I'm Spelling a Thermal Weapon

This writing makes me uncomfortable to read. The protagonist has a long-range template. I have to make the protagonist's melee combat skills as good as those of the team. Wouldn't it be better for the protagonist to learn how to make steel armor, or even unmanned armor, and just practice the melee ability by the way? There are only a few chapters in total, so I will just write 3-4 chapters to practice melee combat.

I want to know what the protagonist can learn from entering the magic high school? How does it help the protagonist?

Have you considered developing a popular roaming game? Of course, it would be best to use a big gun to give the cursed spirit a bit of heavenly shock.

The writing of this heroine is simply a failure. The author doesn't know how to write and there is no need to force emotional drama.

Everything else is fine, but having a clone later and then betraying him is a bit too poisonous for me.

From the reader's perspective, the protagonist blows up a whole village with rockets. In the eyes of others, you just blow up a whole village. You think it's right, but the problem is that you are stubborn and can't show your strength, and your words have no weight and are of no use. They are just rotten, and it would be abnormal not to arrest you. Then I felt that I was being forced into despair, so I turned black and killed a bunch of people. It was just a matter of writing quality.

I don't know how to say it, but the writing is quite outrageous. I didn't expect to torture the protagonist. Updates are ridiculously slow. This 5t5 description looks like fw. Not to mention that it would be foolish to curse someone back to the top. As long as the character of the protagonist is well laid out in the past, it will not make me feel that this is forced abuse. There's nothing wrong with abusing the master to increase the pleasure. But you have to do it step by step. Even if those villagers are evil people, they are still ordinary people. No one forces you to kill. Without any consideration for the person he likes, he said he would betray the camp and just left. The whole thing was just silly. I won't talk about the emotional drama. I have nothing to say. Want to get some cool stuff from the Nuclear Explosion Directorate. To be honest, it doesn't feel good at all. From the moment he betrayed the high school, he felt frustrated. Not yet I feel aggrieved for the protagonist but for myself.

After reading a few chapters, I felt extremely nauseous. How can you be so mean?

The author should stop using the heroine water word count

The more I write about it, the worse it gets. This girlfriend is repeatedly used to create conflicts. I can't remember her, so I gave up.

It's a female author, she writes pretentious garbage.

After it was released, the plot suddenly became disgusting 😰 outrageous

Make a clone, and the clone betrays you... It's really awesome, I can't stand this kind of plot, bye bye

What is the latest thing written? It's disgusting to watch🤢. I saw it on qq

? ? ? Ha, you destroyed his house when you saved his life, and you still have to compensate him, it's better not to save him.

If things develop like this, I feel like I'm not far from being a eunuch.

I want to know whether the prices in this novel are Japanese yen or something? It would be a huge loss for Japanese yen.

I was poisoned by creating amnesia for the main character just for plot development.

After it was put on the shelves, I felt that it was completely broken. The protagonist's position was unclear and I felt a bit anti-human.