Investiture of the Gods: Yang Jian Reborn, Racing All the Way

When we are reborn as Yang Jian, let's call him Yang Jian, not Lin Bufan anymore.

This author is completely using quotations indiscriminately, without any feeling, but it will only be awkward. For example, the sentence about double pupils is the road to invincibility is not coordinated at all. If you want to change it, make it smoother. For example, although double pupils are the road to invincibility, I have no fear even if I have three eyes. Another example is the changed sentence. I hold the sun and moon in my hands to pick up stars. There is no such person as me in the world. Can you change it to a god? Is it appropriate? Although there are not many gods who can hold the sun and moon and pick up stars, there are also quite a few. Do you think it is appropriate for you to become a god like this? Why don't you hold the ancient palm of heaven in your hand? There is no immortal like me in the world. Although it's a bit crazy and a bit suicidal, at least it won't be so embarrassing.

The early writing was very silly and funny, but unfortunately the part about going to Chaoge to be a national teacher shocked me quite a bit. . . The coolness is there later on, but it's not enough to be ridiculous. . . It's a bit tasteless.

If you don't get 30 pictures, you'll be charged. Isn't this a Qidian book?

All I can say to the author is that you are such an invincible parallel importer! Really capable of water

Can the heroine have Princess Long Ji? This couple has been cute for a long time!

The author writes very well, come on, come on, come on, come on

Does anyone know how much the author orders per month? I also want to write a fanfic about Yang Jian recently, but I don't know the market price

If you don't get the treasured gold and the sea-defining pearl, you can get the golden dragon scissors.

Can the first person be directly changed to Yang Jian? It's also Lin Bufan. It's awkward to read.