Journey Through the Heavens, Starting in Hong Kong Cinema

Wow, is this guy still obsessed with undercover work? It's been so many years, you've written several books on Hong Kong variety shows already! Can't you just be a proper police officer? With your plot-driven knowledge, wouldn't it be better to just solve cases honestly, add some slick moves, and get promoted and make money? You've gone from writing simple Hong Kong variety shows to writing about everything under the sun, and you're still obsessed with undercover work? Unbelievable!

These days, going undercover is pointless; there's no future in it.

I'm definitely not reading this book anymore, especially not by the old eunuch.

The dialogue is all in Cantonese, it's for Cantonese-speaking readers, so everyone can leave now. Damn, even reading a novel now has regional restrictions.

Going undercover? You're doomed. You really think a piece of paper can protect you? If things get serious, you'll still die. And if you don't get paid, isn't that just doing it for nothing? If you don't pay, won't people get suspicious?

Can we please stop bringing that Uncle Da along? Besides forcing humor and causing trouble, what use is he right now? Stop using those old-fashioned web novel tropes—bringing along a useless character, who gets into trouble, then you act all high and mighty to smooth things over, and then he gets into trouble again, and you act all high and mighty again. Aren't you tired of it? 🤫

I finished reading it in one go, and it was pretty good. However, I stopped reading for two weeks, and there were no more recommendations to continue reading. My personal suggestion is that you revise it, repost it, save a draft, and then push it out again. I think that would make it more readable. There are 17 chapters that are repeated.

Damn, the first few pages of your book look so similar to another book.