Seeking Immortality in a Strange World

The author's forced demonization makes it seem like selling one's daughters can lead to immense wealth and status. If that were the case, ancient times would have been perfect—just have countless daughters to sell and become rich, leaving no room for the poor. The author really needs to think this through.

The beginning was a bit dismal, and I found it hard to get into it. After all, I read novels to relax, not to make me depressed.

I read two chapters, and the first chapter's opening with the free cheat code was worse than not writing anything at all. Chapter Two has too many flaws. The fact that he married a refugee's daughter as his principal wife is known throughout the city. He originally planned to sell a maid, and even though he's already over twenty, he'll have to wait eight more years to consummate the marriage! It just goes to show how incredibly inexperienced the author is.

Yes, it's well written. Also, that plant girl is a bit pitiful.

The habit from the previous book, physical control

Author, don't cut it! Keep going, I think it's well written.

These days, the supernatural cultivation style is all the rage. Sometimes I think to myself, if I'm cultivating immortality, why would I be afraid of the supernatural? These days, Taoist priests just catch ghosts and fight monsters. They're so powerful they can defy the heavens and the earth and even the air, and they can't beat the supernatural.

Are the skills of two people interchangeable?

Can you handle writing two books at once?

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