It Makes Sense for Me, Uzumaki Naruto, Golden Finger Is Mouth Escape, Right?

I personally feel that this statement is too serious.

I can accept the Third Hokage's issue about Naruto being isolated. At most, he knows but does nothing. Or is it because he was persuaded by Danzo, or is it because of his compromising nature to a certain extent, or some other reason? I can't accept it and say he didn't know about it. It is not a puppet Hokage, he is a real powerful Hokage, and the Jinchuuriki is the top priority. After such a long time, you say he doesn't know? The original setting of Sarutobi Hiruzen is a good man, a man who loves the village, but there are many unreasonable things, so many people like to use conspiracy theories, which darkens Sarutobi Hiruzen to a certain extent. I am not the kind of person who only accepts conspiracy theories. But I can't agree that the Third Hokage is a White Lotus. In other words, in the original work, Hiruzen Sarutobi is a good man and a man who loves the village. So, the most white level I can accept is that he is a dark person who loves the village but has little political ability.

It took almost twenty chapters to write about Uchiha Shisui's death and Uchiha Itachi's separation from his family. The key is that it is no different from the original plot. Because the protagonist Naruto is not strong enough, it affects Sasuke, and Sasuke cannot influence Uchiha Fugaku, so 20 chapters are written to write an original plot, with the protagonist inventing tennis in another world. Brother, you are too slow to warm up, right?

In the future, the protagonist's enemies will be impossible to fight and defeat, and then they still think that what the protagonist says makes sense.

Naruto has only feelings left. It's disgusting to think about the plot. Naruto started to say that Neji broke fate, and later told others that I was the child of destiny and believed me. He couldn't solve Neji's problem, so he was solved directly. Er Zhuzhu killed people from other villages. He shouted to forgive him, because he was bound by my friend, and others died in vain. The most disgusting thing is that Obito was cleared in the end. The disgusting thoughts of a typical small life.

In one sentence, it's rubbish. I want to change it, but nothing has changed. I don't know what the writing is like.

It's really a waste of time, so many chapters have been laid out, and the protagonist has done so many things, but what's the result? What has changed? Danzo is not dead, the third generation is still in peace, and Uchiha Itachi still defected. Nausea

Uchiha: We want legitimate rights, although it may require some force Shisui: Uchiha wants a coup Itachi: Selfish Uchiha Uchiha: We want other families not to be hostile to Uchiha, although it may be It takes some force Shisui: Uchiha wants a coup Itachi: Arrogant Uchiha Uchiha: The Uchiha clan wants Shisui and Itachi to go higher, so they have to get rid of Danzo, who is brainless and hostile to Uchiha. Shisui: Uchiha wants a coup Itachi: Stupid Uchiha In this book, it would be better for Shisui to copy the exact words of the clan members to the Third Generation or Itachi than to directly judge that Uchiha wants a coup 😥. Although they are planning to get together to demand rights, which in the eyes of the Third Generation is a coup, but can you, Shisui, a spy, say so directly? 😐, I think he is getting angry.

Spending so much time and chapters to write about the Uchiha genocide is wrong. It's understandable that the protagonist is involved. What's the point of writing this without any involvement? It's better to write too much in one stroke. If you really want to write group portraits, your update should be fierce (20 chapters per day), otherwise readers will only think you are a loser.

I would like to make a suggestion, the most fundamental thing in writing a novel is the story. This novel is a bit self-explanatory and tells relatively few stories. Most of it is about the psychological construction of Naruto's growth. A moderate amount of psychological construction mixed in the story will make it more vivid, but a large amount of psychological construction and growth planning seems too much. Being plain doesn't mean that conflicts should be strengthened, and growth can also be explosive and exciting. All in all, the overall writing style seems too bland. It may be that the author is writing about materials that the author has pondered over. How to grow, I suggest that the story should be the main one, rather than long settings and personal opinions.

This book should not only have the mouth to escape Naruto, but also the intelligence of Jiraiya, the healthy Itachi, the simple Raikage, the determined Obito, the hand control of Nagato, twisting Kakashi's head, kicking Kai's head, controlling the mosquito Hidan, and stopping the water with all his strength. Quietly walk to Heijue, go home to Shuimen, and take an experience class. Tenshou changes head to Sasuke

After reading the thirty free chapters, I felt that there was too much activity in my mind, but the storyline was pitiful. Just like watching the dozens of daily missions in the anime after Sasuke's defection and before the start of Shippuden, it's too bland and doesn't look like a hot-blooded episode, but more like a daily episode

Well, it should be that you are high?

The author of this book, I don't want to be too rude, but your frequent posting first and then revision or even continuous posting of repeated chapters should be enough to justify the update of the scam? The content of this book sounds good to me personally, and I am willing to wait patiently for updates. But, author, wouldn't you like to post another chapter after you finish writing it? Even though I am more patient, I am frustrated by your way of updating the article, let alone other readers who are more pressed for time.

First of all, there is really no short boss setting in the third generation. In the past, it could be said that because the plot was too long, it caused bugs, so it became a space for fan authors to use their best writing, and conspiracy theories were also suitable. As a result, according to the descriptions in subsequent works such as Itachi's True Story, the third generation as Hokage really didn't know what Danzo and Orochimaru were messing around with behind the scenes. It's so ridiculous and stupid that it fits the plot. Emotions The third generation can become Hokage. He is so pure that he can fight and be good to the people in the village. The Uchiha are about to rebel. They still think that Uchiha is the great contributor to the establishment of Konoha and want to reconcile. The fourth generation of their own family and the jinchuriki are sent. The shadow and the jinchuriki are both in their prime. Kumogakure's persecution turned out to be a tough one (if I remember correctly, the Raikage himself said it during the Five Kage Conference, weren't you Konoha's toughest yuppies when you criticized us last time)? Hinata was chosen by his own Council of Elders to be his friend, and the Third Generation actually had no say in their decision. If he is really a mascot who can fight and will not attack his own people, why don't the major families choose him to be the leader? Even if he is directly designated by the second generation, there is no objection. So it is very reasonable to choose the fourth generation from the third generation. They are equally capable of fighting. From the common people to the highest contribution by relying on the heads given by the Iwagakure veterans, this kind of murderous executioner is a little sun behavior in the eyes of his family.

Chapters 281-282 are repeated, cheating money, 283-284 are repeated, and 281 was repeated in almost four chapters, cheating me out of fifty cents.

The money refund for Ta Ma and the content in the rough chapter are repeated twice.

The introduction is pretty good, forget it.

I ordered again at 11 o'clock the next day, but it's still anti-theft, what's wrong? One defense lasts a day, right? So is there any difference between me and his mother watching a thief?

I personally feel that there is something wrong with writing Naruto and Sasuke as the protagonist of Time Travel Naruto. These two are originally destined protagonists. They come with their own cheats. If you travel through the past, they come with their own system cheats, plot prophet cheats, and the Six Paths old man also has cheats. If you combine the three cheats into one, you write a jb hairy one.

Where is Zui Dun? Selling dog meat on a sheep's head, a ninja play house plot with a water plot.

No wonder he is only a second-level author after writing more than 4 million words...