Douluo Dalu: Starting with a Sword

First of all, Dai Mubai's behavior is considered good among nobles. Nobles are unlikely to marry a commoner. In real society, wealthy men frequently change wives, and many women still pursue them, not to mention the customs of medieval Europe in the Douluo Continent. Therefore, if the protagonist doesn't have the strength of a Title Douluo, he probably won't be able to win Dai Mubai's heart.

The story fell apart later on; the author clearly went overboard with wishful thinking. A golden triangle of fifty-odd people fighting against titled Douluo-level opponents... The quality is obvious, don't waste your money.

We don't need to take in that Yu Tianheng anymore. He's already close to that good-for-nothing Yu Xiaogang, why would we take him in? To be a spy?

Shuiyue'er in the game

Is the protagonist's personality weak and afraid of causing trouble? Why would he say something like "forgive and forget"? When provoked, instead of thinking of returning the favor, he indulges in a self-gratifying act of letting the other party go (the author should really think carefully about the context in which "forgive and forget" is used; this is clearly advice to others or something used for self-gratification).

Reading this novel didn't feel like reading a novel to me. It felt more like reading comments in a comment section.

Personally, I think it's better to get rid of Bibi Dong, a madwoman who could betray us at any time, and replace her with Qian Renxue as Pope, rather than keeping her around.

Don't assume Bibi Dong is easily changed; those versions of Bibi Dong are all heavily modified fan-made interpretations. You could say Bibi Dong has done all sorts of outrageous things, including being ungrateful, wanting to kill her daughter, and being obsessed with love. In short, her various outrageous actions are enough to make you want to vomit.

Shui Bing'er in the game

I haven't read much, but I specifically tipped 100 yuan to leave a comment. There are too many typos, which seriously affects reading. Also, some word combinations are problematic. I suggest the author revise them one by one when they have time. There are also many things that are not explained clearly. For example, where did the 20 gold coins come from when leaving Holy Soul Village?