Mysterious Sea: Gou Zai Knight's World Upgrade

The setting is a game "Sail", but the price and other aspects of life must be higher than the protagonist, because if according to the settings in the game, you can pay off your debts in three days and become rich in five days, you can go back to sanity even if you sleep. It is completely unnecessary for the protagonist to go to some kingdom or something, but the other settings can be said to be very similar. But the plot is really... Cheating. I feel like the setting is good, but the plot is too cliche.

After reading the first few chapters, I suddenly felt that what newcomers need before writing a novel is a sense of immersion. Even if the setting is cool and the protagonist is not brought in, it will not be obtained at all. It is like standing on a tall building and looking through the glass at the dock workers below. You see the joy on his face after finishing work, but you can't feel that emotion. Ps: This article gave me inspiration, thank you, keep going. 🎁

I couldn't stand it after reading a few chapters, not to mention other pig-brain overloads. I can't figure out how the civilians on that small island survived? After a hard-working voyage, I only earned more than 20 yuan, delivering goods. It stands to reason that such a high-risk and hard-working profession as a voyageur would be more rewarding than the craftsmen on the island. It costs you more than 10 yuan to stay in a small hotel on the island for half a month. This kind of material can still flow. I have your last name? It would take at least half a month for you to repay pictures like this! Not to mention the dangers encountered at sea, and the time spent on ship maintenance, fuel supply, food and fresh water supply, after deducting the costs, how much money can you make? Then we stayed in a shabby hotel, which cost half the price. You really have to pay for it every time you go overseas, right? Can you refer to the actual price and subtract two zeros from it? I wrote it as soon as my mind got hot, and I really can't stand it.

Knight World, one of the seven major knight families in the kingdom, actually sold the eldest daughter of the family owner for a few hundred gold coins! This woman is still a first-level knight, but the materials needed to upgrade a first-level knight cost thousands of gold coins! Are nobles so disrespectful? Wouldn't it be great to directly marry a big businessman and earn tens of thousands of gold coins directly? ! ! Too unreasonable

Yes, it feels a bit like a sea of ​​mystery to me. Although the writing is a bit green, it doesn't matter. People always grow up little by little. As long as the author writes with heart, thinks with heart, and makes up for the shortcomings, this will be a good book.

The theme setting is very novel. But the content is very simple.

The protagonist is a slave trader, referred to as a human trafficker.

Are you planning to take the daily route? Take in an apprentice and raise her as a daughter. Will something happen to another apprentice later? When you are about to take action, you just happen to find something that is beneficial to you. This is an old routine, right?

Why not take the gold coins and jewels from this world and buy a boat?

It's okay, but the supporting characters are a bit retarded... Maybe it's because of the lack of writing skills.

The worst thing about this book is probably that the male protagonist is too incompetent and has no strength to turn the tide.

I gave up after seeing the part with a knight pretending to be his grandson.

The main problem is that the plot logic of the article is a bit poor, and the characters are not well written. It is really a bit fast food.

The subject matter is good, but the auction is ridiculous.

Die violently. Can't stand 🦶. Those killed violently will be transformed. Result. The protagonist's killing becomes violent. What kind of wisdom is this?

Suoran, you checkmate me, but now it's my turn, if I don't move, I won't lose. 😅😅😅