The Spirit Master Doesn't Want to Be Hacked

After reading three chapters, I couldn't help but write a brief review How can I put it this way? It feels like a newbie can't skip the plot and fast forward like crazy by clicking the mouse. The plot develops very fast. I don't know whether it is because he wants to get into the main line as soon as possible or because the author is inexperienced. There is little interaction with the characters, and the characters' reactions are not very realistic. Read a few chapters and then update.

Damn, I thought he was a fan of that comic

It's very retro, giving people the feeling of watching Douluo Dalu

It's scary, it's happening so fast, don't be a eunuch.

Dear author, I actually want to see the sweet daily life they get along with. In other aspects, the writing is actually a bit bland. Of course, it only represents my own opinion. However, I still want to see more of your daily life and their relationship goes further. This way 🙂 Of course, it only represents my own wishes. Thank you.

Is the release time set wrong? Or should I finish saving the manuscript and prepare for the eunuch?

The male protagonist is an orphan and is poor but has a rich friend. Why has it always been like this lately?

It feels like I used to watch Japanese comics. It's very refreshing and interesting. But at the beginning, I felt that it might not be popular, but I quite like watching it. Come on

Nikkei, retro, no plot, no brainless description of the harem, and probably no outline. This idea is actually okay, but the writing is like a low-quality love story, and it is still two people from the beginning to the end. To be honest, this book has reduced the no brainer stickers, and the plot is well advanced, and it should be able to become a good book by focusing on the key points.

There are so few people and so many authors. Are you going to run away?

I thought he was a fan of that manga

Spirit Controller... Actually there is a comic called this...

Just ask, is the male protagonist a eunuch~😁

6. Ten chapters in a row, high yield, what are you eating?

Why does it count if I invest before signing the contract?

You are such a strong heifer.

Has the author passed junior high school mathematics? Did you fill in the data with your feet?

Author, where are the character cards? It's time to get some character cards.

I hope you can post a picture of the character, and please correct the typos, which somewhat affects the reading.