Gou Zai Wanjie Liver's Experience

It's very good compared to similar works, keep up the hard work! ! Success is at hand! !

The writing is quite good, but the transition is a bit unsmooth, and the description of the woman feels like I want to use color, but I can't, and the Wu Dalang one confused me.

Let's give a brief review. For now, the overall smoothness is okay, but the scene changes are too stiff, and every time the scene changes, the protagonist seems to be a different person, especially Xu Changsheng in the prison cell. It feels like; paying with copper coins for street business, peacekeeping with mechanical planes flying in the sky, and hysterical settings. . . . . I won't go into too much detail on this point, everyone knows it. Generally speaking, it's like a cream cake mixed with stones, and when it feels lubricated, there are stones that stick to you. .

It is well written, the plot has ups and downs, is full of novelty, and the characters are vivid. It is worth reading! Welcome to return to visit the new work "The Illusionist of the Tang Dynasty", give more valuable opinions, exchange and learn, and improve together🌻

Thank you for recommending my book "No matter how clever you are, I can wholesale opportunities", come and read it.

The seedlings are small, so please water them more and don't raise books. The new book issue is very important. Everything depends on the reading data. I hope readers take some time to catch up with the latest chapters. Only by reading can you be motivated.

Come on, come and read it, and by the way, I would like to borrow a valuable piece of information to recommend "I picked up this book and traveled through time, are there any questions?"

The writing is good, the plot has ups and downs, and the characters have outstanding personalities. Come on, let's encourage each other!

Immortal Immortality comes to support, hehe, happy May Day😁

The new book still needs to be polished carefully. If there are any deficiencies, they will be gradually revised and improved in future chapters. Book friends are welcome to give their valuable opinions. It is very important to read the new book issue. Friends who like this book, please remember to save it.