I Use Tao Seeds to Cast Immortality

To be honest, the setting and initial plot are good, a good start. The paid subscription of the main text started, and the time was skipped quickly by several years and decades. The protagonist's various emotional lines were completely gone. His parents and brothers met two or three times in Chapter 300, and now he has no idea whether he is alive or dead. The author pretended that his mother was dying, and it would be great to show family affection by saving people from the lower world, but I only felt pretentiousness and superiority. The master in the upper world is directly written as incompetent. I commend you for your progress. The protagonist will not show up if he is in danger. He also talks about how tall he is, but in fact no one is afraid of his master. He can just go after the protagonist and he will be like an orphan. The protagonist goes to the upper world and has always emphasized that he must be promoted quickly no less than ten times. However, in the article, his life is like a misallocation of resources. He is bullied and encounters major incidents. He does not report or disclose his identity certificate. He is just pretending to be a pig and then being slapped in the face. It is a brainless style. The avatars can talk to themselves. If each of the 36 avatars plus 1 Dao body and the main body speaks a sentence, I think you can write 20 chapters. The main storyline in the article is extremely slow and slow. 80% Of the story uses side characters or passers-by to describe the story in a way that is not very good. It looks embarrassing to express how powerful the protagonist is. All kinds of routines were not used in the book ten years ago. The training system is vague, and it feels like you just go step by step. The order of the protagonist's true inheritance after becoming a disciple is not explained. It takes readers reading more than 100 chapters to know that there is a sequential challenge. The plot never changes, and I can't help but write a chapter even if I don't post a discussion thread. Whether you agree with it or not, I don't think this book is worth promoting. Don't you read the plot when recommending activity books from Qidian? This book is a scam. The author should delete the remaining 200,000 words and rewrite it.

Personally, I feel that for such a big force, even a small guy can provoke them, and they don't pay attention to the rules of the Taoist temple. Is it because the world of immortal cultivation is too kind, or is it that Longhu Taoist temple can't even guard its own base? Also, the four second-level Qi practitioners knew clearly from the beginning. The rules prohibit killing people around the city, but they still dare to do it (I think they are still family monks, and they are not afraid of genocide at all). The author really shouldn't forcefully subdue these supporting characters. These monks have been in the world of immortality for decades. Who is not a human spirit?

This book is really written now. . Disgusting, bye bye

Can there be more? Chapter 10: Are you afraid that I won't have any starting coins?

It's well written. I haven't read it this much in a long time. Don't listen to other nonsense. Come on and write well.

Who can read this little bit? If the readers next door saw it and thought we looked down on it, we will update ten chapters, ten chapters per person 😡

It can be summed up in one sentence. The protagonist is mentally retarded, and he especially likes to talk to himself about his secrets in the crowd. It is also a world of cultivating immortals.

The true heir of the immortal Taoist sect, this random force dares to be wanted all over the world Can't you see where these two masters protect their disciples? The word "master", I can't see it in these two people First of all, as a master, there are so many people who dare to chase and kill disciples at will. Does he really not know? After all, how can he not know at all if he is in the golden book and jade book and is connected by luck? The above descriptions of how powerful the two masters are make it appear that these two are very incompetent. Even mortals have avatars and become gods, but as a result, no one has avatars in the world of immortals and golden immortals? Especially since I spent so much time describing how awesome these two are in the early stage, but this is the result? And his true disciples can't even afford some innate divine items? It's not like giving it to a Taoist sect who hasn't started yet. It feels like this master really has no sense of existence.

After running four pictures, whichever one you think is more in line with your imagination will give it the highest number of likes!

The writing is so fucking disgusting. I wonder why the main character's apprenticeship is for a purpose. Apart from being given a training method and then nothing else, he becomes an apprentice to the top sect in the world and is constantly being hunted and wanted by unknown trash forces. I just wonder, do those forces have no intelligence network at all? Didn't you collect any information about such a large sect? I can write it, but I can't. It looked pretty good at first, but the more I write, the worse it gets. Did someone else write it?

The author has 1.06 Million words and 860,000 fans. This is an achievement that 80% of the great masters cannot achieve. I wonder why the author with such good results stops updating all day long. Is this to consume all the readers who have subscribed? Some platinum authors may not achieve this result. According to my analysis, the author must have received 300,000 royalties for writing this novel. This may be the author's pinnacle work. If this book cannot be completed normally, the author will not write a work that exceeds 10% of the score of this book. I have seen many authors fail to finish their novels. There is an author of "I Am Really Not a Child of Luck" who wrote more than 1.6 Million words and has a fan base of 1.2 Million. After the novel was unfinished, he wrote 5 novels in a row, and the total fan base of the five novels is less than 200,000. I have also read many books that have written 1 million words and have a fan value of 200,000 or 300,000. I have written many books after they were unfinished, but the results have not exceeded 50,000 fans. In the end I had to give up writing. If you don't believe the author, you can search it. Author, if you give up on this novel, believe it or not, you won't be able to write a book with more than half of the results of this novel in the next two or three years.

Friends who came to the event, please note that this book will be highly toxic after it is released.

Ahem, I have read all the comments from the bosses, let me explain briefly 🙂 First of all, although the dog author writes one chapter every day, the number of words is still two chapters, but the two chapters are written and published together 🤓 As for the reason, on the one hand, it is written like this The idea will be smoother, and on the other hand, it is also because - the chapter names are really difficult to come up with... So everyone, the author of the new book will continue to update 4k every day, and then add another update in the next two days on the weekend. ٩(๑^O^๑)۶ How is it? 484 Is very sincere?

It's too watery. It took so many chapters to save Nong Xingzhou and pay back the water. The combat power is enough to compete with Hedao. There is a top sect behind him. In the past, it was not a push but a constant water. Can these disciples from the lower realm advance the plot? Can you keep up with the protagonist? If the person named Qu is not mentioned, he is considered a genius after all. In the future, he will be one of the protagonist's helpers. He just saves a few brothers from the lower realm. They are not so close. They are already seven or eight chapters long. Things that can be written in one chapter have become a real biography. If you don't open a dungeon to experience upgrades, develop your own golden fingers, small world, it will lead to family conflicts, conflicts between mother-in-law and daughter-in-law, and it will be too low-end to pretend to be a slap in the face.

After reading a few chapters, I gave 100 points for commenting. I want to ask who is reading this kind of mentally retarded book? Are there really so many mentally retarded people in China?

Looking at this result, the result is all kinds of shock, all kinds of low-end pretense and slap in the face, all kinds of mental retardation. It's both watery and white. Is this a perfect result?

There are no major problems, but there are always some minor problems. The woman at the beginning wrote about how awesome his brother is, and that he has been practicing for more than nine years before he is in the middle stage. She also said that his brother is very promising in the inner court. Several other children of the aristocratic families also think it makes sense. As a result, they have a lot of mid-term students in less than a year in this term, but generally one or two in a year in the inner court is good. , And it is written that her brother is so respectable in the team that he can make an exception for her and not receive 30% of the income. However, looking at the description later, the team is nothing in the middle stage of Qi training, and is still a waste who has only been in the middle stage of nine years. It is really contradictory, but ignoring some inconsistencies, which is a problem that occurs in most books, it is still readable, and there are not too many disgusting plots.

Longtaolou Life and death, destiny, wealth and honor are in heaven~🙂

Laughing to death, after more than two hundred chapters, it is still a small foundation building. I am obsessed with immortals. Each immortal species has billions of experience. I brag about how awesome the foundation is. I learn only 70 experience points and up to a hundred experience points every day. Just ask whether I am awesome or not? Just use anything and everything will bring you hundreds of millions of luck. This is still foundation building. In the future, there will be no billions that can break through the golden elixir and enter the next level of the golden elixir? I have been in the small realm of water for more than two hundred chapters. In the end, this book was so boring that I either became a eunuch or ended up jumping back in time to a higher realm and ending it hastily.

The writing is okay, so I'll update the writing. If the young author wants to get traffic for his new book, he doesn't have to stay up late or be bald to write out the words, so he can just start writing. This kind of urine is basically drowned in the pile of books.

Has the author sold his account? The more you write, the worse you get. Before you become a master, you just show up as a master. The key point is that no matter how the master sets up the score, the quality is guaranteed. You have neither.

The clones cannot share memories. Even if they are too far away, it is barely possible to share them. However, they cannot share their memories after meeting each other. Is this Ta Ma a clone? They also have different personalities, and we have to discuss which clone should do what job. Is this a clone? This is obviously just for the sake of water word count, so I gave it up.

The overall writing of the book is relatively good, and the subject matter is attractive. However, the plot arrangement and character description are too streamlined, and the writing style is average, almost exactly the same as a mindless novel. Fortunately, it has a good subject matter.

You can read 178-180, the story line is promoted, but you don't need to subscribe to 181-182. The author of these two chapters wants to tell you one thing. The first prize is a magical power, but the plot is not promoted, it is just watering down. For example: adjective + identity + name + adjective + verb + quantifier + adjective + noun, understand?

I couldn't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 185. I could still accept a bunch of people scolding me at the beginning, but the results got worse as it went on. The co-authoring of the beginning was pretty good 1. Only the protagonist is a genius. After a lot of troubles in the sect's assessment, he finally joined the top team in third place. However, in the subsequent plots, except for some training resources, fighting, and guidance, he was unable to do anything. It is similar in other places. No matter how loudly a certain genius blows, he will act like an idiot when he meets the protagonist. He is useless in fighting and training 2. There is no distinction between priorities, or is it intentional? The foreshadowing of the plot makes me want to write down what kind of pants I am wearing today, and when it comes to the main plot, it will be resolved quickly in two or three chapters 3. Dictionary, language proficiency, a lot of wording errors 4. Description, fighting scenes are always just one move, it is better not to write at all. The expression is always a wry smile, a bitter smile, these things, you have a wry smile? The main theme is inexplicable 5. The rhythm of the plot is confusing. The author really has no outline. What comes to mind I can list many more if I want to list them in detail. Take my advice and run quickly. I really don't know how to recommend it

I Use Spiritual Treasures to Forge Immortality, this one is definitely the Dead Eunuch, a newly opened vest, I secretly opened the vest without saying a word. Fortunately, I have seen I Use Tao Seeds to Forge Immortality, and it can be said that it is 90% similar in terms of writing, plot, skills, and realm.

Throw this book away as soon as you get the results. Is it too much money?

Even if you use a dozen or twenty chapters to wrap it up hastily? It's better than being a eunuch directly. How uncomfortable it is now. Hey, eunuchs are the most annoying! !

How come the first order of over RMB 10,000 is unfinished?

Five-star boutique, they tricked me into killing me, I didn't expect anything, just a few bids, the result...