
Net King: Tezuka Is My Childhood Friend
网王:手冢是我发小
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 576k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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8.7kFans
198Chapters
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The author's outline is very problematic
This is the enhanced Tezuka, and Yukimura has also been enhanced too much. Sanada didn't even finish Fuulin Volcano, and you started destroying Mugan. Can the uninjured Tezuka not be able to defeat Yukimura? What kind of international joke are you kidding? How did u17 Tezuka treat Yukimura after he recovered from his injury? Are they all in full form now? Or is it the strengthened Tezuka who can't beat Yukimura? Is this nonsense? Also, since the protagonist looks down on junior high school students, he might as well become a ronin like Byodoin and Ryuya, traveling around the world and challenging powerful enemies. Why do you have to come back to play house? Is it fun to travel around the world in the first grade and then come back to bully the weak in the second grade? Really, when people from the Free World Championship come back to compete in junior high school competitions, they are really bullying the weak.
. . Even though Tezuka has been strengthened so much, he still can't beat Yukimura.
Oh oh! For the first time, I discovered that Tezuka was right to play a supporting role. Look at his popularity, hahaha! For the first time, the protagonist is not as popular as the deputy. Although Tezuka Kunimitsu is a supporting character, the best effect is to be narrated from a third party. It is really difficult to write about him in the first person! The character's personality changed accidentally. I will be careful about typos now, and I will learn which novel about breathing method, thank you🙏!
I don't like it, and the writing is not very good. Kunimitsu Tezuka Kunimitsu, who is not injured, will not be able to defeat Shinmura Seiichi.
The protagonist is too lame, go watch Age of Miracles and learn from it
If Tezuka had not been injured, he would have been the only one among the junior high school students. When he was under 17, he was arranged to leave for Germany because he was too strong. His performance in the World Series was simply invincible. He was regarded as a genius who was destined to embark on a professional path in the early stage of the Net King.
The protagonist went to Shanbui? ? ? I searched for a long time and finally found a book about Shanbui... Among coaches, I don't know why I particularly like to accompany my seniors.
It's getting more and more boring I've already embarked on the road to world-class, but I still can't defeat the first-year Yukimura, and I can still lose.
Everyone, I would like to ask you whether I should write a slow heat or a fast heat next. Slow heat means a gradual transition in strength, while fast heat will increase your strength quickly after a few chapters. I would like to give you a suggestion, which will be relevant to my continued writing. I have ideas on both sides, but the one you choose is the best!
How can I put it, the writing is not good, the game is like a running account, which makes people sleepy, and many of the sentences are not fluent, like the composition of an elementary school student, and it is like Tatekai Dai who only arrived in the second grade of junior high school in Mori. It is very poisonous. It is not recommended for those with low poison resistance.
The combat power is a bit chaotic, rising and falling
Shouldn't the U17 World Championship be a best of three games? Why only play one round? It's the same as the junior high school competition. One of the problems for junior high school students competing in the World Championships is that endurance becomes very important under the best-of-three games system.
Why does it have to be Yamabuki? Wouldn't it be better to go directly to Qingxue to overthrow the system?
How should I put it? It's normal for Tezuka to be killed by Yukimura at first sight, but it's only for one or two rounds at most. Yukimura's ability to destroy the five senses is quite useless. It's very satisfying to torture vegetables, and it's very embarrassing for his peers.
Why don't you post it to the same human being? Posted in the urban category! !
It doesn't feel any better. The strength depends entirely on who the author looks like. There is no logical reason. It is best to have a draft when writing a book.
What is the setting for the protagonist to watch the game from the sidelines for a year?
Everyone, I'm here again, this time it's about Echizen Ryoma. Do you think Echizen Ryoma should follow his original path and go to Seiyue University, or..., Anyway, there won't be so many people studying with the prince this time.
It feels too bland, I can't tell what's good about it
This is the first time I've seen someone upload an outline, so there's just a little more dialogue.
I haven't read the book yet, but I have something to say! The author's introduction is so awkward, please edit it for me 😜
He's not the author. It doesn't matter if we strengthen the plot. There's no need to give him glory. It doesn't match.
Did Hatake 55 start off on the wrong set?
There are a lot of typos, and I love tie-breaks. I really don't know where there are so many tie-breaks...
The scores are confusing and people who can't understand come in.
There are often tie-break plots in the article, and the author often only drops two numbers when reporting scores. Readers need to judge what the score is based on the plot. Except for the different terms used for each point (love, 15, 30, 40, etc.), There is no other specific description of whether it is a set or a tiebreaker. Set, game, and point, please mark them, otherwise many readers who know tennis but not tennis will be confused 🙂 Help the author to supplement the tennis scoring method For example: Suppose the score of this game is 30-40 Situation 1 If the side that scores 40 points wins the game, the referee will shout "Game!" Scenario 2 The score is 40-40 and the score is deuce at the end of the game. The winner of the next ball will add ad on the scoreboard, which represents advantage. When the score of a game is 6:6, a tiebreak (commonly known as a tiebreak) is needed to determine the outcome. There is no such thing as AD in the deciding game. It is the simplest way to win by scoring 7 points first and leading the opponent by 2 points. So it's okay for Yukimura and Tezuka to fight until 24:22, but it's just very rare. The tiebreak system was introduced in the US Open in 1970 and ended in 2018. There has been no tiebreak in the men's singles finals (sorry that my information is so outdated). I don't know if there has been later (too lazy to check). In short, there are indeed some players in the tennis world who are good at tiebreaks (Atobe:?), But tiebreaks are too easy to overturn, and it is not easy to see finals in general (so Hyokui ... Everyone knows, right) Wimbledon played a three-day match in 2010. The first two days were played until around 9pm in the evening due to lack of light, and the game ended in the afternoon of the third day. Because Wimbledon adopted a long set system in the fifth set, the two always maintained a set difference, with a total duration of 11hr:5min. In the final set, Isner defeated Mahut with a score of 70:68. So Wimbledon was restructured, abolishing the long set system in the fifth set and changing it to a tiebreak at 12-12. Therefore, the match in 2010 may become an eternal classic. Unless a tennis tournament fails to think about it and adopts a long set system, there is no chance to break this record.
I remember that in doubles, don't two people switch to serve?
The writing is good, but the sentences are not fluent in some places.