The New York Sleuth

It's very good, but after reading the author's other works, I found that the author focused too much on details, especially facial expressions, actions, and other descriptions. It felt a bit like the details overshadowed the main subject.

Qiqi, please, please continue with the American entertainment and band stories in your next book! I truly felt the vibrant personalities portrayed through your writing. Your previous book, "Director's Story," didn't really showcase your style; your writing is so delicate. I've been following your books since high school, and now I've graduated and am about to start working.

If the NYPD doesn't want to take on a serial murder case, they can shift the blame to the FBI. There's absolutely no need for them to deliberately avoid it. This is a major mistake. Once it comes out, what's the point of the election?

Keep it up, author! I love detective stories, like Mission: Impossible, The Bourne Identity, John Wick, Fast & Furious, and so on! Could you add The Expendables to connect the dots?!

Originally a promising talent, the author used too many adjectives and descriptions, which annoyed readers and slowed down the pacing.

Why aren't you famous?

There are too many adjectives and adverbs; even prose doesn't need this much description. While it's okay to write whatever you want if it's not published, even a simple, low-quality piece shouldn't be too watery.

Has no one told you that your book is too verbose? Overly flowery language only makes it difficult for readers to engage. This is a novel, not a published book. If you improve it, you definitely won't have so few readers. Author, your writing style is still quite good.

Personally, I felt that the writing of the fourteenth game was very messy and didn't seem to have much to do with the main storyline.

A good online novel can be read just from the beginning to tell if it resonates with me. Keep up the good work, author!