From the Late Qing Dynasty to the Twenty-First Century

This novel is very good, the combination of science fiction and fantasy is not awkward at all. The plot is not too bad either, I like it very much. It's rare to find such a good work in Qidian. I hope it won't collapse later, keep up the good work, and will definitely become a god

If you have any opinions, or if you think it's poisonous, put it here. I've deleted all the outside stuff. Here you can teach me how to do things, but not outside. Outside, it's for discussing plots and ideas.

Author, did you write this subject to seek abuse? In the Republic of China, if you want to write more interestingly, you will be banned. If you don't want to be banned, just write step by step. I might as well read history books (for seventh to eighth grade) history textbooks.

To be honest, I hope the protagonist is Du Chaofan

I thought that the late Qing Dynasty and the early Republic of China were revolutions. And then suddenly there is a system? I thought it was industrial industry. And then suddenly started practicing Qi? I thought he was an anti-Japanese hero. And then suddenly aliens? 😰

I thought the setting was funny even without watching it. From the late Qing Dynasty to the present, history has not changed, which means that you are getting worse at your age!

Looking at the title of the book, and then looking at the title of your chapter, I am really confused. I am afraid you have rewritten the outline. It really has nothing to do with the late Qing Dynasty and the early Republic of China, and you are fooling me

I read Chapter 42. Overall, it looks like a running account. It's bland and uninteresting. I still don't know what the protagonist is going to do in the future. There is no main plot at all and there isn't even a short-term goal. There's really no need to do this.

The details are not very good, but a transcendent whose spiritual power covers the entire solar system and even has room for it, not only knows everything within the coverage area, but at least knows everything that is known. He even said that he didn't know some of the knowledge of the two grandsons who had returned from studying abroad.

The author is awesome. At the beginning, he was still standing still, but in the end, the out-of-body fugue was too imaginary. The span was so big, and then there was the mental pollution suspected of being Cthulhuli. What a damn good editor. The writing really needs more practice, but it is really wonderful.

The concept is good, but the writing style is too poor and the writing is not good, making it a bit unreadable. If the writing style were better, it would actually be a good novel.

I can't understand, I can't figure out what the author is thinking. It's not coherent at all. I'm going here and there.

The writing is not very good, the story is good, but the writing is like a running account!

If you write like this, will anyone pay to subscribe? It's like writing a running account

What are you writing about? The plot is incoherent.

After reading Chapter 43, don't build power or cause trouble. What is your selling point? Revisit the decadence of the Qing Dynasty? Revisit the invasion of foreign powers? You can't write history to change it. You can spread your branches and expand your family. If it gets bigger, it can spread all over the world. If it gets smaller, it can spread to Northeast Asia and South Asia. You can also form a world-class exposed business association (behind-the-scenes consortium) No matter how simple it is, you can write two to three thousand chapters.

Open the periodic table of elements and look left and right. Most of them are the names of Zhu Yuanzhang's descendants.

Recommended words: Reborn during the Jiaqing period of the Qing Dynasty, he became a young grain merchant. From reading and reading to going to school, to practicing martial arts and spiritual cultivation to become an expert in cultivating the universe, Shen Luoxing experienced so much! There is a limerick saying~~~ Reborn as a martial artist in Jiaqing, and settled in Qinglianding from then on. Immortality is holy, The Master of Yangkun is Shen Luoxing. Book title: From the late Qing Dynasty to the 21st century Author: Companion Reading Xiaobaozi Type: Fantasy·High Martial Arts World Tags: Rebirth, cultivation, spiritual recovery, big imagination, dark belly Words Number: 150,000 words Personal thoughts: I feel it is too bland, although when the protagonist was young, he went to the study to steal his father Liu Beiwen because of a system task, and it was not discovered. After that, he killed the thief and arrested the drug dealer. The writing is good, but it doesn't have too much water, so it just doesn't feel interesting enough. After that, when the protagonist's father died, he said that the protagonist was born a saint, but what about the process of becoming a saint? It feels like the current protagonists are a bit like the Ancient One Master in the movie, eager and protective! So why can't we stop? Enjoy life! So until now I feel that the author is in a hurry, as if he can't wait to open a bigger curtain {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}

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