The Age of Heroic Spirits: Guaranteed in Ten Pulls

Why the hell does Maodu have to make the protagonist more difficult at the beginning? Either he is poor or someone wants to kill him, he either has a big revenge to take, or the protagonist is disabled and strong, his talent is rubbish, or he is about to be affected by danger, it hurts.

The light novels you write are labeled as lighthearted and funny. Then it all happened, one person silently shouldered everything, sacrificed everything to save others, and ended up with nothing. Thank you for others' bravery. You have nothing. No one will know when you die in a corner.

If you are assassinated ten times, you will definitely die suddenly (=①ω①=)

The subject matter is very good, but the suffering is great and the hatred is deep. It was depressing throughout and basically not enjoyable at all. Take the word "easy" off the label. This book has several shortcomings. The first cheat mechanism is very messy and complicated. It would be nice if you could write it clearly, but maybe it's because of my poor understanding, I feel like it's a mess. The author will automatically assume that the reader understands the mechanism of the golden finger, and will just keep writing, which will give him a headache. For example, when we went to kill the shepherd, this chapter did not explain how to find the shepherd at all. It took a few chapters, note that it was several chapters later, to explain how to find the shepherd. There were more than one or two omissions like this, which made me very tired. The second point is that the few chapters after it was released made me feel sick for a long time, which was also the main reason why I decided to start trolling. The protagonist wanted to save people, but because Qin Xue was afraid of exposing his golden finger and hiding his clumsiness, he almost died because of his lack of strength. Ruan Qingshan died blocking an arrow for the protagonist. It's nothing here. Next, he stopped pretending and used the Civilized Staff to kill the person with a buff that would allow him to break through in battle. So I said, what were you doing before? The most speechless thing was when he went to play Zhuang Dao, he cheated directly and unabashedly in front of Qin Xuezhao! ! ! He was acting cool while driving! ! ! Ruan Qingshan died in vain 🤔🤔🤔 In short, I felt very bad after reading it. The writing is good, but there are too many flaws. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

Remarks on the poison test (I suppressed nausea to read Chapter 59) Summary: This book is extremely poisonous Poison point 1. The heroine's personality changes drastically after getting back together, and her facial makeup is severely changed. The toxic female partner robs the heroine's role after the resurrection. Readers with a single heroine will be fed poison, and readers with multiple heroines will not see the excitement of having a harem. 2. The author likes to show off and slap the face very much, especially the description of the two battles in which the protagonist kills the shepherd and the rose girl. As we all know, the villain dies from talking too much, while the protagonist and the villain talk nonsense. And there is no level of nonsense at all, and it is poisonous in the second degree. 3. The power system collapses, and monsters can tear apart the barrier between the two worlds and attack the protagonist and the heroine (the role of the heroine here is another cancer within the cancer, the heroine is in dire straits or dies in two timelines, but the protagonist does not cherish time and wastes time on the heroine). I advise you to stay away from this book and try the poison yourself. Now you are dying from the poison.

You're outrageous. You'll get guaranteed results after ten rounds. Then I'll go directly to the photolithography machine drawings. Don't worry about how I draw them. The drawing will be successful on the tenth time. Go buy the secret book of cultivating immortals. It will be true on the tenth time. It will be true on the tenth time of cultivating immortals. The villain will be stabbed to death on the tenth time.

The familiar Bai family, the familiar principles of heroes, the familiar apples, the familiar yandere, the familiar fragments, the familiar ones. . .

It looks like it was written by two people, either without an outline or sold to a studio. The writing becomes more and more strange, the setting becomes more and more complex and bloated, and the main line is unclear. At first, I thought it was a battle of wits and courage with the underground evil forces, then it turned into a fantasy version of a youth love and development comedy, and then in PenglaiTM, it turned into a cool campus fairy tale about Long Aotian pretending to be a slap in the face. The whole plot highlights one person and writes whatever comes to mind. The messy settings crammed into the world look like a 200-pound fat woman wearing a children's shirt.

It is purely poisonous. In order to survive at the age of 27, I gave birth to a child, then made the child a scapegoat, and then deprived my child of the right to choose. I abolished the bloodline of the Bai family and the Beiming family's twin saints, and did not see any preparation to protect the child. I suspect that if both parents were protagonists of saint blood, the child would have been stillborn.      🙅🏻‍♂️  ，👌🏻       The most explosive thing is that Su Ruoli's parents told the protagonist what happened back then and said that his mother was imprisoned by the Beiming family. It turned out that the protagonist was a clown🤡 and just didn't want to raise him. The mother had to concentrate on being a saint and had no time. Fortunately, Su Ruoli's parents comforted the protagonist that it wasn't that his mother didn't want to accompany him, but that he was forced to leave because of coercion from the Beiming family.

The protagonist's mother voluntarily took poison, turning all three generations of the Bai family into clowns