The Age of Heroic Spirits: Guaranteed in Ten Pulls

Why the hell do they all have to make things difficult for the protagonist right from the start? Either they're poor, someone wants to kill them, they have a deep-seated grudge to avenge, they're physically disabled but incredibly determined, they have terrible talent, or they're about to be caught in a dangerous situation. It's infuriating.

The light novel you wrote is labeled as lighthearted and humorous. Then they created a story where someone silently bears everything, sacrifices everything to save others, and ends up with nothing. Others who do good deeds get thanks, but you get nothing. You might die in some remote corner and no one would even know.

If you're assassinated ten times, you're guaranteed to die a violent death. (=①ω①=)

The subject matter is good, but it's overly tragic and filled with resentment. The entire story is oppressive, with virtually no moments of enjoyment. The "lighthearted" tag should be removed. This book has several shortcomings. The first cheat system is very messy and complex.

My thoughts after trying this book (I forced myself to read up to chapter 59 while feeling nauseous): This book is extremely toxic. Poor point 1: The female lead is killed off at the beginning, and her personality changes drastically after she gets back together with her boyfriend. She becomes a stereotypical character.

Your cheat is outrageous! Guaranteed pity on every ten pulls? I'll just go find the lithography machine blueprints then. Don't worry about how I drew them, I'll succeed on the tenth try. Go buy some cultivation manuals, guaranteed to give you the real thing on the tenth try. Cultivation on the tenth try is guaranteed to succeed. Stabbing someone with a voodoo doll on the tenth try will definitely kill them.

The familiar Bai family, the familiar principles of heroic spirits, the familiar apple, the familiar yandere, the familiar fragments, the familiar...

The beginning and end seem to be written by two different people, either lacking an outline or sold to a studio. As it progressed, it became increasingly haphazard and incoherent, with a cluttered and bloated setting and a unclear main plot.

Purely toxic... To avoid dying at 27, she had a child, then made the child take the blame, then deprived the child of the right to choose, and even abolished the bloodlines of the Bai and Beiming families, without any preparation to protect the child. I even suspect that if the parents weren't both saints, the protagonist would have been stillborn.

The protagonist's mother voluntarily took poison, turning three generations of the Bai family into clowns.