Coral Island Lord

It looks pretty good. Keep it up and don't learn those routines. There was once a Western fantasy book that was originally well written, and the protagonist was about to come into contact with extraordinary powers. However, the author said that he had an in-depth talk with the editor, and the editor strongly suggested that he change the book to an outline and a setting. The book, which was quite fresh and interesting, was forced to be changed into a novice novel, and it exploded. Most of the comments said that after the changes, they were no longer interested in reading it. I hope this won't be like this in this book. I'd rather die without being able to continue writing than follow the trend.

Otherwise, write the economics carefully. If you want to write, check the information and think about it. A carrack ship in the Middle Ages cost more than 400 pounds to build, and it was even more expensive to sell. It was fully loaded with 55 people. The crew members ranged from low to high (trainee to captain) with a yearly salary of 5 to 65 pounds. At that time, the price of beef was 0.05 Pounds per pound. This is why I am often deducted. Just check the cost and salary, the living conditions of the crew (they are often deducted, and when you go to sea, there is a new society on the ship.), You can find everything.

Deliberately show off, and then produced a lot of awkward sentences

What can I say? I feel that the protagonist is too vague. I don't know the level, the combat power, how much money I have. I don't know the specific abilities of the gods. Some abilities don't come out until very late. I feel like they are just to fill some logical loopholes. I deliberately didn't write them clearly. There are loopholes. Now I want to have a setting to fill them. I don't have the feeling of watching the protagonist improve himself step by step. Refreshment, logically speaking, this type of farming development stream attaches great importance to this aspect. Readers see how the protagonist builds his own territory step by step, enriches his pocketbook, improves his abilities, and develops his own power. It is just like fighting monsters and upgrading in the game. Only by knowing what skills and things the characters you control have can enjoy the thrill of upgrading.

If you think there is something toxic, please point it out in the paragraph, and I will reply and explain it one by one. If I can't explain it, I will change the article. If it can't be changed, either you have a problem or I have a problem. One of us must have a problem.

Can you please stop scolding your system or your plug-in? Otherwise, I won't write anymore, I won't write any more plug-ins. Good guy, I have to use them and scold them at the same time. My head hurts when I see it. It feels like a part-time job. The boss scolds you and wants to use it and you don't pay for it. It's kind of shameless, and it's also shameless. It's very disgusting.

Okay, brothers, now I dare to say that there is no problem with the economic system!

It is a bit suspected of forcibly creating contradictions and conflicts. It is understandable that the protagonist is not a person who kills indiscriminately. It is understandable that Cameron has helped the protagonist and the protagonist does not kill him. Once the other three are exposed, it will obviously bring great danger to their identities. Why not kill them? This church is obviously a Xie cult. Most of the people in it are not good people. If you kill them all, there won't necessarily be many innocent people. Just let them live and be captured to create conflicts. There are big problems with the logic of this plot. It would be more reasonable for you to keep Cameron and let him be caught. In addition, the first three chapters of the book are really messy. I really don't understand how an author who writes about time travel can write such a bad beginning at the beginning of time travel. I just skipped the front and read the back. The writing style in the back is indeed very good. I hope the author will still follow the persona of his character when creating the plot. In addition, it is a very good design not to throw out a large section of the world view and combat power ladder. What we want to read is the novel, not the setting collection.

Prices collapsed at the beginning. A ship sold for 20 gold. Then you told me that the salary of a dozen or so crew members was 12 gold. Then the profit from a trade would have to be at least 50 gold before anyone could run the ship. Otherwise, an accident can make the captain bankrupt and give each person a pension of 10 gold, which is quite funny.

I feel like the author is just narrating, especially the later chapters, which give me a feeling of "rushing to reincarnate". Of course, what I said may be a bit excessive, after all, the subplot should be dealt with concisely. But some places are too concise and difficult to understand.

The God's Favorite from the Church of the Widow... Is he Cao?🙂

As a slow-burn novel, the writing style is very good. But the character portrayal, dialogue, combat and other plots all make people feel boring. It is obvious that the author has his own arrangements in terms of narrative and rhythm, but his writing power is insufficient and he cannot grasp the key features and the most profound details. In other words, he lacks that spirituality. Slow-burning articles value spirituality the most. The author can read more other slow-burning articles, and I believe he will find the problem by comparing them. In my personal opinion, the so-called spirituality actually means that readers have a feeling similar to a "picture sense" when they read the things you describe. Only with this "picture sense" can the reader's emotions be well mobilized. The author has his own reasonable method of narrative, but it lacks a sense of picture and spirituality, which makes it tasteless.

Damn it, what the hell is the introduction, survivors = survivors? 🤭🤭

When I read the introduction, I thought it was a church of the widow and a person favored by God. I felt that both the god and the protagonist were not serious. It turned out that I was dazzled and misjudged it. It turned out that the person who was not serious was myself! ! ! !

The Church of the Widows is a gathering place for good guys and thieves, right?

Really Cancer and allergic hands, the clear picture cannot pass the review, you can imagine... It hurts, I can only transform into one-finger Zen

It seems I won't write anymore. Goodbye. I hope to see your book again.

The Holy Church Kingdom is the Church of Glory The city is the capital of each king. The black kingdom is wrongly labeled and should be in the center.

I really like this style of lord novel, but many necessary settings are not explained clearly in the novel. How do knights practice? What are the resources for practice? What is the difference between high-level and low-level knights? The gap between the combat power of ordinary people and that of ordinary people has not been written. There is also no description of the wizard in the novel. Just knowing that he is very powerful and how powerful he is is completely unimaginable. The protagonist goes to a deserted island. Where exactly does he live? How to deal with daily necessities of life? None of this was written, except that the leaders built wooden houses, and then the entire territory seemed to be functioning normally. They bought a Warcraft saying that they wanted to protect their castle, but the Warcraft followed the supporting character digging holes and hunting throughout the whole process. The protagonist did not interact with the Warcraft at all? The protagonist came to the island in order to hide his identity as a heretic, but inexplicably a group of people from the same sect knew the identity of the protagonist and came directly to find him? The protagonist doesn't want to quickly kill people and silence them, but allows these people to settle around his own power? This logical thinking is completely incomprehensible.

Why were comments banned a few days ago?

It's rare. After searching in the trash for so long, I finally found another book of Jingcao. I hope the author will stop being a eunuch.

I said I would wait and see, but when I turned around I had stopped updating for five months 😅

Why is this discontinued? There will be new books soon.

Author, delete the book and send it to QQ for reading, and get money if you can

Are there any similar novels? It's best not to recommend them. I won't recommend them systematically. Grateful

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

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