I, Wallfacer Assistant

Tied in one breath. How should I put it, my ability to shape the plot needs to be improved, especially like the article I wrote a few years ago, hahaha. As for hard science fiction, it just beat me up. Nowadays, when reading or writing articles, we are used to not getting stuck on theoretical and scientific bottlenecks. The main point of discussion is where we can do it - humanities, social ideology. So I haven't seen such a real discussion of science for a long time. It reminds me of the feeling of the knowledge in class passing through the brain without leaving any trace 🙂 From the plot and character creation, I feel that this article belongs to the first-person perspective and there is no doubt that there is some aura of the protagonist. The encounters, impressions, and interactions between characters all feel a little flat in terms of emotional intelligence. But it's not impossible that scientific researchers are so unpretentious and put all their energy into their lifelong career. Now I'm crazy about writing political essays. I feel that everyone needs to be careful about scrutiny and testing 😂 I also recommend the book "The Wall Facer: Everyone Wants to Break My Wall" and I also saw the aspect of dictatorship. That book is quite straightforward, going directly through Taylor's son, becoming a capitalist, and beginning to control finance, infrastructure, culture, technology, and military affairs. The plot processing in that book was a bit slow, and it was not as high-level as this one, and it was more entertaining, but there was one factor that this one didn't have - the virtual universe. I don't know if the author started to conceive and create it a few years ago, because in recent years, artificial intelligence, big data, virtual universe, and unreal simulation have become a major focus. I haven't seen this element in the novel yet. I don't know if the author hasn't dabbled in this part or if he thinks that the virtual universe has poor prospects and is of no use. I feel that this virtual universe simulation system is very good and can be extended to technology research and development, home office, education and culture, and war simulation. This step of grabbing people's hearts is actually possible. Education begins in the virtual universe. New humans are born in this virtual universe. That is not the way we live. Whether it is simulating the social framework of a star civilization, or starting to use virtual systems to create various dimensionality reduction strikes to train the army, you can directly break the conventional thinking. Moreover, the troops on the space station may not need anyone who has the image of a strong, tough guy or other composite military personnel. Instead, it is an operator who sits at home and remotely controls, or the information is backed up in many places. If he dies, he can be resurrected immediately in the backup. (Of course, I'm just making up this backup.) Regarding the uploading and downloading of backups of human consciousness, this may be a new chapter. Because it may be related to the direction and ending of the novel, maybe this is a two-dimensional method? In the future, people's consciousness can be stored in hard drives or network clouds, and they no longer need water and oxygen to survive. They can go wherever they want and shuttle among various cosmic death rays. As for this country, I don't know if the author has love or some unique obsession, but after entering the universe, it must not be divided into countries like this, right? The Asia-Pacific community, the Mars community, the space city federation, etc., Must be endless. Is it necessary to distinguish between a nation, a country, and a race? I saw that some comment sections were very noisy. One moment they were wronging China, and the next moment China was taking the lead in the new situation. I really felt it was unnecessary. Yes, our country implements a centralized system, which is very suitable for the space living environment, but the moment the protagonist becomes a Wallfacer, he is no longer a member of the human race and must form a new branch of civilization. Is it necessary to lean towards any political group on earth? Finally, I still support the three-body fandom 😍😍😍. I haven't read science fiction for a long time. I have been reading historical and political articles, and I have been blackened by their ambitious ideas. Looking at it this way, the atmosphere of hard science fiction is purer and more crystal clear. Come on, I'm going to keep it up for a while. I hope I've accumulated more than a hundred chapters when I open it again 😭😭😭

This novel is unique in creativity, full of imagination, and gives people strong inspiration and thinking.

That is to say, I feel that the author has a very unique understanding of the three-body problem, but for this novel, the large amount of output has the feeling of reading a paper, not quite like a novel 🙂🙂🙂. This means that in terms of these understandings, I feel that I have read The Three-Body Problem again and experienced the characters in it. The content is of high quality. But as far as this fan fiction is concerned, there are still some conflicts.

To the author 1 Offending the readers is really not a good choice and does not conform to the reader's psychology and sense of empathy If you write that someone else made this decision, and the protagonist actively fights for the interests of China, it will be more flattering than it is now. The readers are all brought into the protagonist. Everyone has simple patriotic feelings. It is impossible for normal people to sacrifice the people of the motherland to benefit people of other ideologies and still feel at ease. Writing this way is inconsistent with reader psychology. It directly broke everyone's sense of immersion and lost their identification with the protagonist. If you want to write such a story development, you can change it in another way instead of the protagonist himself. The protagonist has to bring up everything by himself, which is a bit too broad and distorts the story. Sometimes it's better to make the protagonist an important player rather than the initiator. (For example, when other people proposed this plan, the protagonist said that China would sacrifice too much and took the initiative to fight for resources for China. In the end, the plan was passed, but with the efforts of the protagonist, the future coalition government will gradually be dominated by China. This way everyone can accept it more) 2 The starting point is wrong and inconsistent with the protagonist's character If the protagonist is really cold-hearted and considers humanity, then it is more important to preserve the lives of China than the West. Because of the state of the Trisolaran universe, China's ideology is obviously more suitable for mankind than the West, and more suitable for mankind to go far. Under such circumstances, one life of China may be more important than the ten lives of inefficient so-called democracy in the West, and even Westerners may have a negative impact in the future. If the protagonist is really cruel, then he should be inclined to preserve China's power as much as possible in this disaster so that mankind can complete the ideological transformation. The protagonist claims to be ruthless for the sake of human beings, but he is also too partial to those inefficient ideological people in the West who suffer the consequences and are harmful to mankind. Instead, it appears to be a double standard. On the contrary, it seems that the protagonist is not the so-called "cold for the sake of human beings", but simply a virgin. 3 Writing like this carries the risk of being blocked Under the current mainstream ideology, writing like this is really seeking death. This kind of national-level action in the book cannot go beyond the top. But now, under the mainstream ideology, the book written allows high-level officials to adopt a plan that does not conform to the mainstream ideology of "sacrifice their own people in vain, just in exchange for the lives of other countries that may die due to their own mistakes." Do you really think people don't dare to block your account?

Very good. What I appreciate the most is the decision not to verify the "Pandora" spell. Trisolaris will block the news and ensure that the spell is in the hands of a few people like a nuclear bomb to avoid bullshit.

I thought I was completing the three bodies. In fact, it is exporting private goods. Looks like I'm writing a novel. Reads like an essay. Nominally for all mankind. In reality, they are non-human. Are you qualified as a novel? Maybe not enough.

This novel contains private goods and is pretty cool.

I read fifty chapters in one go, and I feel that the author's writing of the Three-Body Problem is a bit low, with no strong character, no sense of crisis and oppression, like a stupid monster with a rigid attack mode, not like a BOSS.

It's all praise. I said a few words. I couldn't stand it after reading three chapters. But I read the comments and read three more chapters, but I still couldn't stand it. Maybe I read too many fast-food articles.

In the introduction, the first feeling of a person who travels to the Trisolaran world is not despair, but regret???🤔🤔 →_→

After reading the debate in the comment area, to put it simply, the author arranged a scene in this book where he sacrifices himself to save the world. I understand the author's mentality of "no borders, unity, for the overall good". I generally understand the author's desire to show the protagonist's ruthlessness. How to show that the protagonist is fair and honest without taking advantage of one's own people, a feeling similar to that of a cruel official. It's a pity that I don't have enough pen power to express that feeling. However, this scene of Buddha cutting meat to feed eagles will definitely be disliked or even boycotted. After all, the butt determines the head, and this kind of thinking (which can be regarded as persuasion in novels) is to persuade others to sacrifice themselves for the sake of the world. It's really too idealistic. After all, even if you replaced this with any other country, it would be impossible for others to accept it. It can only be said that the ideal is very full, but the reality is very skinny. The full ideal is expressed through realistic scenes. It has become the carnivore of Bai Zuo thought. Because it is reflected in the original text of Three-Body Problem. The Wallface Project has no borders, but the Wallfacers have nationalities.

Do you know how to take the overall situation into consideration? Actively withstand the largest storm, although you will lose a lot of industries, a lot of economy, and maybe some people, but the implementation of the policy must be at all costs, and you are that price 🙂 On the other hand, locking everyone in a shelter is convenient for management, which is conducive to social stability, and you are a factor of instability 😰 When it comes to post-disaster reconstruction, all the previous shoddy projects and bad debts have been wiped out by the storm. Post-disaster reconstruction requires a lot of money and funds, and there is abundant oil and water everywhere. People in high positions can always see the good side, but you at the bottom certainly cannot see it 😁

The immaturity of the writing style or the rigidity of the plot can be resolved by the author's solid theoretical foundation. It is a good book.

A suggestion to the author: The most important thing about The Three-Body Problem is not how many foreshadowings and details are buried, but Liu's opening sentence: This is a modern history of China measured on the scale of light years. Of course, I personally feel that this is limited to the first two parts, and the third part is already a prediction.

This kind of plot is unnecessary,,, even if China needs to sacrifice, it does not need to be guided by the protagonist. The future of the Chinese people can be determined by the Chinese people themselves, not guided by the protagonist. This is a very poisonous point. Isn't the protagonist always arrogant and prejudiced when he does this? Whether the author wants to pay now and receive in the future, the protagonist should not be asked to propose it, but China itself. When you write this, it seems that the protagonist is too double-standard and too arrogant.

The writing is like a serious science fiction novel, which is very good. When I read it, I felt like I was back in high school when I read Science Fiction World and The Three-Body Problem.

The author made a big mistake. He originally wrote well in the early stage, but after one chapter, he basically quit. At present, it is better to just cut it off.

Oops, late. The author has written more than 900,000 words, and they are all finished.

If there is no premise of annexation and integration of regional resources by major powers, and convening a meeting of representatives from more than a hundred countries to discuss saving civilization, the result will be back-and-forth without execution.

Overall, it's good Ten-year veteran certification

Is the author interested in writing a new book?

Can you write about other universes of Da Liu? I feel like I can continue writing

There is a tail left at the end. The final ending of the Trisolaran civilization is not written out (whether it reaches other universes through the black hole or is annihilated). Personally, I feel that the ending is a bit abrupt.

The writing is average, the narration is average The concept and realm are average The dialogue is bad I haven't read it, but the first few chapters are inexplicably analyzing emotions and psychology, and the logical dialogue is even more off-kilter. How can you talk like this? It gave me the feeling that it was like watching a performance in a drama, even more exaggerated There was no twist at all, it was very abrupt.

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

Compared to strategy, we readers prefer to read about science and technology. We recommend reading other science and technology novels and similar novels about the Three-Body Problem to find inspiration. We hope to see all kinds of novel technologies.

All development is for the purpose of jumping out of the universe. Even outside the universe there are dark forests. Everything is for survival. The only way to avoid being destroyed is to be strong.

Comrades, do you have any recommendations that are better written about this kind of battle of wits?

It doesn't look good, and I don't really want to subscribe... But I can't say what's not good about it, it just doesn't look good enough for me to be willing to spend money 😥

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