I Am a Villain, I Choose to Show Off

I had already ordered it all, until I saw that in the last 30 chapters, the male protagonist was suddenly and inexplicably seduced by the seductress, and then got into bed for no reason. I thought he would be able to tell the difference, and be able to analyze things rationally like before, and separate liking from being tempted. But you told me that they were entangled, and they were entangled for such a long time. I really couldn't understand it, so I ate chocolate with me, and then you told me that there was shit in it, and you asked me to taste it, which was very uncomfortable. The last 30 of your pictures, if you really can't do it, you can read "My Wife is a Passerby Villain". If you read 100 chapters of that book, I think you are awesome. His uncomfortable writing style makes me feel more uncomfortable than these few chapters of yours, but it's almost the same. 😥😥😥

Advantages of the novel: The logic is good, there are no imbecile plots, and the plot and writing are smooth, natural, and reasonable. The settings are thoughtfully designed and not obtrusive. The description even has the shadow of documentary literature (of course I am not educated, so my statement may be a bit exaggerated) Disadvantages: The slow construction of the characters leads to flatness, the plot is too flat and dull, the anti-routine is not dramatic, and the flat description leads to less intense conflicts. (For example, in Qitianjiao, the protagonist actually becomes emotional, which can make readers feel a sense of crisis) Suggestion: Increase the description of communication between characters, psychological description (the influence and changes of people's emotions, thoughts, and behaviors, not all stay in the protagonist's thoughts, what he thinks It makes readers tired to read); the emotional support of the people and things around them (although the routine is old, it has been tried and tested many times), try to mobilize emotions to create excitement, rather than documentary descriptions of settings and system choices; anti-routine articles should highlight the anti-routine and be different from conventional ideas, but also further solve the mystery to create excitement. It can be seen that the author has his own ideas about the plot and buried a lot of things, but it has been buried for too long; the writing perspective is too objective and fair, and there is no additional information for the readers, which is not easy to satisfy the readers' sense of superiority... Conflict is the biggest problem: the exchange of ideas between the protagonist and the heroine, the protagonist's The main conflict of the male protagonist, the distinct psychological activities of the protagonist, and other issues are all expressed from an objective perspective, which is completely unsatisfactory. The male protagonist, female protagonist, and protagonist gave me the feeling that they are three robots. They just complete what they have to do in a formula and follow the systematic plot, with few personal emotions and thoughts. This point urgently needs to be corrected... In a novel, the novel plot setting is very attractive, but the collision between people can often make readers stay and see the direction of the story (because readers will be involved, but they don't like to use their brains, and hope that the protagonist can make judgments and decisions that fit the reader's emotions). I hope the author can focus his perspective appropriately on "people" rather than the reasonableness of settings and logic.

Full subscription + monthly pass, the daily life of Chen Changying and Junior Sister Jiang is very interesting, it reminds me a little of Jasmine's "Who is not a practitioner". If this kind of daily life can be written all the way to the end, I will continue to follow it.

Book title: "I am a villain, and I choose to show off" Author: Lao Liuxiashan Tag: time travel, system flow, easy Comprehensive recommendation index: ★★★☆More than dry food, not enough food (Writing: ★★★☆; Plot: ★★★★; Setting: ★★★☆) (I am less interested in cultivating immortals, and my heart test scores) Book review: "As long as I show off, simplicity is true." Chen Changying thought so. Of course, in this world, Chen Changying is the protagonist. Rather than saying that the "brain option" system is the initiator every time, it is better to say that every choice is the answer to Chen Changying's self-questioning: Don't fight for intrigues, don't fight for fame and fortune, just two words, just show off! Thinking of this world with impetuous people, there is a sense of Zen in having such a "brain selection" system. The writing is online, the characters can clearly see their own characteristics, and the names of the attribute points are indeed a bit plain, but the plot is still eye-catching. The 800,000-word text is already fat enough to be slaughtered. {"TopicId":"804728532092780544","TopicName":"Book Famine Terminator"}

This introduction? ? I work hard just to feel like I can earn 100 yuan a month? ? ?

Is it really a show? A lot of it is just lip service.

Isn't this introduction just for the good, not the worst?

It's well written. Come on, author. It's rare to see a protagonist who uses his brain to analyze the situation. He's not brainless and systematic. I hope the emotional scenes will be better written, I want them all 🙂

Should the author try to write a pure campus romance novel? The rhythm of interpersonal communication is actually quite good, but the collapse of the force value is a bit uncomfortable. . .

The main focus is to accompany you when you put it on the shelf.

When I saw Chapter 78, the enchantress who transformed into a god and the saint who established the foundation played truth or dare. This plot was really bullshit.

The author is a little confused after reading these pictures, I hope there will be explanations later I feel that three is enough, and adding more harems is really boring.

Since Muhaocha appeared, the system has not been exposed. I suspect that Muhaocha has its own aura of mirror, flower, water, and moon, and the people around him automatically enter a half-dream and half-awake state. The protagonists seem to be awake but are actually sleepwalking, so they cannot see the system reminder. They are waiting to be awakened by the system one day or Muhaocha leaves by himself🤪

Is it really a show? Dear fellow Taoists, many of them go around pretending to be holy in the name of showing off.

My favorite part is still the part where she and Jiang Hongli become slowly Taoist companions. It's quite sweet. Later, Jiang Jiang becomes a passerby heroine 😭 Can you give her more scenes? She is the real wife.

The understanding of the realm is a bit strange. In the foundation building stage, you can get something equivalent to the god transformation stage. How to write it in the later stage? Change the map to update the realm, and then have an upper realm immortal or something.

The writing style is average and suitable for readers who like to choose the three-opening type. I can only say that it is a good book, but it is not suitable for me. The purpose of posting is to prevent scams in the comment area

? Why not choose one? You don't want to become an immortal, you don't want to sleep in the palace of heaven, wake up to hold the power of the world, and sleep in the lap of a beautiful woman? Then why are you traveling across time?

The protagonist's IQ is online, so he wouldn't choose third place without thinking. Is the author a newbie? This book looks a bit like "I just don't play by the rules"

It's so funny that I just saw that the paid chapters were limited to free. I thought I had read it wrong.

The protagonist is in the foundation-building stage, so it is best not to mention any Mahayana monks, otherwise it will appear that Mahayana monks are in the street and have no time to pay attention to some foundation-building brat. I have seen the best setting for the teacher-inheritance relationship, that is, during the foundation-building period, one can become a disciple of the Jindan period. After forming the elixir, the master and the Jindan master can call each other Taoist friends. At this time, they can become a disciple of Yuanying... And so on...

You have to give the system a character card. Although it only has a panel and options, the system mother feeds the strategy, and you worry about the protagonist's future and the protagonist's relationship. It's worth it 🥺

Just write more emotional lines. There is love in the immortal cultivator, but who likes to watch people using elixirs to kill people and seize opportunities?

Has Elder Yu come out? He's so kind to the male protagonist, I'm looking forward to it

It was still very interesting before I subscribed

This book is difficult to evaluate. As an emotional novel, it is remarkable. As a novel about cultivating immortals, it is a bit too simple. The system is quite satisfactory. Maybe the author's outline and setting are too simple, and the third perspective of the protagonist of The Chosen Son is not obvious.

It's very uncomfortable to break a sentence. Why do you have to break a complete sentence? It's so sad to see.

To be honest, after reading Chapter 70, the overall concept is okay, but it is too bland, like boiled water, there are no ups and downs, there is only blandness.

It's okay to write, but there's something wrong with your name. It's fake.

I didn't expect that it would be finished as soon as I kept raising it I still want to see Aunt Yu's