Lying Low to Grow in the Cultivation World, Throwing Punches in the Martial World

Gou is low-key and unassuming, not someone who is easily manipulated and obsequious; that's useless.

The author of the "Two Realms Flow" novel insists on including the "Rolling Away" trope. There are so many minor flaws in the beginning. The author is obsessed with hiding, even with strength, he's still so repressed. Other characters hide by not provoking others unless provoked, not by being bullied unnecessarily.

At first, I thought this cripple was just a low-class thug, but it turns out he has quite a few connections. Then the protagonist, for no reason, is labeled as having poor aptitude, and instead of showing some skills to leverage, he's forced to gamble that the cripple won't dare to attack him... This isn't the protagonist's problem; the author understands human nature too little, and the design is too contrived.

If he wants to stay single, what's the point of all this entanglement? Author, are you trying to show that the protagonist is a "normal" man? But didn't the previous senior sister already demonstrate that? Or are you planning to build a harem?

Why bother going to the martial arts school? We already have the Vajra Technique, I don't understand why we need to go to the school. Wouldn't it be better to spend that time training in the Immortal Realm? Just for that little bit of medicine? It's not even as effective as a fish in the Immortal Realm. We waste time every day training there for some senior sister.

Since you've entered the cultivation world, why not cultivate Qi and practice immortality? Why bother with martial arts? You're not a martial arts genius or someone with cheat codes only for martial arts; you've only ever transmigrated to the cultivation world. In that case, why not just cultivate immortality directly?

Why do authors always seem to love writing stories where the protagonist starts as a poor nobody, and there's always some kind of bully like Tiger who takes advantage of you before you turn the tables? Speechless.

I just want to ask: Where's your punch?

The pacing is a bit slow. I think the eight chapters are alright; there are no chapters I can't finish reading, but there's nothing particularly memorable either. It's the kind of story where you read the latest chapter, then add it to your favorites and forget about it.

Well written! No overly sentimental, saintly characters! High intelligence, cunning, achieving immortality, becoming the master of the universe! Don't let the story turn into a story of a lonely, unfulfilled eunuch; it should include a harem! No simps!