Douluo Dalu: Starting with a Sword

First of all, Dai Mubai's behavior is considered good among the nobles. There is a high probability that the nobles will not find a commoner. In the real world, rich people change their wives frequently, and there are many women who follow them, let alone the medieval European style Douluo Continent. Therefore, if the protagonist does not have the strength of a titled Douluo, he probably will not be able to win over Dai Mubai.

It fell apart in the later stages, and the author obviously went too far. The golden triangle of strength of more than fifty titled Douluo. It goes without saying what the ingredients are, so don't waste your money.

There is no need to accept Yu Tianheng, who is already close to that good-for-nothing Yu Xiaogang. Why accept him? Be a spy?

Shui Yue'er in the game

Is the protagonist weak and afraid of getting into trouble? Why can I say such things as being merciful and forgiving? When someone with a sword spirit encounters a provocation, he does not want to go back, but masturbates to spare the other person (the author should think carefully about the word "forgiveness" and the context in which it is used, this is obviously a persuasion to others or a word for masturbation)

Reading this novel, I felt it was not a novel. Reading it feels like reading the comments in the comment area

I personally think that instead of keeping a lunatic like Bibi Dong who could rebel at any time, it would be better to kill him and replace him with Qian Renxue as the pope.

Don't think too much that Bibi Dong has changed those Bibi Dong's second settings. Bibi Dong has undergone major changes. It can be said that Bibi Dong has done all kinds of sexy things, including being a white-eyed wolf, wanting to kill his daughter, and being in love. In short, after watching all kinds of sexy operations, I felt like vomiting.

Shui Binger in the game

I haven't read much, so I'm going to give you a hundred or two sentences for comments. There are too many typos, which seriously affect reading, and there are some problems with word combinations in some places. It is recommended that the author has time to overhaul them one by one. There are many things that are not explained clearly. For example, where did the 20 gold after leaving the Holy Soul Village come from? I just became a soul master and I don't have that much savings. These should be explained briefly. Another point is that it may be because the protagonist has no money. The reason for reading the original work is that the connection is not smooth enough in many places (I don't remember it. I wanted to endure reading it at first, but I couldn't bear it anymore). It gives people a sense of abruptness and fragmentation. I still suggest that the author has time to revise each chapter. The result should be much better. The author should be a newcomer. Overall, it is okay, but there are too many flaws, which seriously affects the reading and the performance of the work. There are no big problems, but there are many small problems. That's it. Slip away, see you again by chance