Sherlock Holmes

Introduction with as little spoilers as possible: The gate to hell has opened, and the invasion of demons has turned the world into a land of chaos and death. In this foggy London, detective Sherlock Holmes has just solved a murderer named Jack, but he is involved in a murder case involving the Holy See. Strange dreams are intertwined with the fateful 221B Baker Street. His destiny will undergo a major change. Is he a demon or a human? {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"} Book title: The Great Demon Sherlock Holmes Author: Mo Gua Status: Serialized 100,000 words Tag: [Detective Suspense][ Steampunk] [Secret Development] [Decisive Killing] [IQ Online] Recommendation Reason: This is a work with imagination and originality. In this book, you will see how a "violent detective with a lazy look and a thirst for knowledge" and a "bloodthirsty military doctor with a charming appearance and a sophisticated life" conduct an adventure full of blood, fantasy and danger. I have always been fond of this kind of suspense + weird themes. I had a lot of fun reading this new book, which gave me a sense of déjà vu. I always felt that the writing style was a bit familiar. After reading through the comments, some people said that this was written by a fat melon on a trumpet, and the author did not deny it. If it is really his trumpet, then I think as long as he doesn't start high and go low, and let Feigua take full advantage of his ability to write brain-burning plots, this book will definitely grow into a masterpiece. Highly recommended for book friends who love to read "Joker's Game", "The Asylum of All Worlds", "Trading Crime" and "Zhou Lin".

A rare book! The writing of this book is excellent, and it can be seen that the author's writing skills are quite profound, at least starting with a master's degree. Reading it is immersive, the plot is not conventional, the story has ups and downs, and the world view is majestic. The first three chapters are simply the finishing touch and make people want to stop. Some of the people and things in the article are also thought-provoking. The author also handles the moral and ethical issues very well. It is not difficult to see that the author is a very intelligent and charming person in reality, with his own standards of judgment and independence. To summarize, some good books have been rare in recent years. Some people may think that I have exaggerated because I have chosen the best ones. Doesn't this book have shortcomings and regrets? Good question! Readers who can ask this kind of question are not simple at first glance. They must have no problem with their character and are not easily fooled by superficial phenomena. I call them experts! Everything has two sides, and this book is certainly no exception. A thousand readers will have a thousand Hamlets. This book has the following two shortcomings. I hope the author will correct them in time after seeing them. The first shortcoming is that the number of words is too few, and each chapter is short and weak. Of course, this is also a common problem of Qidian authors, who update slowly. The second point that makes me regretful is that I have not seen such an excellent work.

I can see that the author has changed too many protagonists in the Sherlock Holmes series in order to create a strong contrast with the original characters. However, the contrast is so sharp that it reduces the realism of the novel, which makes it less "human". In the original work, Sherlock and Moriarty are the only "non-human" beings. The others are all human beings with ordinary personalities. Examples can be seen in real life. But now all the characters are so exaggerated, including real-life celebrities, Dante, Nightingale, etc. It feels like I am watching a Nikkei who has piled up characters. In order to attract attention, I must go against common sense and contrast for the sake of contrast. Therefore, the cruel world view that was laid out in the first few chapters has become light and irrelevant. I have lost the sense of empathy and empathy, thinking that these tragedies are just a setting.

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Let's put it this way, it was difficult to encounter such a book at the beginning, which made me read other books boring and impossible to read. Then, the slow updates here made me directly have a book shortage,,,,😰😰

The background of the plot indeed draws on Jianke... For example, the landlord is to Zhang Xiaomeng The Holy Son is to Yi Zhiyuan Watson is to Shi Qinghai Nightingale is to Jian Shui'er The Holy Light is to the Charter Computer The steam mecha is to the mecha Even the assassination... The link is successful... ... After waking up and seeing the heroine (Nightingale), the scene is the same How can I put it, if the author can maintain the character framework and personality, I still like the writing style, but if the logic, combat effectiveness, and style behind it fail, there is no need to continue reading

I can't stand it anymore, I'm too drifting, and before my ability improves, I'm drifting all over the place, and I know I'm going to collapse. The IQ of the Church and the Empire is not very high either. If the protagonist's abilities were discovered, he would have been captured long ago and used as a coolie or in research, but he could still be left to his own devices. Advantages: The structure of Western social classes is well written. Except for the detective part, everything else is a history!

Anyone who has watched The Guest should be able to feel the familiar plot. The note that Holmes and Moriarty met in the cabin is a replica of Xu Le and Tai Zhiyuan. The two men chased the emperor, which was a replica of Xu Le and Shi Gongzi's pursuit of Medellin after the forces behind them had reached a compromise. There are also more obscure plug-ins like the tentacle sun and the old thing, to open the celestial eye and save the experimental equipment. Although the author himself said it was a tribute to Mao Ni, don't just grab a copy. Finally, I am very grateful to be able to read the simple fairness of small people like Holmes and Xu Le again, even though I disagree with the sentiments of millions of people.

The characters are very individual and have a kind of pathological obsession.

The language is concise, easy to understand and profound. On this platform where there are many words, this kind of capable writing style is particularly dazzling. A few simple words can arouse readers' emotions and arouse resonance, making it a masterpiece.

After reading the first three chapters, I was reminded of "The Green A", a Hugo Award-winning short story. Cthulhu invades the background of the Victorian era, where some humans rebel against a society distorted by evil gods. The great detective Moriarty VS the great criminal Sherlock Holmes.

1. Ordinary people's way of writing: I put the battery into the flashlight. 2. The normal author's writing: I stuffed two AA batteries into the somewhat worn flashlight. 3. How the Water God writes: Now, I have an old-fashioned flashlight in my hand. Holding it, I felt uneasy. I looked at it and found that, like other old-fashioned flashlights, it had a cover on the hip that could be opened by rotating. When I opened the lid, as I expected, I was speechless when I saw that it was empty inside. My brows furrowed tightly, and the feeling of wanting to commit suicide by throwing myself into a lake hit me from all directions. Because I was faced with a difficult decision: go downstairs and buy two batteries, or find two batteries at home. Where is life without trouble? Although it is daytime and I haven't had breakfast yet, as an old-fashioned flashlight, it does not have two AA batteries in it, which is very, very unreasonable. Has anyone heard of such a thing? How could I allow something that no one had ever heard of to happen? I'm human too! I have feelings too! ! ! Just... Making a choice is really, really, hard. When I go downstairs to buy batteries, I have to put on clothes and pants, I have to be careful that I forgot to bring my keys, I have to avoid speeding cars on the street, and I have to be wary of meteorites in the sky; thinking about this, I am speechless. . . But if you look for it at home, my dear friends, in this age, who else still has AA batteries in their home? I thought about it over and over again, and was in a dilemma. I thought about it for almost two hours. . . Finally, I couldn't help but let out a deep sigh. Well, I can only put these two AA batteries in my pocket. These two batteries were love tokens given to me by my former and former girlfriends. I thought I didn't have to make such a sacrifice, but it wasn't true. Everyone was involved in the whirlpool of flashlights and batteries. Life is a life of problem solving, and if you have an old-fashioned flashlight that doesn't have the right center of gravity, stick the batteries in it.

How should I put it? I have been reading Fat Melon's books for a few years. I guessed it was you when I read the introduction of this book. The Fat Melon flavor is too strong, and the style of the introduction is very similar to that of the Joker game. I have been watching the Joker game since the very beginning, and I know how painful it was for Fatty during that time, caught between reality and ideals. After you finished writing The Detective, I remember that you didn't open the book for a long time. At that time, I thought you had stopped writing books at all and chose reality, because the ending of The Detective was rushed and had a sense of saying goodbye. Then last year, you continued to write a short Daqin intermittently. I thought you were back, but no, you didn't write down Sister Gua's Magic Talisman either. Actually, I have always thought that Fei Gua is a very talented author. It is a pity that Yi Sin Ming was born at the wrong time. I think you are about to return to this book, and it is indeed well written. Come on. I hope we can all be idealists and not be defeated by reality.

The early setting of this author is amazing, the writing is very feeling and atmospheric, but the specific plot design is a mess, simple, boring and petty.,,,, The tone is often too high, but the specific plot development and twists are not sustainable. The first group of high-end people, in the end, they directly pull their hips when they appear in the actual scene, "That's it?"

The writing is very good, the atmosphere is appropriately created, and the protagonist's quirky personality is quite charming. It's a pity that it doesn't seem to be a time traveler, so the feeling of comfort is not that personal; but fortunately, it's not a time traveler. It's hard to believe that a time traveler is so pure.

After watching half of it, I felt like Long Aotian was still the same. The man pretends to be cool and slaps her in the face, while the woman is extremely beautiful and throws herself into his arms. 1. The first disgusting point is that Nightingale is written as a beautiful girl. To be honest, if you have seen her photos and stories, you will find this an insult. (It is a kind of inner sanctity and beauty. A good-looking appearance will only show uproar. That kind of beauty brought by temperament and character. You actually wrote that it is world-famous because of a good-looking photo? I feel as angry as you described ply's enchanting figure.) 2. The second one is that the emperor's personality is too big. I keep talking about how scary it is, but the result is a big straight punch. The protagonist unexpectedly blocks it. There is another big straight punch, and the protagonist does it again. If I were the emperor, I would register both projects from the moment of submission, requiring that the other project must keep up, otherwise I will directly restrict you. (Don't mention independent operation. How can you be so independent even after being blatantly framed?) 3. It may be that Sherlock is a pretentious criminal, so he is more accepting. But what happens behind the brain wave changes is like drinking water, experimenting with hundreds of people, space transfer, star demon. It's so frustrating that the next chapter is about going to hell to kill the evil god and subdue the Holy Light. The villain has no pressure or suspense, and he has no idea what his personal ideal is. He just pretends to be cool all day long. Not as good as Long Aotian.

It's so watery. I haven't been able to show it off for more than a week. It's like I know clearly what type of shit it is, and I've already pulled it out a little, but the rest is just blocked. I'll moisten it up and see you again.

Why does this book start so high and go so low?

Isn't this a little bit? Originally, this book has a lot of similarities with Embers. The introduction and many elements in the book can be said to be coincidences if taken individually. Putting them all together is definitely related. I can think of it as a reference, but basically copying even the paragraphs is too much

The craftsmanship is too strong and not natural enough. There are too many names from other worldviews and the sense of substitution is very poor. What you write is not your own work, but a tool to make money. This attitude is not much different from writing a book for ten years to driving screws for ten years.

Because someone said that the inspiration for the Double Moon Festival came from Jian Ke, I went and watched it again. It was really good, and I enjoyed it.

This is the first time I see that the free chapters are better than the paid ones. I was so disappointed to see the ending 😐😐😐

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It feels like the author changed in the middle, but the level of writing later is comparable to Dragon King level

Saw the assassination of the emperor being caught. I feel that this plot is very far-fetched, and I somehow feel that the emperor must die. Even if the emperor alone deserves to die, if the protagonist group kills everyone inexplicably, should the people who protect the emperor also die?

Why does the protagonist feel like he has developed into a multi-female protagonist? He is omniscient and omnipotent. How can he not be able to tell which woman is interested in him? It is really uncomfortable to be unclear. Otherwise, you should accept them all or stop fishing. At the beginning, the saint girl was a little better and then the businesswoman came to the door. This Nightingale was also a bit speechless. It felt like giving away a girl. Is it impossible to push the main plot without a woman? The subsequent pretense routines are becoming more and more deliberate and even a bit tired. The more I watch, the more uncomfortable I feel.

I just finished reading the whole book. It was very flavorful at the beginning, but it felt watery in the middle, and then there was a strange smell at the end. Thinking about it carefully, the biggest problem should be that the character of the protagonist is actually unstable, jumping back and forth between special and ordinary. For example, everyone complains about Tang San, but Tang San's character is stable. When the plot develops to a certain point, readers can expect how he will behave. But in this book, Sherlock is not like that. Being a detective at the beginning is one kind of performance, and later he is pretending to be a slap in the face, which is another kind of performance. Therefore, there are a lot of redundant plots, which is superfluous. In addition, there are actually problems with Moriarty's character. His character is actually solid, but he is not very likable. He has the feeling of a good boy Kozuki Oden, which is generally acceptable. The plot arrangement also feels wrong. The middle plot is long and bland, and then ends hastily. The grand plot does not reflect the grandeur, and it is neither better nor worse. I personally guess that the plot in the middle period was not pleasing to the eye and the performance dropped, so the author was anxious to finish it as soon as possible.

Overall, if you read it as a web article, it is a bit of a failure, but as a story, it is okay. Although the later part is a bit more story-like for the sake of story, it still makes sense. Of course, this is also a common problem of Gua. He often suffers from literary youth disease and has reversal obsessive-compulsive disorder like a pure dragon The battle of wits is okay, at least it is interesting, that is. In the end, I just have to find something interesting about the battle of wits. For example, the Academy of Sciences is really interesting. As for the three views, I don't have any objections anyway. I think online articles other than Orange generally refer to Sanzha's Boss Tian. The protagonist is a natural disaster. People who kill people have to be sentenced, but if they are shaken by earthquakes, do they have to go to the sun and the earth? There is no reason for this. Speaking of which, these are the ones I have seen these days that are really close to natural disasters The other one is Qiao Mu, but Lao Qiao is actually really kind It can be seen that from behind the gate of hell, I feel that Lao Gua is a little bit out of control The expansion is really interesting, but I feel that Lao Gua may not be able to grasp it So Gua Gua Hurry up and update it soon, open a new pit when it is finished, write more unlimited streams, or go west alone It would be impolite to delay this story any longer My current evaluation is that it is okay, and it is not a price drop for Laogua As for the issue of copying, I will go to taste Jianke and Ember, and I will talk about it after the tasting Oh, by the way, Ma Yun, listen to me, today I will talk about you

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I submitted it, please write it well and don't finish it poorly. It's okay to slow down and update as much as possible