Weird World: Broken Panel

What you should be thinking about now is how to get people to read it, instead of suppressing the protagonist to write a few more pictures, which can't be done when no one sees it.

The problem in the first chapter is huge. A very important pharmacist, not to mention providing good services, but at least looks like a human being. How can a human being be bullied? And the medicinal materials for refining the medicine are still under the control of the pharmacist? Precisely control the quantity of medicinal materials and the number of pills? ?

It's a bit disgusting and I can't stand it. I can only say it's extremely poisonous. I wonder why I went to see it. Many plots are forced to be explained by the author, and there are too many descriptions in the protagonist's mind. It's very watery.

Can this tooth be restored? If you can't, just withdraw.

I can't control my abilities... I don't understand Can't accept it

It's rubbish. It's very unpleasant to watch and affects my mood.

The writing is okay, I don't know why there are so many trolls

There are so many typos, Lao Lu and Lao Duan? It looks uncomfortable

The sentences don't make sense, I can't understand it at all, and the plot is too boring.

Yes, after writing it, the author can ask others to check whether the sentences make sense? It's much better in the back, but I don't understand some of what I saw in the front

I feel like this book is getting crazier and crazier as I read it, and some of the problems are simply pitfalls. It's okay to describe the protagonist's mind, but it's not fully considered. The idea of ​​being completely comfortable with "him" after meeting the "class leader" doesn't consider whether there are any hidden dangers.