I Just Want to Travel at Public Expense in Love TV Series but Unexpectedly Become Famous

Generally speaking, after reading the whole text, I found that the middle and later periods lacked a lot of detailed descriptions one by one. People other than the protagonist progressed the plot much better than the first and middle periods. In the middle period, some readers reported many problems to the author, and he responded by hastily correcting and accelerating the plot. This is a good thing and a bad thing, because the early articles are more like a group drama, a popular science education film, and a personal biography. Putting aside the title of the book, if you try to give the book a clear proposition through the article, then obviously, it should not be consistent from the perspective of online literature. If it is said to be traditional literature in the strict sense, it does not seem right? But I don't know why the author's writing style is so good that after I tried to put aside the title of the book and look at the full text, I was somehow able to calm down and read it carefully. If I were asked to judge this early article, I would interpret it as a "script", similar to a "script" with the flavor of a dramatic work! In the middle period, the author made some creative changes, made some mistakes that I had foreseen, and made some "stream of consciousness" foreshadowings in the article. Fortunately, the content of the article began to focus on the protagonist, but there were still some overly long science popularizations, and long science popularization dialogues that are rare in daily chats appeared. In the later period, the author began to slowly weaken the unknown multi-dimensional creature in his mind. This plot does not mean that it is impossible, but no matter how good the thing is, it must be adapted to the situation and local conditions. It is obvious that this mental thing is so abrupt in the entire sky when viewed in the full text, just like the sun has replaced the moon! Putting aside the existence of this thing, the plot began to consciously reduce science popularization, and also reduced some unnecessary descriptions of secondary characters other than the protagonist, but still retained the mental journey of each character. If this part of the description is good, it is at the top of the pyramid in online articles, but it is obvious that the author's writing style has not been trained to the point of proficiency, so the author still needs to continue to work hard, but in any case, the author's cultural knowledge is enough to support the improvement of writing style. That's all for the comments on the article. To give an overall evaluation, the primary reason for the book's lack of popularity is that the first culprit is firmly stated in the book's title. The second culprit is the author's look and feel and scripted description of the characters and plots in the first 30 chapters of a popular science education film. This blame cannot be evaded either. In addition, I subscribed after experiencing the dullness in the early stage, the middle stage when my imagination was opened after it was put on the shelf, and the later stage when I have just started to enter a good state. If I didn't want to lose an author whose writing is barely to my liking, I would never write this long review. That's it, the author is either TJ or using love to generate electricity. I respect your choice. I just hope you can be worthy of the time you spend. After all, we may read more than a hundred chapters in a few hours, but you may spend hundreds of hours writing it, so I hope the author will not waste hundreds of hours of his efforts. Even if the book is not favored by others and fails, I also hope that these failures can become nutrients for the author on his creative journey.

It's a pity that Dayu didn't ask you to control the floods. You are the real water. And the writing style is not good. Thank you for the author's hard work. I will leave first.

I think it's very good and I have the desire to continue reading. Thank you for the author's support.

After reading the comment area, the author said that the protagonist comes from ancient soul wear. In addition, he is a professor and participates in a love show. The probability of this book being popular is already as high as 99.99%. But don't worry, author. I will always leave a place for you here. Come quickly and I will wait for you, my dear brother

You write romance novels, not popular science articles. Who wants to read popular science?

I can't stand it anymore. I've read more than 40 chapters, most of which are popular science, but they don't have the meaning of romance novels. What are you reading about romance novels? What we see is interaction and conflict, ambiguity, and love. You can't see love at all. All you see is popular science. You have no idea what readers want and what they want to read. I have been a bookworm for more than ten years, but I can't read it at all. I'll give you a suggestion. If you don't know how to write romance dramas, you can read romance dramas. Without characters, highlights, interactions, and ambiguous romance dramas, it's better not to read them.

I don't see the feeling of Lian Zong, but it looks like a combination of travel notes and encyclopedias.

It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into consulting a lot of information. This is very recognized. It means that he wants to write this story well, but everyone is not here to read science. The perspective is never on the protagonist, which makes the readers have no sense of involvement. I personally like this kind of slow-burning, but life is generally fast-paced nowadays. Plus you are small, it is not exciting, which makes readers have no desire to read. I hope there will be adjustments in the future. I hope the author can see

The author is also quite funny. I can't even remember the Chinese name, but he also added the English name, making it look like no one knows who the protagonist is, which really affects the viewing experience.

I just wanted to read it briefly, but after reading Chapter 40, I felt like it was giving me some popular science and I couldn't tell who the protagonist was.

My view has always been that if you don't experience it yourself, you have no right to speak. Let me briefly highlight a few poisonous points: A love story was originally written as a popular science article. I don't quite understand whether the author doesn't read online articles or whether it's just a gimmick. We read online articles. What I watch about Lian Zong is the emotional entanglement between the male and female protagonists. It's love. You can write shit. Routine. But we can't prioritize. After dozens of chapters, I almost couldn't figure out who the protagonist was? What kind of person is he. Who is the heroine? There is also the question of audience. The author is really afraid that we will be able to tell who is who. English name plus Chinese name. If you have film and television resources, forget it. But you are a web writer. Just writing it makes me dream back to the way it was written in the early days of online writing. It even made me think that I was not reading an online article. Fortunately, things changed in the middle. But the issue of priority still exists. I don't quite understand whether I want to write a group drama or what. If it were a group drama, the writing power would not be worthy of the ambition. If not. The characterization is too thin. As for the advancement of the main line, I still don't quite understand how I want to advance it. If the writing is about fairy tales or science fiction. Maybe it would be better. If it's a romance drama, the character description needs to be strengthened

The writing is okay, but I suggest the author go to a female channel. Written as a narrative.

The title of the book is salty fish, and the protagonists in the leisure genre are all fucking kings.

It is a product of self-entertainment. If you click on it and read two chapters and you are not interested, you can discard it. Let's talk about the shortcomings of this crappy book. Other readers said that the female character didn't learn enough in more than twenty chapters. The author Zhang replied that he was here to write about the protagonist's failure, not the heroine. Regardless of whether this is a romance novel, it only takes a few paragraphs to clearly define the character. Except for the supporting male idol characters in your book, both men and women are like the same person talking to himself, with no difference at all. And deleting 60% of the word count in this book will not only not affect the plot, but also improve the quality of the book to a higher level. Let me explain why. This book is full of a lot of word count stuff, and I didn't want to write vivid characters. Man a appears in front of four women, and five people introduce their names and English names respectively. Then man b comes out and repeats the above operation. Men c and d also come out and repeat the above operation. Readers are scolding you for not introducing English names like crazy. How many times will you use English names when writing books later? Instead of thinking about bringing people to life, I first thought about using two names for one person. According to the author's logic, the heroines are all passers-by, so why introduce English names in such a large space? The following activities are also the same. I played Poetry Solitaire and finished two articles (readers came to see their Poetry Solitaire? What impression do you have of the plot when you write Poetry Solitaire? I deleted them all without affecting any reader), and then they played guessing between man A and woman A, guessing between man B and woman B, c and c, d and d. Otherwise, the male protagonists would re-read long sections of Baidu Encyclopedia. The whole story is full of words, and the plot is completely devoid of characters. The male and female characters talk about their vast experiences in luxury travel. It feels like it was intended to be written as Guo Jingming's life-changing story, but in fact it's still five Jiangnan flavors short of Guo Jingming's. At least Guo Jingming is really infatuated and can write that tone. The characters written by the author are all rich, young and rich, but they all have the same mold. Sixty percent of the content of this book is rubbish, the author's own entertainment, everyone can just read it for fun. I read more than 30 chapters and one character didn't stand up. I felt that I didn't finish it completely. It's smelly and long. Especially, the introduction said that the male protagonist is bad.

😓I couldn't stand it in the first chapter. The mother decided to divorce her because of her father's poor treatment of her son, but in the end they got back together. . . So after raising my son alone for more than 20 years, I realized that this son was not very good, so I just pursued my own happiness. Or do you think this big boy needs some fatherly love? And this father had trouble eating after he went bankrupt. He asked his mother to take him in and work, and they got back together after getting along for a long time. Gee, it's hard not to think of him as a sinister villain.

It's just a rigid and blunt account.

It's too bland, it's all science fiction, it's confusing to see who the protagonist is, there are too many descriptions of other people, and the group portraits are serious.

Well, this book is useless, tasteless and a pity to discard. The author said in the article that this is a romance drama, and everyone has a picture. But the author's profile is the protagonist after all. From what I can see, there is no priority at all. Unless the author intends that the protagonist will continue to participate in the romance drama after the romance drama ends, it is better to separate the priorities. After all, writing a novel is not a TV series, and there is no need for so many supporting characters. The plot does not require such a plump supporting role.

The word "water" is too serious in some places. For example, I wrote a lot about the places I traveled to before, and then I introduced a lot of data about skateboarding. Are you here to write a book to promote skateboarding? Who wants to read such messy things? Their patience has been exhausted. If you write like this, you will usually be persuaded to withdraw it. Who is willing to spend money to read these messy data?

Eight people couldn't even remember their names and gave them their full English names. I was convinced.

There is no distinction between priorities and there are so many stories written about Xu, why not let Xu be the male protagonist. You can't touch your brother's ex-girlfriend, and you can't touch the one your brother is chasing now. The other two women were a little bit offended by your writing, so why write about a romance drama?

Find love stories in popular science articles 😒

It's very interesting, but the plot is a bit bland, but it's just right for a reader like me who has been reading for more than ten years, but it's not friendly to newcomers. When will it be released?