Doomsday Catastrophe, Start with a Plan to Create a God

Asking the female teacher to get dressed immediately after taking a shower is a very far-fetched plot that can be said to have no logic. Even if you said that you could make yourself invisible with your clothes when you touch the power stone while wearing clothes, but after a long time, you still discovered the location of the teacher by relying on the lace pajamas on the female teacher. Next, you said that the female teacher was not wearing clothes, which was inconsistent, and in the end, the male protagonist had no factual support, which served as a motivation to remind the female teacher to wear clothes. Suggestion to change to: In the previous life, the female teacher awakened her superpower while taking a bath, so she could not hide her clothes. In this life, the protagonist reminded her that her bathing time was postponed, so she awakened her superpower before taking off her clothes. By some mistake, she became invisible with her clothes. And your plot where the female teacher is lying in the male protagonist's arms and forcibly having an affair, it really made me feel numb and embarrassed. Even if you write that the protagonist tells her things related to her in the future, and helps her grow step by step, and builds a relationship at the same time, it is much better than your forced ambiguity. One more kind reminder, if you portray the heroine with a very low IQ and easy to make mistakes, I suggest you not write a heroine. Many people in modern society not only like to kill the virgin, but also hate idiots. If you originally wrote a good article, but your heroine is stupid, if it hinders the reading of the work, there will be problems in the follow-up of the work.

Poison to death. . . . . Can't stand the start

After reading it, I found that this was not written by Qidian. It was released without more than 20 chapters at Qidian.