Cute New Gods in the Chat Group

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Come on, author, update more, it's not enough.

Although the Holy Ruins is unfinished, you should pay attention when writing about Ye Fan. Ye Hei can intervene in his past in the later stage, so it is best to pay attention. In the Holy Ruins, two pig's feet were made before self-destruction.

Um, the group favorite Uzumaki Naruto is really not suitable. After all, he is still the same as a fool even when he is an adult. That world is not suitable for a legendary story. It is the same as the unification of the Qin Dynasty and after the unification. It has not changed for thousands of years and has only expanded.

Yin Susu, a good wife and mother? How old is a child who is left alone to be called a good mother?

I've read Chapter 25. I'm confused now. I don't even know what I'm reading.

Prepare for future readers, maybe there will be more readers and more opinions in the future! If you prepare early, you will be prepared. The worlds I want to add are not limited to movies, novels, and animations... I will refer to it. Other types of comments will also be considered where appropriate. The reason why I don't guarantee it is because I am limited by my ability. The only thing I can guarantee is updating this one. After all, unlimited streaming is generally better (crossed out) and has richer content. While it is still a new book period, I will spend more time recharging it, hoping to have a certain ability to control the plot in the middle and later stages of the book.

After reading twenty or thirty chapters, it felt like it was an instruction manual, and it was a very detailed instruction manual, as good as a homework instruction manual, down to every movement and expression. The explanation is too detailed and extremely insulting. Do you think we can't understand what you are trying to say? Hey, I really didn't understand, you won (=_=)!

I don't know why I hate the idea of ​​combining anime and novels to create a chat group. I always feel out of place.

Yue Buqun is outstanding. Is the original Yue Buqun a gentleman?

What's wrong with writing? Nowadays, Naruto and Pirates are written about in novels every day. Don't you feel awkward reading it? The entire anime is just a work that promotes Japanese militarism. Even children have to participate in the war. It looks very passionate, right? In fact, it expresses what it wants to promote without even realizing it. You can write Doraemon better than Naruto.

The author probably wrote this specifically because he was afraid of losing too much sleep. The subject matter is interesting, but the plot is not good enough.

The plot feels like "an old lady's feet are bound, smelly and long." It's a long-winded way of writing a bunch of words to make up the B frame. It seems cloudy and misty, and all the members have a lot of inner drama. . .

I'm confused after reading this, awesome author

Too many settings are lost. We talk about settings in the main world, and then we talk about settings in the chat group. A lot of chat group routines have been cut off, but too many of them have made it look less like a chat group and more like a parent group? ? ? The rhythm is very strange. Ye Hei is so eager to go to the toilet that he writes clearly, Ying Zheng directly fast-forwards, and Xuan Xiao, who is the worst, goes directly to the next episode.

It's too repetitive. The whole article is about setting, and what has been said needs to be re-told. One setting needs to be written in three chapters, and one paragraph needs to be written in one chapter. Water, it is all water, and the plot is seriously watered. There is no need for this setting to be so watery. The subject matter is quite good, but it is a pity!

The author clearly distinguishes the key points. Is it a group portrait novel or a single protagonist? It is really contradictory to mainly write about group portraits in the first part and to describe the main world in such a large space in the second part. No one can satisfy all readers. If you like watching group portraits, you may not like that the main world is too long. If you like the main world, you may not like the protagonist suddenly disappearing for many chapters. I personally like group portraits and dislike the content of the main world, but of course my opinion alone doesn't matter. The important thing is that you have a clear idea of ​​what your largest reader group mainly likes. Don't try to satisfy everyone and end up losing everything!

The subject matter is okay, but it's too watery. You throw so many settings at once and it's boring. You can't see any useful and interesting plot at all. I felt sleepy watching it in broad daylight 😒

Do you have to include Japanese comic characters to write a chat group book?

How many people are like me and skip the plot of the main world directly?

There is a problem with the setting of creation. If it weren't for a chat group, this book would be useless. Writing a book and creation are two concepts. A book only has one person's perspective, and creation requires all aspects to be considered.

What does this book say? The biggest problem is probably that it's not exciting, it's too bland, and it feels a bit like a running story, which makes readers have no desire to follow it. The writing is also the reason, so I stopped reading it after I gave it a few hundred points before it was put on the shelves. The author should practice writing this book, right? On a whim, I took a look at the author's situation and felt it

I just started writing it for a long time, and I didn't touch on the main character. The rest was just what people in the chat group talked about, so why did you write this?

Take your time, even weekly updates are fine! As long as there is no supervision

This book is quite good.

Wait a little longer, I'm afraid I'll have to read it all in one go

The second monthly vote has been cast, come on.

The heroine who covers the sky has locked onto Xu Qiong, big praise! How unfair Chen Dong was to her! The woman who silently loved Ye Fan all her life regretted it for the rest of her life because she pulled the coffin in Kowloon!

Except for the Hokage, I've done it, you can do whatever you want!

It's a bit too bland. I always feel like it for some reason.