Lord of Samsara Paradise

Because I haven't written any books for nearly ten years. I have forgotten how to write many words. Now it is said that they are produced by speech recognition, and the author is slowly learning.

All kinds of imagination will work, including barracks skills and equipment, and bloodline talents.

The author should be firmer, there are too many eunuchs in this paradise,

I almost thought it was the Zerg book, the talents are quite similar

Come on, the writing is pretty good, the attributes move so fast, just write it step by step, don't be a eunuch, I think it's pretty good, come on

It's a good book, but there are a lot of typos. You can check it yourself a few times before posting.

The protagonist is too weak, so I prefer a balanced physique. Otherwise, the assassin type will kill the protagonist easily. The space assassin, like Boob Wang, will run a bomb next to you and directly GG the protagonist. You must also have melee capabilities. The protagonist is a lord. Every boss has a large amount of health and explosive attack power. Otherwise, how would he be qualified to be a lord boss?

Collect it first and see what the author writes later:

You're a bit confused. The first sister has already taken out the gold treasure chest, but there is still a purple deep purple in the middle. Hold on to it.

There are too many typos and it's hard to read.

How could there suddenly be a world setting? Didn't see it at all before

This update speed, hey, is just a little slower than the donkeys of the production team.

Your typo is more abstract than Black Goat's.

After seeing the competition with Zhang Yi, I felt there were some problems 1. There was no foreshadowing in the protagonist's choice of techniques. I felt that he chose an unpopular technique casually. It would be better to introduce some psychological ideas before choosing; 2. The protagonist's weapons are growth weapons. Except for the better materials, there is nothing special about them. Ordinary blacksmiths have no paradise bonus. Isn't such a growth weapon a bad thing? 3. Personally, I feel that the conflict between the protagonist and Zhang Yi is a bit playful. Most of the hunters in Samsara Park are ruthless people. There are conflicts, exchanges of force, and glares at each other... When the competition comes, everyone needs to go all out, and some advise the protagonist not to explore his own information... I can't stand it anymore.