Double Wear: I Have a Wizarding World

The writing is okay, but the author's logic cannot be complimented. The first is that the protagonist has obviously reached a cooperation with others. He can earn seven spiritual crystals from one sesame seed cake, and just hides behind the scenes and practices well. He also has to guard the shop and sell sesame seed cakes with one spiritual crystal for each. The second one is the so-called alien spiritual energy. Once the spiritual energy of another world is absorbed, You can no longer absorb the aura of this world unless you reach the golden elixir stage. According to the author, your sesame biscuits also contain the aura of another world. Does that mean that after eating the sesame biscuits, others will not be able to practice? The creativity is okay, but don't let your imagination destroy it. It is expected that someone will come to rob the store and forcefully create conflict points. . .

The wizard organization is basically the same as the magic sect that cultivates immortality... If there is a difference, it is that the wizards have the consciousness of mass production of cannon fodder, the consciousness of invasion is more direct, and the mortals are unified and institutionalized without any human rights. Some sects that cultivate immortality still need to be covered up. Others... Capable wizards who cultivate immortality can do it, and vice versa.

The male protagonist is a bit too naive, and it depends on how the author makes up the alien aura. Feel like jumping

Am I getting old? I always feel like watching many plots is like insulting my IQ. I probably wouldn't have been like this before 😅😅😅

What a reality. What others give to you, you give to others. Good guy, what a reality.

Everything is fine, but the protagonist is indecisive and annoying in the wizarding world. Others want to kill him and take his body. He also has no ability to completely control the other party, so he actually asks the other party to help make potions? Not afraid of being poisoned... Not afraid of being countered?

To be honest, your character description is very jerky, and you are not very careful. You think that if you suddenly get rich, no one will explore it. You are a scum in the Qi training period.

Your double wear is not strong enough and there are many hidden dangers. Others have come from time travel, so they have their own system, which is unique. As for you, you got a bead in the world of immortality to be able to cross over. So are there other treasures that can also achieve this effect? Do others have it too? Can others take away the beads as long as they kill you again? If you got it from the world of immortality, then this bead must have had an owner before. There are too many hidden dangers.

Let me tell you about an ordinary person who has very high qualifications for cultivating immortals without a backing, but will be taken over by others. This is the real common sense in the world of cultivating immortals. How much can it be? Why should we train you? What kind of family ties you have in front of the Great Wall, what kind of family ties you have as a teacher, and what kind of family ties you have at home are all bullshit.

There have been a lot of new books from the two realms recently, with various combinations. I have seen three books for wizards and cultivators.

The setting is okay, but the plot is illogical

The main character is made so silly that it makes it a bit frustrating to watch. . .

Since faith is a good thing, why not use a small tower to control the collection of lords? Isn't it tiring to do everything by yourself if you don't have the power? The layout is still too small, and there are plug-ins that can't be used well!

The two worlds interpenetrate each other, and the best one to write about is Gou Dao. We can learn from Wen Chao Gong's new book. Moreover, it is easy for the protagonist to travel through time and space to cause future troubles. I think the author should know about the spiritual consciousness of high-level immortal cultivators. Moreover, the protagonist of this kind of story is weak, so it is best not to cause trouble just for the sake of making trouble. Wealth in the real world cannot be exposed, let alone the world of immortality where great power is concentrated in one body. These two worlds with very different styles require the author to carefully carve out. To kill decisively, you cannot keep secrets by being indecisive. If you can see the immortality for a long time, you will fall into the lower class when writing about stallions. It only lasts two hundred chapters and there are two female protagonists. The secret itself is not small, and he also raises a woman

The writing is not rigorous at all. The baron caught the woman and had nothing to do with the ordinary people in the town. If something happened, he wanted to bury the whole town with her, haha

After reading Chapter 19, I felt like a petty person. I wrote endlessly about selling cakes. Get one to try with a gourmet food supplier. Chapter 19: Two Worlds, no plot at all

I can only say that the subject matter is good. This is the plot, creating conflict for the sake of conflict.

How many words are you planning to write in this eunuch?

The more I look at it, the more uncomfortable I feel, the Holy Mother

After reading more than 10 of them, I was immediately persuaded to quit 😰 and I changed the title of the book: Traveling between the two worlds to sell sesame seed cakes. Selling one sesame seed pancake can make dozens of books! Don't write if you don't know how to write about two worlds. You'll want to read it🤮