The Unrivaled: The Divine Axe Splits the Heavens

I think it should be written as Dou Er. In the early stage, you must use golden fingers or time and space storms to separate the God Realm and Douluo. Or there is a background. There is a god-king who keeps an eye on it. Otherwise, Xiao Zhao would spend three days staring from the sky. Either suppression or calculation. He can even go down to the world himself. And the protagonist can't beat him again and again. It's disgusting to be plotted against by the little brat all the time. Being plotted against can't fight back. This copy of Tang Fozu is more comfortable to read after becoming a god 😠

Is the protagonist's talent worse than Zhang Lexuan? Not only are they full of soul power, but the protagonist has more souls to swallow than her! So why is the protagonist Zhang Lexuan, level 31, 34 when school starts?

How good would it be if the Sky-Opening Ax directly followed the right path of force, just like the hammer, just add all the strength

The author, the protagonist and the senior sister broke through the ban at the age of 20 and can get married, right? 😜 I have read a lot of harem stories and stallion stories. The single female protagonist is also very good. Write more about the sweet relationship between the two. In addition, this senior sister is now even more awesome than in the original work. Write more about her style. She will dominate the world and don't let her become a pendant for the protagonist.

Come on, don't follow that book of silently leveling up in Shrek. I couldn't help but give up on that book even for the senior sister and the heroine.

What do you think? Did you make a mistake in becoming a disciple of Xuanzi?

To be honest, after reading so many fics, I feel that the Shrek Academy in this book is what the first academy in mainland China should look like with tens of thousands of years of inheritance. It does not have an inexplicable sense of stupidity like in the original book, where one unconditionally believes in Tang San (of course it was Tang Buddha who took action here, refer to Huo Yuhao after he meditated deeply in the golden tree after the first competition)

Why do I feel like I'm writing a nanny article again?

It's a low-level book that drives high and low. I could have written Zhang Lexuan's emotional scene well, but the plot jumps too fast and is too stiff. Then the description of the protagonist is also poor, and the setting of soul skills is also bad. Overall, this book is slightly toxic.

The protagonist's performance is too poor!