anime effect, a general effect that cannot be broken by other than No. There are also No hunters and the like. If exposed, will it cause robbery and so on. One more suggestion, pay attention to the balance of strength. If the protagonist is upgraded, other supporting characters will follow suit, and the combat power will collapse.

After reading dozens of chapters, I couldn't help but complain, how was this protagonist created? Office workers have no emotional intelligence at all? Like the villain boss in other novels who acts as a cushion for the protagonist in the early stage, he inexplicably develops grudges with others. He is not very strong but has a bad temper The most important thing is that he has a low IQ, so he has to show off how much he knows? The villain sent a villain to test it out, and the protagonist revealed on the spot that he knew the effect of the no series of cards. Was he afraid that he would die quickly?

The subject matter is considered novel, but the plot of the family being brainless and overpowering the protagonist is a bit cliche. As the number one genius in the family, it is not taken seriously, which seems very unreasonable.

The role of Yang Mengdi is really blunt and forced to join. If you don't know how to write the heroine, don't mess around with it. Anyway, the brand guy doesn't want a partner. When you look at it, it feels like a piece of gold wrapped in a layer of shit. You can see it, but it makes people uncomfortable.

It doesn't work in the back, the protagonist is being pressured too hard. I haven't maxed out Fan Yong Kara even though I've reached 10 stars, and if there's no banned card list, there's no powerful single card. The only banned cards so far are a Pot of Desire and a Deceitful Lazy Angel, and there's no limit to banned cards, so it's not maxed out yet? Opponents of all levels can deploy in a standard way and create a standard field without getting stuck at all. They all know how to do a mixed axis. They all know their own eldest brother and their own magic traps, and even all the effects of their own family are clear. Only the average Master Duel player. However, the protagonist is stuck from time to time, is messy from time to time, and can't get the key cards and the big brother at every turn. He doesn't have the power to combine Super Fusion with the Cyber ​​Dragon, and he doesn't have the Cyber ​​Terminator and Kirami; he doesn't even have the Ultimate Dragon when playing Blue Eyes, not to mention the Ultra Dragon and Yuan Dragon. Destroyed so many forces and villains, forget it because of plot reasons, I have never seen Shenxuan and Hannuo, I have never seen chestnut balls, and there is no holy grail to pass cards. I set the magic trap to be a high-level card, and then everyone has their own magic cards to pass cards. The protagonist's deck can take out special ones when they see the light. However, Fan Yong has not seen a few cards, and he does not even know the effect of the pot.

Since the protagonist understands the cards, he should understand that the strongest deck is the Lament of Tears. Why can't he find a way to collect information about the angels who descend to the earth? Later, we will collect the meditation method for the three attributes of earth, water and darkness. With one step, you can directly cast the tears of angels. With five stars, you can do whatever you want in the normal environment. With ten stars, you will be completely formed.

After reading it, tell me your thoughts. Why does the protagonist always get into trouble every time he goes to that place? Either the city was destroyed, or people died. Those who had a good relationship with the protagonist were basically dead. And why do you still keep the heroine? They all died, leaving the heroine behind. Playing cards has been suppressed. I am either running or jumping around on the way. It is really depressing to watch. Every card game requires six or seven chapters. Not cool at all

{"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial"} As a poker player, there is nothing more exciting than entering the world of playing cards. Not just fighting monsters, but fighting between people can better reflect skills. Failure will result in death? Don't be afraid, I will be invincible. Only I can control my destiny! My destiny is up to me! Book title: "The Card Master" Author: Yunqiu Li Time: April 19-present Number of words: 230,000 words Tag: Yu-Gi-Oh!/Original Fantasy/Light Novel [Work Introduction] This book tells the story of a card player who has won a world championship and traveled to a world where card duels are used. He constantly improves his deck, collects information about the world, improves his strength, explores the secrets of "gods", and finally becomes the card master. [Reason for Recommendation] The deck itself is restricted by attributes and can only use monsters with the same attributes as those used in practicing skills. This avoids the general use of hand pits and makes the space for confrontation larger; the natal cards created after the character level reaches level five limit the direction of development, and there will be no situation where you will choose this set of cards regardless of the strength of the card. ＜System Improvement＞ The author gives a complete mental power function, from 1 star to 10 stars. The effect is mostly on the character itself and does not excessively affect the "card playing behavior". The mental power skills are equivalent to "magic drawing", not to strengthen the cards and keep the card system stable. ＜Small Theater＞ There is a small theater where the writer says at the end of the chapter, which can help complete the character image and allow readers to see some stories outside of the text, adding extra color to the story. [Recommendation] This is a novel that is relatively suitable for card players and people who are familiar with Yu-Gi-Oh. If you don't understand it, it will not affect the reading experience. The author and book friends gave relevant explanations in the comment area of ​​the article. The limitation of the deck in the article improves the confrontation experience, and the ability setting is novel and can solve the anger of the dealer (I cried to death); the contradictions are clear, the struggle between the family and the academy, the struggle between regions, and what the dream garden wants to achieve, all attract readers to continue reading. The conflict between the protagonist and his family has gradually come to an end. What deck will be used in the future? Why are the regions hostile to each other? Can Zhumengyuan unlock the secret of God? What is the patriarch planning? These plots are still waiting for us to continue to explore. It is not to be missed.

After reading ten chapters, I don't really want to read anymore, so I came here to complain. The book is creative and full of ideas, but I can't write online articles. 1. The first ten or so chapters have no explosive points, but they lay a lot of foreshadowing that can be seen at a glance, which makes people lose the desire to read further. 2. There are not many tricks for the protagonist, and most of them are banned because of their poor learning ability (scientific research ability). 3. I came here to watch a card game, but it took me a long time to get to the Ax Duel!!!!!! 4. Just reading the first few chapters, I feel that there is something wrong with the setting. Both the cards with powerful effects and the cards with poor effects are 3 stars. Can they be used at level 3? 5. To make a card, you must complete the wild card explosion fragments before you can make it. I feel like this setting doesn't work well. For example, will God appear later? What should I do if the production fails? What should I do if I don't have enough materials to make a card after playing one card? For example, ZEXAL, how to make the leader's card? Another example is the Blue Eyes White Dragon. Do we need to assume that there are many of them? Or will it be refreshed in place? 6. If you learn a skill with one attribute and can use a card with one attribute, then most people can't use a deck with multiple attributes like Baoyu Beast that is not very strong?

The broom star protagonist, right? As long as there is a relationship, the family will be destroyed.

Twenty-five years later, Dog K used a strange painting of a lightning strike to tell us who caused the lightning strike.

Why do we have to write a silly and sweet heroine who can only say "Ah, giegie is so awesome, giegie is so handsome, I admire her so much"

I read it and said that Zhulei is not that strong... No matter how far Zhulei has been cut, he can still be at the forefront of the pie chart. In the novel, there is no banned card list from K club to target the tears of tears. When I am in trouble, I don't have to worry about the battery life of Melting Narcissus. It fuses several times in your turn and it also fuses in my own turn. The strength is quite high. Why do some decks still have to play Dimension Attractor even though they are not compatible with it? It's because this card is the target card of Tears. If you think about how Zhulei survived after Narcissus was hacked to death and then got the first place in the pie chart, you will know the strength of Zhulei. But to be honest, the strength of the deck is not absolute. There is a restraint relationship between the deck and the deck. If you only look at the system, there is one deck that is better than the other deck. (A big deal here, if we don't agree with you guys, we can discuss it, don't criticize it directly, it's spicy 😭)

Just a stranger, why are there so many chapters and only a few comments?

... It seems a little depressing, and the protagonist also likes the deck used. There are too many reversals in the battle, and the enemy draws cards as if they have not been shuffled. All the ties are full. The enemy must have countermeasures when the protagonist plays cards, and the subsequent battle requires nearly ten chapters... It's outrageous

The first deck I played was the Kaiji of Light, the Great Sun Weapon. Although it looks cool, it's confusing to play. There are almost no special summons, and I can't play at all. It wasn't until I searched for the deck online that I discovered that no one was playing this deck. . . The second deck is the Holy Sword deck, where man and sword merge into one, making him invincible. The problem is that without a sword, you're doomed. The deck is full of 1- and 4-star monsters, and the extra deck only has 4-, 5-, and 9-star monsters, which feels quite suitable for the protagonist. The third deck is the Six Samurai The fourth is the living beings that close the earth/Alba Abyss (that should be the name), which is the teaching deck, Iron Beast Front, Treasure Guard Group and Albais. It feels very fun. Fusion summons require the use of fusion magic cards, but I hardly use them. Albais can directly use the opposite monster to fuse, just put it on the field and throw a card from his hand. It feels quite suitable for the protagonist, but currently the protagonist cannot fuse with the monsters on the opposite side (the protagonist is not strong enough now) I believe the protagonist will get more attributes in the future.

I have written three books and am still at LV1? Can the author make any profit? 😅

① The new book strongly recommends that the protagonist use his own bond deck to play throughout the text. Without soul cards and fixed decks, it will be very difficult and thankless for readers. After all, most card players read the book just to read the soul cards. Otherwise, why don't I just play a few cards and watch your duel? ② Reduce the proportion of hand pits in duels for the reasons mentioned above. Too many hand pits will make the duel boring. After all, few people want to listen to your story. It is better to abandon the lengthy hand-trap game and make the final structure more novelistic, and watch the two sides make the biggest mutual solution, divine draw and high attack OTK to increase the drama ③The theme does not need to be too heavy, it is better to be a little lighter. It doesn't have to be combined with fantasy settings such as martial arts, because it always feels a bit awkward when you write it this way ④ I hope to design a protagonist image that readers like. The author should take more opinions from readers and don't write him as a ruthless person in tights. ⑤The content and characters of the story are carefully polished, with as few logical errors as possible. I hope the author can write better and better

There's not even one update in a month. I've been writing for so long and I'll give you an ending 😢

I can only say, don't disgust the readers, just rely on your own preferences, are the twelve beasts strong enough? After leaving the ruins, I didn't think about how to crack it or how to get the power of the twelve beasts. Hey, I just used the blood-burning deck to make a 5-star upgrade to explode the ruins. I figured it out. Then the pure love fairy is also strong enough, right? Okay, I have to arrange a supporting role that is very inconsistent with the protagonist. At present, it may be the heroine. Kill it. Not to mention that Pure Love Fairy can make cards by herself, but only sleeps and plays ball, right? You don't need to take a shower or eat, right? If you don't revise your skills, you won't be able to play Di Shui, and if you revise your skills and your level is not high enough, you won't be able to play Terminal Big Brother. What a joke I don't want to take the Twelve Beasts when I have the opportunity, and I don't want to take the Pure Love Fairy when I have the opportunity. The same goes for the source number. The spirit beast of the 13-star card is bound to someone else and I can't get it off myself. Those who don't know think it is a spirit beast below the god level. You have to hide a skeleton there as a treasure, and don't have to put a deck that can be used in competitive games there to play as an entertainment deck. Is the arc dragon set really powerful? It's a deck that can't be ranked even in entertainment. Beetle's equipment is also not ranked in the entertainment industry. I really don't understand. Is it forcibly suppressing the protagonist's strength? If you think this level of card is too strong, you can not release it first. I don't think the current strength is as strong as releasing Twelve Beasts and Pure Love Fairy. After all, it is strong enough to kill the white dragon, but it is your fault to release it to force disgusting people. In addition, mental power forcibly interferes with mental duels and even directly kills people. Are they here to play cards or to cultivate immortality? Can't stand it, abandon the book If you write about similar themes in the future, try to have as few poisonous points as possible. Most people will bring it in when reading novels. If you bring it in, you can get good cards but don't take them. If you have to hide the Bone King to play, will you be happy reading it?