Dawn of Dynasty

I've read a dozen of them, and the subject matter and writing are pretty good, but I think I can still make some comments. The behavior of the protagonist is very uncomfortable. If you have the strength, everything can be said easily. You can do whatever you want, but if you don't have the strength to speak harshly, you will die in the Republic of China. The protagonist can be passionate but cannot seek death. Farming is better for accumulating grain and slowly becoming king. If something goes wrong, you can do it for you, or even form an organization. If you are too high-profile on the surface, you will easily be criticized by foreign powers. The Republic of China is too chaotic. Only by surviving can you change the world, rather than collapse halfway.

Too slow, your writing is okay now. You write well, and I can understand that you need to think about it, but if you update a chapter every two days, then don't blame me for supporting the book. When you update Chapter 200, I will order again. The speed is too slow, it will take half a year to raise it.

Come on and update! Not enough

I don't know how to put it, I just feel like I'm getting more and more angry the more I watch it.

Is the author still a student? He has never entered society.

The writing is okay, but every time he kills someone and talks a lot of nonsense, he has to take off his mask every time. Wouldn't it be enough to just kill him with a knife? Take off the mask. I'm really afraid that people won't know that you killed him.

The theme of this book is very good, Invincible Heroes + the Republic of China. This is my first time seeing it. Are there any other books of the same type? The important point is that the author updates too slowly!

The subject matter is good, but the plot is a bit unbearable and not enjoyable at all.

In the later stage, it may not be able to be stretched and there will be too many sutures. The power system takes Heroes Invincible as an example. The power systems of different races, different arms, etc. Need to be supplemented. Why did ancient civilization lose to the characteristics of modern civilization, and why was China invaded? What is the significance of mortals in the existence of military lairs, and why can currency be recruited (precious metals or incense, national destiny, merit). Coupled with the invasion of foreign powers in the background, how can the revolution be carried out? After the abolition of the imperial examination, how to change the new education system (power system)? In a world of great strife, trying to save the country, the protagonist's plot advancement depends entirely on revenge and heroism, which makes him a bit petty. ps: I hope to see the appearance of the Classic of Mountains and Seas, the List of Gods, the gods in Nine Songs, and the Dharma from hundreds of schools of Confucianism, Mohism, and Taoism.

The main character has a problem, which is really weird. If you want to kill, just kill, and you must let the other person see your face before killing. What kind of perverted murderous hobby would be exposed if someone could read the soul after death?

The subject matter is good, but some of the content looks like it was written by a woman, and the parents are short-tempered.

The book is a good book, but why does the author have to write so much about the love between children? My evaluation is to write less about family ethics 🙂 It is set in the late Qing Dynasty and the early Republic of China. It is enough to write about saving the nation and saving it. It writes so much love between men and women. Why do you want to do so? Your title introduction will definitely not attract readers who like to read these family ethics.

To be honest, this introduction has written about Qing Jiao, Fire Phoenix, and Ten Palaces of Hell, so I have no desire to read it.

This novel is too naive, and the protagonist is too high-profile. In reality, the people around him have been offended to death. The readers are very confused and feel too stupid. The image of the protagonist created by the author is too problematic. It is not suitable for the officialdom of that environment. Even if it enters, it will not achieve much. On the contrary, it is suitable for agents, spies, or members of resistance organizations.

Shen Zhizhu, this sister is very annoying. Apart from being a barbarian, what's her use? I'm so angry after seeing her.

The Tenth Palace of Yama was deposed by the undead... You are awesome

I had no idea at first, it seemed okay, but the more I looked at it, the more confused I became. What are the levels of lower, middle, and top? I have no idea about the arms. And it's very strange. There are always new professions and new arms appearing out of nowhere. The more I see them, the less I understand them.

After reading dozens of chapters, the book is okay, but why do you take off your mask and pretend to be a bad guy when you kill people? You know so well that there is no prophecy-based unit. Isn't it good to kill someone with a borrowed knife sometimes? Do you still have to mix up the system?

I can only say that the subject matter is something I really want to read, but the author is an ink-type writer.

It is recommended that the author be more delicate. The main character's family is so critical at the beginning, and don't reveal too many old friends or family friends later to disgust people. The protagonist is about to fall into the abyss and has no one to help him. He pops out when he is developed. Can you at least arrange a good reason? After reading the latest chapter, a nun came out who had been heavily supported by the protagonist's family. She looked like she had been fed "Yitian Gong"

The subject matter is very good, but the author cannot handle the subject matter well. My writing was very good before I went to Nanyang, and then my writing got worse and worse.

I stopped reading Chapter 246. Raise 100 chapters first and then come back. Updates are too slow

That is to say, compared to those great powers, there are only two 14th-level buildings in the entire Tianxia, ​​which is a bit less. Even if the Nile Kingdom was beaten more miserably, there are other 14th-level nests and pyramids, not counting the other great powers. In addition, considering that Western countries have accumulated hundreds of years more than Tianxia, ​​it is difficult to imagine how Tianxia defeated the great powers before.

I read it from QQ. This book is quite good, but the updates are too slow.

Forget it, you are invincible, there is not even a step in the cycle. There is no point in reading further. Each lineup system should be similar in strength, have its own characteristics, mutually reinforcing each other, and the protagonist's profession should be slightly stronger.

It's a waste of time. The setting is pretty good, but a lot of the plot is just self-indulgent, and it's not the logic of a web article. It makes people sick just looking at it. I can't stand it any longer, so I've withdrawn it.

Haven't I seen it yet? I'm curious how the Apocalypse summons troops? It is written that the Lord of Apocalypse has a lair, and the wild Apocalypse cannot be defeated, and everyone in the house has a master!

Throwing out the system of invincible heroes, the structure at the beginning is quite similar to farming and practicing martial arts to conquer the world.

There is currently a bug. Stitching Heroes Invincible is a good idea, but how to solve the problem of resources required for troop recruitment in Heroes Invincibility? How to solve the unit of each resource? How to solve the accumulation of arms? Seven a week, what about a hundred years? 36,500, Such a huge number. Under the squeeze of such numbers, not to mention level 1, but even level 7 troops should not be unusual, right? Perhaps insufficient resources can be an explanation, but in this case, the setting of resources must be explained. We can easily unify weights and measures in the game, but how can we unify weights and measures in reality?

A good and good book, come on!